Liberty28 Posted October 23, 2022 Posted October 23, 2022 Diego_Cortez Diego Cortez was born on July 31, 1996, he is often called Cortez because of his father who was a drug addict and dealer in the area so that Diego was known as Cortez from his family. Cortez was born in an area in Mexico, namely Silanoa. He grew up in a family that is practically poor but can still survive through his father's hard work, his father Cortez earns money by selling drugs outside his area. Cortez sometimes likes to be hurt or beaten by his father for no particular reason because his father often comes home drunk or high due to drugs. Cortez lives only with his father alone without knowing who his own biological mother is even though he has heard several talks from his neighbors that Cortez's mother is a prostitute who used to accompany his father and disappeared either running away or died after Cortez was born. In Cortez's uncomfortable life, Cortez was not put into school by his father, due to a lack of economy or money to pay for the school fees, but Cortez was always forced to go to school on his own accord even though he only saw from outside the window, with that Cortez also gained some knowledge to help his survival. Cortez actually doesn't like the things his father does even though he was born in an area where there are many dealers or sellers of illegal goods such as drugs, and small firearms such as pistols, there are also looters or other criminals such as murderers and thieves. Cortez wants a life outside of the things that made Cortez intend to leave his place of birth, forced to earn money. Cortez often helps his father sell some drugs. After several years have passed, Cortez has also managed to raise money that he can use to leave his place. He intends to move to an area called Los Santos after hearing stories from some of his father's drug consumers that this place is perfect for starting a new life regardless of your background. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: nethack Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Liberty28 Saya Liberty28 selaku pemilik account UCP nethack bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Diego_Cortez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
kizzables Posted October 23, 2022 Posted October 23, 2022 review Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Liberty28 Posted October 23, 2022 Author Posted October 23, 2022 Tidak 1 tahun lebih Character Baru Tidak Tidak Dikosan @Achel
kizzables Posted October 23, 2022 Posted October 23, 2022 2 hours ago, Liberty28 said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Isi bagian ini. Untuk bagian forum gunakan @ seperti, @Achel 2 hours ago, Liberty28 said: namely Silanoa, Alangkah lebih baik jika tanda baca koma di atas diganti menjadi tanda baca titik (.) Jangan lupa ikuti huruf kapital pada awal kalimat selanjutnya. 2 hours ago, Liberty28 said: outside his area, Sama. 2 hours ago, Liberty28 said: due to drugs, Sama. 3 hours ago, Liberty28 said: some knowledge. foundation to help his survival. Silakan diperhatikan lagi penggunakan tanda baca titiknya, gunakan huruf kapital setelah tanda titik. 3 hours ago, Liberty28 said: thieves., Penggunaan tanda bacanya, hapus saja tanda baca komanya. 3 hours ago, Liberty28 said: money, Pake titik saja. 3 hours ago, Liberty28 said: After several years have passed Beri tanda baca koma setelah kata passed. 3 hours ago, Liberty28 said: place, titik saja.
kizzables Posted October 24, 2022 Posted October 24, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Liberty28 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Achel JG:RP Helper Team
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