pending Lazlo_Mccarthy [CangCutGede]

[Grow]

Lazlo_Mccarthy

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   In 1998 a baby boy came into the world named Lazlo McCarthy, he was born on August 19, 2001 Chicago. He was born into a family that can be considered simple and not rich, at the age of five, his father died due to a plane crash from Mexico to Chicago. At the age of exactly 6 years his mother remarried to a man and his adoptive father often tortured him physically with various blunt tools, there he was so mentally crushed and depressed by his adoptive father that he thought of committing suicide so that he would not be tormented again with his adoptive father. But he gave up his intention because he thought if he died then who would protect his mother instead of his abusive adoptive father.

 

   At the age of six he entered a government-owned elementary school that did not pay tuition, while he was attending school he also tried to work as a mechanic in a repair shop near his house and he was looking for money so he could help his mother to support their living because his adoptive father was only understands spending money and doesn't want to earn a dime for his family. As time goes by, Lazlo's skills are increasing and he also doesn't forget to stay in school so that he has enough achievements for his future. In junior high school he was bullied because his father was gone and he only had an adoptive father who was a drunk and useless, he became a loser who had no friends. In the second grade of junior high school when he came home from school and from work he found his mother had died then he reported it to the police, after being examined his mother took very excessive drugs until he overdosed and died. That's when he felt very devastated because he had lost the only person he loved so much, then he ran away from home and lived in the workshop where he worked and from there he went to school so that he could continue his achievements and the death of his mother was the motivation for him to be able to raise the status of his family even though his efforts are not much.

 

   Lazlo McCarthy always won in his class and overall champion in his school so that he got a scholarship until he finished his junior high school, at the age of sixteen he entered vocational high school with a scholarship that he got from his achievements in junior high school. He chose to major in automotive in order to broaden his horizons, then he studied hard and worked diligently. In the second grade of vocational high school he received a letter that one of his classmates liked him, he felt embarrassed and started a love affair with the woman. When he entered the third grade he found his girlfriend having an affair with a rich and handsome man in his class and it made his heart very upset and heartbroken, he returned to focus on studying and as a result he got first place in general and class as well as a scholarship to study at Shoreline Community College, precisely in Washington DC, and he took the major that he was pursuing, namely Automotive.

 

   After starting his lectures in Washington DC, he actively studied about vehicles in his field, after entering the day where he had to attend a field work training period he returned to his hometown, Chicago and applied as a temporary field worker at his workshop which is old. After completing his training, he returned to Washington DC and gave a report from his training to his supervisor. After he graduated and got a satisfactory Grade Point Average, namely Cumlaude, he got a call to work in a repair shop in the city of Los Santos with a pretty decent salary. Then he went to the airport and bought a flight ticket to Los Santos, and from there he developed himself even more deeply.

This story will continue along with the in-game storyline

   

 

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 Tahun Lebih

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
CangCutGede

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Grow

 

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Saya Grow selaku pemilik account UCP CangCutGede bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Lazlo_Mccarthy) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited November 11, 2022 by Grow

[$supernovasonic$]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol  pada toolbar di atas.
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
   Spoiler

   

    

 

[Grow]

Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Tidak
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 3 Tahun Lebih
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Buat baru
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak
6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Di rumah

Edited November 9, 2022 by Grow

[$supernovasonic$]

Apakah UCP atas nama Saud milik anda?

[Grow]

1 hour ago, supernovasonic said:

Apakah UCP atas nama Saud milik anda?

tidak sama sekali, dan saya tidak mengetahui UCP tersebut

[$supernovasonic$]

Baik tolong diperbaiki :

1. On 11/9/2022 at 5:03 AM, Grow said:

   Account UCP yang saya miliki:
   Tidak ada

   Tolong tuliskan UCP yang anda miliki.

2. Tolong perhatikan kembali penulisan kata setelah tanda Titik (.). Tolong gunakan huruf Kapital setelah penggunaan Titik (.)

[Grow]

5 minutes ago, supernovasonic said:

Baik tolong diperbaiki :

1. Tolong tuliskan UCP yang anda miliki.

2. Tolong perhatikan kembali penulisan kata setelah tanda Titik (.). Tolong gunakan huruf Kapital setelah penggunaan Titik (.)

Done Sir

[$supernovasonic$]

Tolong diperbaiki :

1. ...adoptive father the. > Penulisan penggalan kalimat tersebut kurang tepat.
2. ...workshop. which... > Masih belum diperbaiki

[Grow]

38 minutes ago, supernovasonic said:

Tolong diperbaiki :

1. ...adoptive father the. > Penulisan penggalan kalimat tersebut kurang tepat.
2. ...workshop. which... > Masih belum diperbaiki

Sorry For that mistake sir.

Sudah saya  perbaiki

[$supernovasonic$]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Grow,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@supernovasonic
JG:RP Helper Team