pending Najim_Husent [NURIA]

[Ardi Abdurrahman]

Najim_Husent

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     On July 24, 1996 a child was born with the name Najim Husent he was born in Chicago. Both of his parents worked in a liquor factory in Chicago, his parents worked under pressure because the wages they received at that time were very small considering that alcohol was illegal at that time. Najim Husent did not know the work of his parents and his parents also kept this work a secret from Najim Husent considering that Najim Husent was a devout child who worshiped and often went to church on Sunday mornings until one day Najim Husent came home from church and saw his parents working in a liquor factory, Najim Husent's parents chased him and explained the difficult family circumstances to Najim Husent and he began to accept what work his parents did. Moving on when the unstable teenager Najim Husent plunged into the dark world, he began to distribute illegal goods and he also had a police friend who he always asked for help when carrying out his buying and selling actions. Najim Husent was so good at smuggling and distributing illicit goods that he was often in and out of prison when he was a teenager which is a shame because he fell into this black hole several times his friend wanted to recruit Najim Husent as a police officer but he still refused.

     

     During the police recruitment period, the local police recruited very talented children and required a large number of police personnel, which forced Najim Husent to be recruited, as there were many street gangs at that time. His parents supported Najim Husent to join the police. After becoming a police officer, Najim Husent's character began to change, but not with his attitude of smuggling illegal goods. Every time he confiscated illegal goods, he would resell them and earn easy money. That was how Najim Husent went through difficult times in Chicago for several years and in the end he decided to leave the Chicago police force with the excuse that he would move to a new city called Los Santos.

 

     1 year has passed, now he is 25 years old, the right time to start establishing himself going to the city of Los Santos. At that time, his parents were ill, but that did not discourage him from moving to a new city. After arriving in Los Santos Najim Husent received news that his parents had died and he was depressed, he tried to contact his old friend at the Chicago police, Barney Liebert, who is now reportedly undergoing police training in the city. Dan Barney was concerned and introduced him to his friends, namely Marc, Hector, Icuna, and Steven, where Najim Husent felt that he had the same fate as them and Najim Husent intended to work in Los Santos.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
NURIA

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Ardi Abdurrahman

 

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Saya Ardi Abdurrahman selaku pemilik account UCP NURIA bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Najim_Husent) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited December 2, 2022 by Ardi Abdurrahman

[Xavani]

Under review.

[Ardi Abdurrahman]

siap admin di tunggu reviewnya

[Xavani]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[Ardi Abdurrahman]

1. Kedua kalinya, sebelumnya cs awal tidak di tanggapi oleh admin dan telah lewat  dari 7 hari 

2. 1 sampai 3 bulan

3.Baru dibuat

4. Tidak

5. Tidak

6. Di warnet

[Xavani]

Hal yang harus di perbaiki adalah sebagai berikut

1. Perkecil fotomu
2. Tambahkan 5 spasi di awal paragraf pertama, lalu selaraskan pada paragraf ke 2 dan ke 3.
3. Masih ada tanda baca yang kurang tepat, mohon di perbaiki.

[Ardi Abdurrahman]

untuk semua kesalahan sudah saya ubah dengan sebagaimana semestinya

[Xavani]

Jawab dengan jujur, kamu mengenal UCP JARJUNI?

[Ardi Abdurrahman]

untuk UCP JARJUNI itu milik kakak saya, untuk UCP NURIA ini milik saya pribadi, untuk IP memang sama karna saat daftar dan main saya main di satu prangkat yang digunakan kakak saya, apa harus saya cantumkan UCP kakak saya yang bernama JARJUNI?

[Xavani]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Ardi Abdurrahman,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Xavani
JG:RP Helper Team