BernardLuiz122 Posted October 15, 2022 Posted October 15, 2022 Bernard Luiz Bernard Otavio Luiz Da Costa Jr. or simply named by Bernard Luiz is a Los Santos’ local boy who’s living around the Downtown Market Apartment just by himself alone. Bernard Luiz has a Brazilian-American bloodline coming from his parents. Bernard Luiz’s parents now living themselves away from Bernard Luiz due to several reasons that made them kicked Bernard Luiz away from the house. In terms of that time, Bernard Luiz was caught in the act driving recklessly in the highway that made him got locked up in the jail for a several months back. And the biggest action he made was making a riot along with a several people called themselves the Street Racer which is having some of the bad reputation in SAPD’s scope of files. So, Bernard Luiz caught by the police once more for making some riot and being the main actor of the riot. Bernard Luiz got himself locked up in a jail sentence for 3 years within a more than thousand bucks’ penalty for what he did. Bernard Luiz was born in Los Santos’ All Saint General Hospital in 1996 with a normal surgery. When Bernard Luiz reached his 17 years old, Bernard Luiz started his way into the car enthusiast’s club along with his several friends which is very lethal to do such a reckless thing on driving the car in the traffic and the highway speed. They used to make their own race and do a lot of reckless driving that can make the traffic looks terrible to be pass through by the other people who's driving also. Bernard Luiz started his first race using his friend’s car and hit the won over his opponents. Some of the people around Bernard Luiz were praising him for his good first start as they couldn’t believe that Bernard Luiz can’t be a such of a monster while he’s driving a car indeed. This was also making Bernard Luiz had more respectful among the car enthusiast club’s members that he joined. At his 20 years old, Bernard Luiz became a high-skilled driver which is making him nicknamed “The Beast” due to for his such a delicate high-skilled driving. Once he’d been admitted himself as The Beast, he was trying to do more high-risk activity on the traffic. Now, he intended to get a chase by the police by hitting a high-speed driving on the highway. Suddenly, some of the police’s car were chasing him on the back due to a violation of the highway safety. Bernard Luiz didn’t catch a sight on the police that were tailing him up, he just hit the maximum speed of the car had to avoid those police. But unfortunately, Bernard Luiz’s car blew a smoke from the engine and made the car totally disengaged. Bernard Luiz was totally off guard and surrendered to the police warrant. Bernard Luiz got to face his own jail sentence due to his reckless driving. When Bernard Luiz’s jail sentence had been over, Bernard Luiz bounced himself up to the place that he used to hang out with some of his friends. But when he arrived there, one of the members from his club told Bernard Luiz that some members were lurking out to avoid themselves from the police as the Commander of the SAPD has released a press-conference to the public that he said that the Police were hunting down all the group that possibly bring up the criminal activity, including the Car Enthusiast Clubs in Los Santos. So that made Bernard Luiz fully in anger for the Commander of SAPD’s statement that was very contrast and cannot comparing the Car Enthusiast with some of the crime organization. Bernard Luiz intended to gather up all the Car Enthusiast Club and made a protest by making a chaos all over the traffic in Los Santos. And at that day, the city was very crowded and chaos as Bernard Luiz already planned before. Suddenly, Bernard Luiz got himself caught by the police once more as the main actor for the protest and had to face the jail sentence for 3 years long. Bernard Luiz spent his jail sentence by making some relationship inside it. Bernard Luiz met a friend that also had a similar interest with the car. They made themselves a promise to build their own small group to take a revenge on the SAPD which is very generic on assuming all the group in the city were close with the criminal activity. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/238565-cn-finn-russo-to-bernard-luiz-bernardluiz122/#comment-2312904 Account UCP yang saya miliki: ALeXeV, Versatile Account Forum yang saya miliki:BernardLuiz122 Saya BernardLuiz122 selaku pemilik account UCP BernardLuiz122 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Bernard Luiz) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
kizzables Posted October 15, 2022 Posted October 15, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler review
BernardLuiz122 Posted October 15, 2022 Author Posted October 15, 2022 17 minutes ago, Achel said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents review Halo, Admin @Achel Terimakasih sudah merespon formulir Character Story dari karakter saya. Izinkan saya untuk menjawab beberapa pertanyaan dan pernyataan terkait syarat dan ketentuan dalam pembuatan Character Story yang sudah anda sampaikan diatas. Untuk pertanyaan yang diberikan, Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Jawaban : Tidak. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? Jawaban : Sudah 2 Tahun. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Jawaban : Proses Namechange Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Jawaban : Ada dan sudah terlampir pada formulir Character Story diatas. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Jawaban : Tidak ada. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Jawaban : Di Rumah. Untuk pernyataan terkait syarat dan ketentuan dalam pembuatan Character Story yang sudah anda sampaikan, saya sepenuhnya sudah membuat Character Story saya sesuai dengan format serta syarat dan ketentuan yang berlaku. Demikian respon dari saya terkait pertanyaan serta pernyataan dari anda selaku Staff yang memeriksa Character Story saya. Mohon sekiranya jika ada beberapa kesalahan yang tidak saya sadari, bisa diberitahukan dan akan dikoreksi dengan semestinya. Terimakasih.
kizzables Posted October 16, 2022 Posted October 16, 2022 On 10/15/2022 at 2:32 PM, BernardLuiz122 said: which is making him got a nickname called “The Beast” due to for his Kalimat di atas kurang efektif, alangkah lebih baik jika kamu mengubah menjadi "Which is making him nicknamed the beast..." Secara keseluruhan sudah sangat baik dan tidak ada salah penulisan atau tanda baca.
BernardLuiz122 Posted October 16, 2022 Author Posted October 16, 2022 27 minutes ago, Achel said: Kalimat di atas kurang efektif, alangkah lebih baik jika kamu mengubah menjadi "Which is making him nicknamed the beast..." Secara keseluruhan sudah sangat baik dan tidak ada salah penulisan atau tanda baca. On 10/15/2022 at 3:32 PM, BernardLuiz122 said: which is making him nicknamed “The Beast” Sudah diperbaiki sesuai dengan yang diminta, min. Terimakasih atas koreksinya.
kizzables Posted October 16, 2022 Posted October 16, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @BernardLuiz122 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Achel JG:RP Helper Team
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