Jack1177 Posted November 27, 2022 Posted November 27, 2022 Darius Wells Darius Wells is a man who was born in Los Santos December 5, 1997 in Glen Park. Darius Wells was a kid from William Wells and Olivia Lilly. Darius was a man who had a criminal family background. William Wells, his father was a man who controlled a crime organization on Las Venturas. Darius Wells spend his childhood in Los Santos, but when he was a teen, he followed his parents move up to Las Venturas. William wasn’t a criminal who wanted to made his hands to got dirty, he was a man who did something with clean hands and did something smoothly. Darius learned many things from his father especially in crimes activity. It was like threatning, frauding, murdering, money laundry and some things about bar. William wanted his son, Darius, to be his next successor who led his crime organization which was he usually called by “Business”. Darius was an obedient son, but when his father talked about his wish, Darius always answer him that he didn’t wanted to. It was because Darius relationship with his father was not so good at all. Darius didn’t wanted to be a guy who worked behind the table, he was a type of person who want to worked in a field. Because of that, William always assumed that Darius was his “Epic Fail Ever”. Darius was closer with his uncle, Johnny Rios. Johnny, his uncle was a guy who worked in a garage. Because Johnny was a guy who worked in a garage, Johnny had many knowledge about vehicle in his head, especially about motocycle. Because Darius was closer with his uncle, Darius always learned something about motocycle from his uncle. His uncle always picked up him to got a night riding when he finished his job in garage. His Father, William, didn't like that relationship between Darius and Johnny. Because he assumed that Johnny affected Darius. In a night, when Darius and his uncle did a night riding, there are 2 people did drive-by on Johnny when they near with Johnny’s chopper. Johnny just fell off from his motocycle. Darius who ride a chopper too behind his uncle's motocycle got shock when he saw that incident. After saw his uncle met his dead on that place, Darius immediately chase that 2 people whose ride 1 motocycle. Darius slides out his glock 19 that he got from his father and then shoot his uncle murder with that. Before killed one of the murder, Darius interrogated him. He asked him who the guy send him to kill his uncle. The murder said that Darius's father the guy who send him. Darius feel sad because his lovely uncle was dead. He burried him. After that, he went to Los Santos again for the second time in his life to got a new life. He chose to leave his family. He didn't wanted to meet his father again, especially after his uncle, Johnny, got murdered by his father. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/243051-cn-bryan_harvey-to-darius_wells-rey11/ Account UCP yang saya miliki: Rey11 Account Forum yang saya miliki:Jack1177 Saya Jack1177 selaku pemilik account UCP Rey11 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Darius Wells) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Northiz Posted November 27, 2022 Posted November 27, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Jack1177 Posted November 27, 2022 Author Posted November 27, 2022 3 jam yang lalu, juliokasam said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Namechange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Rumah
Northiz Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 Hi @Jack1177, I reviewed there are need some revision, following: Make a Justify format on your grammar. Give 5 spaces on first sentences of paragraph, make it on all the paragraph your grammar. Some sentences needs changed to be past tense. Only that the instruction to revision from me, hoping you make it well like as your character name, Darius Well(s).
Jack1177 Posted November 28, 2022 Author Posted November 28, 2022 40 minutes ago, Northiz said: Hi @Jack1177, I reviewed there are need some revision, following: Make a Justify format on your grammar. Give 5 spaces on first sentences of paragraph, make it on all the paragraph your grammar. Some sentences needs changed to be past tense. Only that the instruction to revision from me, hoping you make it well like as your character name, Darius Well(s). Done and there are some change to make the character background more make sense. Thank you!
Northiz Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 Apparently during the revision that I instruction, you made a new mistake, don't it just one mistake, for the last touch: On 11/27/2022 at 4:27 PM, Jack1177 said: Darius Wells The name subject (Darius Wells), make it to center format.
Jack1177 Posted November 28, 2022 Author Posted November 28, 2022 27 minutes ago, Northiz said: Apparently during the revision that I instruction, you made a new mistake, don't it just one mistake, for the last touch: On 27/11/2022 at 16.27, Jack1177 said: Darius Wells The name subject (Darius Wells), make it to center format. Forgot about it, done. Thank you!
Northiz Posted November 28, 2022 Posted November 28, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Jack1177, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Northiz JG:RP Helper Team
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