perculationality Posted October 4, 2022 Posted October 4, 2022 (edited) Anthony_Portelli Anthony Portelli is a 23 year old man born on August 12, 1999, before he was born, his mother and his father lives in a small farms at Italy, they both were so happy and one day his father wants to move into Liberty City a place of dream and hope, they starts working hard and saving their money so they can live in Liberty City, a year later they both have enough money to move into Liberty City, they started buying tickets and packing their stuff into the briefcase both of them were so impatient. Upon their arrival at Liberty City their dreams were crushed, the hard earned money they gain for so long isn’t enough, his father buy a cheap flat where there is a rat still crawling on the floor, they both were so sad, and one day his mother was pregnant his father is unhappy because they didn’t have a plan to have a child while they were broke, and a month later Anthony was born, his mother takes care of Anthony while he was still a baby, until when he was 5 or 10 years old, his father turned into an Alcoholic. Most of the money they earned goes into booze, his mother scolds his dad, but his dad started throw punches at his mother, day by day things started looking worse, his father turned into abusive and his mother doesn’t care about him nor his father, one day his mother decided to turn into a whore and starts selling his body so she can earn lot’s of cash, his father demand half of her cash but she refused and decided to leave Anthony and his father alone, at the age of 16 his father got into crippling debt, he knows that his father just some alcoholic loser so he decided to starts making money early. Anthony started selling drugs with his friend Michael Palmieri in the slump of Liberty City, they gained a decent cash but Anthony is not satisfied, one day while walking in the street at night, he saw his mother hanging out with bunch of rich guys and girls, his mother gets into a limo with his new rich boyfriend, he had a great plan he calls Michael and starts to meet up to his house, Michael let him in and tell him about the plan he have. Anthony explains his plans to Michael as detailed as possible, his plans is about robbing a rich guy house, Michael agreed with his plans, so the next day he and Michael starts driving using Michael father car, they both goes to richest part of Liberty City, they started scouting for a house or a mansion that has a limo in it, ten hours later they found it, the same black limo where his mother and his new boyfriend hanging out with, both of them decided to scout the place a little bit and then goes back to Michael house for the planning. The next day, they started driving to the house and wait for the rich guy to leave with his mother, but that time never came, him and Michael decided to rob the mansion while they still inside, they wait until midnight and then breaks in the mansion, both of them goes to the back of the mansion, both of them hops on the fence and sneaks in through the bushes, once they arrived at the back door Anthony picklock the door and it worked, the doors open, he and Michael started taking all the expensive things and then after that they both ran. The next day they sell all the stuff to the pawn shop and got rich, Michael decided to move into Los Santos and buy a house, and Michael decided to go to Los Santos too, Michael goes to Los Santos first while Anthony catching up on him a month later, but Anthony wasted half of his money into booze and drugs, he is now fucked and living with his aunt in Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: SeanKenneth Account Forum yang saya miliki:perculationality Saya perculationality selaku pemilik account UCP SeanKenneth bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Anthony_Portelli) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 6, 2022 by perculationality Perbaikan
Xavani Posted October 4, 2022 Posted October 4, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
perculationality Posted October 5, 2022 Author Posted October 5, 2022 16 hours ago, Xavani said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1.Ya 2.1-3 Bulan 3. Buat Baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di Rumah
Xavani Posted October 5, 2022 Posted October 5, 2022 On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: Before Dont need capital letter after (,) On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: starts "start" On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: farms "farm" On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: hard earned Erase this sentence On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: And Dont use capital letter after "," On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: His Dont use capital letter after "," On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: Black Limo Dont need capital letter on this sentence On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: him "he" On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: till "untill" On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: a Alcoholic "an Alcoholic" On 10/4/2022 at 4:05 PM, perculationality said: him "he" Tolong rapihkan lagi penggunaan (.) dan (,). Masih banyak kesalahan pada 2 tanda baca tersebut. Setelah (.) maka kalimat berikutnya wajib berhuruf kapital. Sedangkan, setelah huruf (,) maka kalimatnya tidak kapital. Contoh: One day at the morning, me and my mother goes to Market. After we arrived at Market... Gunakan 5 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf.
perculationality Posted October 6, 2022 Author Posted October 6, 2022 6 hours ago, Xavani said: Dont need capital letter after (,) "start" "farm" Erase this sentence Dont use capital letter after "," Dont use capital letter after "," Dont need capital letter on this sentence "he" "untill" "an Alcoholic" "he" Tolong rapihkan lagi penggunaan (.) dan (,). Masih banyak kesalahan pada 2 tanda baca tersebut. Setelah (.) maka kalimat berikutnya wajib berhuruf kapital. Sedangkan, setelah huruf (,) maka kalimatnya tidak kapital. Contoh: One day at the morning, me and my mother goes to Market. After we arrived at Market... Gunakan 5 spasi pada setiap awal paragraf. sudah saya perbaiki mas
Xavani Posted October 6, 2022 Posted October 6, 2022 Sebelum saya menyetujui CS kamu. Apakah kamu ada UCP selain SeanKenneth?
perculationality Posted October 6, 2022 Author Posted October 6, 2022 Just now, Xavani said: Sebelum saya menyetujui CS kamu. Apakah kamu ada UCP selain SeanKenneth? Baru ingat, saya ada ucp lain bernama perculationality tapi ucp itu sudah tidak dipakai karena membutuhkan nomor telpon untuk membuat char baru jadi saya hanya menggunakan SeanKenneth
Xavani Posted October 6, 2022 Posted October 6, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @perculationality, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Xavani JG:RP Helper Team
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