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[CN] James Gatsby to Aria Sagara (michelle)


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UCP Name: michelle

Old Character: James Gatsby

Old Character Story:

 


New Character: Aria Sagara

Gender: Perempuan (Female)

Origin: Japan

 


Reason for name change request:

Remove crime record, dan masuk faction legal

 

Screenshots of '/myid' and '/mp':

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CK Story:

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James Gatsby is an associate of a well-known big drug trafficking syndicate alongside his friends Adam McAvoy. James was a detective in the Police Department in the Drugs and Narcotics division before he resigned and became a drug dealer. James handled many narcotics issued for one of the Japanese gangs in San Andreas. James has a loyal customer called Stefan Edmund, a new kid on the block trying to find his identity. James is aware of the Japanese trying to get him off the road.

As he was formerly of the GND division in Police Department, James knows how to play as a drug dealer and play it safe. But, something that James is afraid of is the Japanese people. Since they knew James always interfere with the transaction with the Japanese gangster when James was still in Department. Tuesday, 29 August, James has to deliver 50kilo of drugs package for his loyal customer. Something stuck in James about the Japanese gang on that day. James is aware he might meet the Japanese' people he mentioned. James loaded the package from his warehouse in Glen Park into his car. He received a phone call to meet him in Dock. James is all the way to the Dock and reminds him that Japanese people have turf on a Dock. James is afraid he might meet the Japanese. As James met Stefan, they had a conversation. James is trying to find somewhere safe to unload and give the package to Stefan. Stefan amazes by James' work in delivering the package safely.

All the way home and get Stefan to his home, They meet the Japanese, Nakatomi Toshiaki leader of the Japanese Gang that James mentioned. James is really afraid that he might get killed because of Nakatomi. James is running away from Nakatomi, but James hits the wall by his car in the alleyway. Nakatomi holds his gun and aims at James' head to get revenge for many past years away. James died after Nakatomi shot James' forehead with a pistol.

 

CK Screenshots:

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Sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan permohonan CN kamu, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu:

  1. Apakah jumlah story anda sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  2. Apakah jumlah SS sudah sesuai dengan ketentuan?
  3. Apakah /mp anda sudah dalam kondisi bersih?
  4. Jenis kasus apa yang anda buat untuk melakukan CK?
  5. Apakah karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara?

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Pastikan karakter kamu sudah tidak memiliki property ( isi command /mp harus kosong )
  2. Pastikan karakter kamu tidak memiliki warrant ( bukan buronan SAPD ) dengan status aktif.
  3. Anda harus memiliki cerita yang kreatif dan valid untuk melakukan CK.
  4. Tidak boleh melakukan RP buat CK seperti bunuh diri, kecelakaan, sakit, ataupun hutang piutang.
  5. Story CK harus terdiri dari 300 kata yang terdiri dari 2-3 paragraf.
  6. Jumlah Screenshoot CK minimal 10.
  7. Anda tidak perlu /charity, karena /autocn akan terpotong secara automatis uang anda.
  8. Pastikan karakter anda sudah di dalam penjara OOC.

 

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