zytax Posted September 19, 2022 Posted September 19, 2022 Chavarria_Pombo Chavarria 'Torre' Pombo was born on October 05, 2004, in Little Mexico, Los Santos, San Andreas. Torre's parents nicknamed him 'Torre' as a result. He was living in the Little Mexico region. He is the oldest child in his little family. His father's name is Rosario Dersa and his mother's name is Roselyn Deroe. Both of his parents taught Chavarria 'Torre' Pombo about surviving since he was 7 years old. Chavarria 'Torre' Pombo grew up in a Mexican environment. He has a lot of friends of the same race as him. There's no racism in his environment because they all have the same race as Chavarria 'Torre' Pombo. All of Chavarria's friends called him Chavarria Pombo with Torpedo because he's good at running and swimming like a torpedo. Torre and Torpedo have been his kids' nicknames since birth. He was already 6 years old when he went to primary school. He had an ambition to be a good child and make a lot of friends at his new school. But the fact is he didn't have a good relationship with the children who are not of the same race as him. There's a difference between him and another child of a different race like him. But, Chavarria doesn't care about them. He finished the first class with good and clear notes. There were no problems with the lesson from his school. On December 15th, 2016, Chavarria entered junior high school, but there are a lot of problems when he was studying there. A lot of people who hate Hispanic culture always make him look like a dumbass who can't live in the United States of America. They can't accept Chavarria as a normal student like others. Chavarria has a problem with those who can't accept the Hispanic race. Chavarria was against all of the bullyings that he got from other students. The principal of Junior High School heard the news from other staff and teachers about Chavarria's actions inside the school, so he made a call to him to come to his office and talk about Chavarria's future. As the clock ticking, has already passed away. After talking with the principal, all of them agreed to kick out Chavarria 'Torre' Pombo from the Junior High School after that incident. Chavarria's parents decided to kick him out of the house after he caused numerous problems. He was like a poor man who didn't have any place to sleep well. He had been living on the street for a long time. On January 20th, 2018, Chavarria's getting to know the items that can make a lot of money or the street called "Snow/White/WhiteLady/Pot" or something shit like that. He's finding the seller around the corner who can give him that shit. Day by day, he was able to find the seller of that shit around El Corona. There's some Hispanic clique on there who sells that stuff like a fucking hotdog. He was buying his first stuff for 10 g, then he was selling it to junkies at the high price of the market. Chavarria collected a lot of money after selling that stuff to the junkies who lived on the street. The Hispanic Clique noticed Chavarria's action of selling that shit to another junkie. He got an offer from them to sell that stuff for them, and Chavarria would get a lot more money than if he sold it by himself. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki:zytax Account Forum yang saya miliki: zytax Saya zytax selaku pemilik account UCP zytax bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Chavarria_Pombo) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
lyphothetic Posted September 19, 2022 Posted September 19, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
zytax Posted September 19, 2022 Author Posted September 19, 2022 1. Ya 2. 1 - 3 Bulan 3. Buat Baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak. 6. Di Rumah 27 minutes ago, lyphothetic said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents
lyphothetic Posted September 19, 2022 Posted September 19, 2022 Baik, ada beberapa revisi dari saya. Antara lain sebagai berikut: 33 minutes ago, zytax said: the Mexican "a Mexican" 34 minutes ago, zytax said: He has finished the "has" nya dihapus aja, soalnya udah ada kata "ed" di kalimat "finish". 35 minutes ago, zytax said: he's studying there. "..he was studying there." 36 minutes ago, zytax said: all of the bullying Karena "all" berarti bullying ditambahin "s" dibelakangnya. "bullyings". 37 minutes ago, zytax said: Minutes by Minutes, Terlalu indonesia kalimatnya, ubah jadi "As the time goes by" atau "As the clock ticking" atau jadi "Minutes by". 38 minutes ago, zytax said: hispanic Kapitalisasi, nama Ras/Suku. "Hispanic". Silahkan di revisi, terimakasih.
zytax Posted September 19, 2022 Author Posted September 19, 2022 48 minutes ago, lyphothetic said: Baik, ada beberapa revisi dari saya. Antara lain sebagai berikut: "a Mexican" "has" nya dihapus aja, soalnya udah ada kata "ed" di kalimat "finish". "..he was studying there." Karena "all" berarti bullying ditambahin "s" dibelakangnya. "bullyings". Terlalu indonesia kalimatnya, ubah jadi "As the time goes by" atau "As the clock ticking" atau jadi "Minutes by". Kapitalisasi, nama Ras/Suku. "Hispanic". Silahkan di revisi, terimakasih. edited, thanks min.
lyphothetic Posted September 19, 2022 Posted September 19, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @zytax I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@lyphothetic JG:RP Helper Team
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