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Fredico_Maxwell


 

 

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     Introduce the name Fredico Maxwell comes from the American city of Washington D.C aged 21years Fredico has parents named Revaldy Maxwell and John Hathaway and Fredico has a male brother named Zayn Finley who is 30 years old when Fredico is 15 years old, Fredico is always guarded by his brother with all his affection. One day, Fredico has a problem with gang bloods whereas Older is a member of crips. When Fredico returned home from school, there were Five bloods members waiting for Fredico outside his school, the person waiting for Fredico was someone who had a problem with Fredico suddenly Fredico was strangled and, beaten by the, bloods member and then Fredico tried to escape from the blows of the the bloods member Fredico ran around in a hurry suddenly when he came on his motorbike asking what the bloods member was doing and Fredico explained it from the initial core until, the end older immediately told Fredico to get on his motorcycle but the bloods member beat the two until his motorcycle fell and then when his motorcycle fell suddenly and Federico immediately picked up the Deagle then fired at all the bloods members, four members of the bloods were hit by Fredico's older shot but 1 person managed to escape and complained to the bloods leader.

 

     When Fredico was 16 years old, Fredico was taking shelter outside his rainy school with his Inder. Suddenly the bloods member who ran away still remembered the problem of Fredico the bloods member was with his friend and then the bloods member immediately approached Fredico quickly The bloods member immediately talked about the problem and the four members bloods were dead in the hands of his brother Fredico Older Fredico immediately pushed down the bloods member and then Fredico beat the bloods member's friend until he fainted after the bloods member's friend passed out, Fredico and Fredico rushed to leave the scene. Suddenly the bloods member came and fired at his brother Fredico older sibling Fredico was shot by a nest bullet in his chest, making his brother Fredico die Fredico tried to escape from the bloods member to the crips headquarters 5 min, Fredico reached the crips headquarters crying and all the crips members asked what happened and then Fredico immediately told his story from the core to the end and the crips member would take revenge after graduating from his school.

 

     Fredico graduated from school and was in a hurry to get home from school. While on the way Fredico accidentally passed the scene of his deceased Olderand then Fredico was saddened by remembering the incident. When he got home at exactly 8 o'clock in the evening Fredico immediately went to bed and dreamed of his dead brother. Said his brother Fredico, redico is the continuation of the life of the Older even though the Older is dead then Fredico immediately wakes up from the dream and rushes to speed to the, crips headquarters to buy AK-47 weapons after buying AK-47 weapons then Fredico invites crips members to carry out their revenge on the bloods members. Fredico directly brings classic cars Savannah to approach the Bloods headquarters. Arriving at the bloods headquarters Fredico immediately approached all the bloods members and then fired using AK-47 Half of the bloods members died as a result of his AK-47 shots then the rest fled the scene. Fredico has the same skills as older sobling Fredico, immediately got into the car carrying his AK-47 with his friend. Suddenly the police came to cross Fredico and then Fredico tried to escape from the policeman Fredico stuck in the gas and started to escape the police, suddenlyhis AK-47 shots then the rest fled the scene. Fredico has the same skills as older sobling Fredico immediately got into the car carrying his AK-47 with his friend. Suddenly the police came to cross Fredico and then Fredico tried to escape from the policeman Fredico stuck in the gas and started to escape the police, suddenly 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Yes

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Domba123

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:
Fredico Maxwell

 


 

Saya Fredico Maxwell selaku pemilik account UCP Domba123 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Fredico_Maxwell) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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Posted
On 11/5/2022 at 12:40 PM, Fredico Maxwell said:

sedankan

Ini kalimat apa? mohon di perbaiki

On 11/5/2022 at 12:40 PM, Fredico Maxwell said:

Fredico suddenly

tambahkan koma di antara kalimat tersebut.

On 11/5/2022 at 12:40 PM, Fredico Maxwell said:

fell suddenly older Fredico took Deagle

Perbaiki kata ini. Masih gak nyambung.

On 11/5/2022 at 12:40 PM, Fredico Maxwell said:

4member

Perbaiki kata ini

 

Dan masih banyak penggunaan tanda baca yang salah, mohon di perbaiki.

Posted
On 11/5/2022 at 12:40 PM, Fredico Maxwell said:

5minan

Ini kata apa?

 

Di cek lagi yang benar, kalau masih ada salah lagi. Saya denied.

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Fredico Maxwell,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Xavani
JG:RP Helper Team

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