RadsKing Posted October 10, 2022 Posted October 10, 2022 Roberto_Guillermo Roberto Guillermo is a child born into a simple family. Roberto has a sibling named André. Roberto was born on September 29, 2000, And Andre was born on September 25, 1999. Roberto and André have a restaurant business, And because of that business, They have become quarrelsome. At the end, Roberto chose to leave the business and start his own. Roberto finally went to the city of Los Santos to run his business there. When he arrived in the city of Los Santos, He was welcomed by his friend named Alex. Roberto's friend Alex was his when he was at school, And finally, Roberto decided to stay temporarily at his friend's house. He was thinking about his business and was confused about what business to run. Finally, Roberto asked Alex about what business he was running. Alex replied that he was a gangster and he was the boss. Roberto was surprised because he didn't know that, So far, Alex was a gangster. Roberto also intended to stay away from Alex, But Alex detained Roberto and invited Roberto to join and run their business together. After a while, Roberto managed to run his business with Alex. Roberto also missed his brother and his hometown. Roberto finally went to his hometown. After arriving, Roberto was very surprised because his brother died 3 days ago. He also asked his parents apparently, When Roberto left, he was in debt to the mafia, Which made his business bankrupt and destroyed it. Then Andre was killed by the mafia. Roberto regrets having left Andre and running his own business, So forgetting his own brother, He also contacted Alex, who was in the city of Los Santos, and Alex confirmed to come to Roberto's hometown with his men. They will prepare to take revenge on the person who killed Roberto's brother, Andre. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/236648-cn-radifyre_serizawa-to-roberto_guillermo-radsx/#comment-2295738 Account UCP yang saya miliki: radsx Account Forum yang saya miliki: RadsKing Saya RadsKing selaku pemilik account UCP radsx bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Roberto_Guillermo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
RadsKing Posted October 10, 2022 Author Posted October 10, 2022 1 minute ago, Xavani said: Under review Siap min
Xavani Posted October 10, 2022 Posted October 10, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
RadsKing Posted October 10, 2022 Author Posted October 10, 2022 Tidak 6 bulan - 1 tahun Namechange Tidak Tidak Rumah
Xavani Posted October 11, 2022 Posted October 11, 2022 Hal yang harus di perbaiki adalah sebagai berikut: Gunakan format penulisan rata kanan kiri atau Justify Masih ada tulisan yang typo, mohon di benarkan.
RadsKing Posted October 11, 2022 Author Posted October 11, 2022 7 jam yang lalu, Xavani said: Hal yang harus di perbaiki adalah sebagai berikut: Gunakan format penulisan rata kanan kiri atau Justify Masih ada tulisan yang typo, mohon di benarkan. sudah di edit min
Xavani Posted October 11, 2022 Posted October 11, 2022 On 10/10/2022 at 3:02 PM, RadsKing said: Apparently tidak perlu kapital
RadsKing Posted October 11, 2022 Author Posted October 11, 2022 10 minutes ago, Xavani said: tidak perlu kapital sudah di perbaiki min kapital"nya
Xavani Posted October 11, 2022 Posted October 11, 2022 On 10/10/2022 at 3:02 PM, RadsKing said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Ini diisi Lalu, apakah kamu ada UCP selain ini?
RadsKing Posted October 11, 2022 Author Posted October 11, 2022 12 minutes ago, Xavani said: Ini diisi Lalu, apakah kamu ada UCP selain ini? ada min ucp : radsking29, itu minta di block aja soalnya gak ku pakai.
Xavani Posted October 11, 2022 Posted October 11, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @RadsKing I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Xavani JG:RP Helper Team
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