Fajar Budiono Posted October 7, 2022 Posted October 7, 2022 (edited) Imanuel_Westell Imanuel Westell 2 August 1999 Washington D.C , United States. He has a well-off family and he lives with his mother and father. His father provides daily support for him and his mother and mother take care of him at home, cook meals for Imanuel and play with Immanuel. And Immanuel enters school fort he first time when he arrives at school. Immanuel is worried about his mother. at home For fear of what would happen to his mother he held back crying to be a great man. When he was big he works somewhere he works somewhere that is in a trucker. he works in the trucker section delivering fish to support his family because dad is sick at home can't move from his bed, I'm very sad because dad is sick I'm afraid dad is gone and can't find me food for mom and me that's why I take turns working with Dad. one time my father had passed away So I am taking care of mother now, I am sad because father left me and my mother but, my mother always encouraged me and I was excited to live my life without a father figure who was instrumental in my family. I changed jobs to mechanics to get more salary than truckers, and when I worked in mechanics it all went smoothly and nothing happened to me. Because of the spirit of my mother, I work very hard for my mother. Every afternoon I bring food that my mother likes. I buy it because of my own sweat. For my mother, who I love. and I was forced to go out of town temporarily to undergo repairing a large car that I wanted to repair. I was also worried about my mother. I bought supplies of vegetables and other food for my mother and I said goodbye to my mother. 1 week I underwent a car repair I went home with a very large salary for Mom and I. And that's the journey of my life. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki:Fajar Budiono Saya Fajar Budiono selaku pemilik account UCP Fajarman bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Imanuel_Westell) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 8, 2022 by Fajar Budiono
$Sructs$ Posted October 7, 2022 Posted October 7, 2022 Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki
Fajar Budiono Posted October 7, 2022 Author Posted October 7, 2022 1.Iya pertama kali membuat Character Story 2.Tidak hanya satu 3.hanya satu 4.Rumah 5.Wifi 6.@Fajar Budiono 7.FajarMan
$Sructs$ Posted October 7, 2022 Posted October 7, 2022 okey saya akan memeriksa character story kamu 1. fotonya tolong posisin di tengah 2. Imanuel Westell 2 August 1999 Washington D.C, United States kalimat ini gak perlu di bold 3. perdalam lagi alur cerita character kamu 4. rapihkan paragraf kamu dengan cara setiap 100 kata di buat paragraf baru 5. perbaiki grammer kamu masih ada beberapa kata yang kurang pas jika di artikan dan perbaiki pemilihan katanya
Fajar Budiono Posted October 8, 2022 Author Posted October 8, 2022 Mohon Di beritahu min jika saya ada kesalahan saya akan memperbaikinya.
$Sructs$ Posted October 9, 2022 Posted October 9, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Fajar Budiono I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Sructs JG:RP Helper Team
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