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[CN] Jorge_Cortez to Leon_Pozo (fero)


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UCP Name: fero

Old Character: Jorge_Cortez

Old Character Story:

 


New Character: Leon_Pozo

Gender: Laki-laki (Male)

Origin: Mexican

 


Reason for name change request:

selesai rp di fng Unholy dan ingin mencoba fng lain.

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

Spoiler

4 days Jorge Cortez was not in town because of important things in Mexico, when Jorge arrived in town suddenly Martin Cortez informed him by telephone. That's where Jorge's feelings were not good, finally Jorge came to Martin in a hurry which he thought was very important. Then they chatted for a while because Martin thought this was important with a face that was no longer pleasing to the eye he invited him to a more comfortable place.

And that's where Jorge took Martin to the nearest bar in Ganton. When the two of them got there Martin was talking about an incident that really shocked Jorge, namely about the last time the Unholy Gathered. And Martin told Jorge that some of them died and some were in prison by the Police, when Jorge heard the story from Martin he slowly shed tears. Jorge was also very disappointed because he was not there at the time of the incident, fortunately Martin was still alive and had just been released from prison. Then Jorge took Martin to visit Fredico Howard's grave one last time.

After arriving there Jorge still did not expect because of the incident, and apologized to Fredico and let them all go. After leaving the Grave and on the way Jorge talked to Martin a little with unstoppable emotions, and at the same time Jorge saw someone in the old house. Martin also with a confused mind told Jorge that it was the person who killed Ramon, Jorge approached with his emotions and an annoyed look on his face. Then he didn't talk much and didn't think much of it either. Jorge beat the man. And the accused person was very angry with Jorge and Martin, then that person took out a knife and stabbed Jorge and Martin's body and finally they both died.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

Posted

1. sudah

2. sudah

3. sudah

4. karena setengah anggota Unholy MC mati dan akhirnya Jorge melampiaskan Kekecewaanya kepada orang yang tidak bersalah.

5. sudah

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Your name change has been approved, please use command '/autocn' while inside Admin-Jail to automatically process your name change.

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