Feriverdiansah Posted August 18, 2022 Posted August 18, 2022 John_Stark John Stark was born on November 23, 1996 in Milton Keynes, England, United Kingdom. When he was 10 years old, he was like a normal elementary school kid and he attended an elementary school in Milton Keynes. When he was in middle school he was forced to accompany his parents to the United States because his father was transferred there. in high school he began to show his ability in the automotive field. When his 17th birthday arrived, he got a Mercedes Benz SL as a birthday present from his father. The next day, he immediately rushed to the Police Department to get a driver's license. Since that day, he always uses his car wherever he goes. After graduating from high school, he began developing his automotive skills at a University in California. He managed to pass with a fairly high score. After graduating, he started his career as a taxi driver. When he first started working as a taxi driver, he still didn't recognize the California area and still often took the wrong way, not infrequently he was robbed by a group of robbers because of it. One time while he was working, he got the news that his parents died in an accident. At that moment he immediately rushed back to his house. At the time of the incident, he even took a month off from his job. He was devastated by the death of his parents. As the time goes by, he passed his days as a taxi driver for approximately 2 years, before finally he decided to stop working as a taxi driver. One month later, he tried to work as a mechanic in a public-owned garage, often receiving calls from the local police to help with the impound process. He worked as a mechanic for approximately 2 years. During his time as a mechanic, he got many coworkers who always helped him when he needed help in his work. After having enough money, he now sells his Mercedes Benz and then buys a Ferrari F40 at a local dealer. The Ferrari F40 is the car he's wanted since he was a teenager. He tries to tune his car as comfortably as possible so that he can travel anywhere safely. Now, he has a desire to become a police officer because of the rampant crime that is happening around him. He plans to try registering as a police officer after he buys a decent place to live. He doesn't want to live in his father's house and chooses to buy his own place because he wants to live in a house that he has earned from his own hard work. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Feriverdiansah Account Forum yang saya miliki:Feriverdiansah Saya Feriverdiansah selaku pemilik account UCP Feriverdiansah bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (John Stark) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
lyphothetic Posted August 18, 2022 Posted August 18, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Feriverdiansah Posted August 18, 2022 Author Posted August 18, 2022 16 minutes ago, lyphothetic said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Ya 2. 6 bulan - 1 tahun 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak ada, hanya ini 5. Tidak ada, hanya ini 6. Di rumah
lyphothetic Posted August 19, 2022 Posted August 19, 2022 Ada sedikit revisi dari saya, antara lain sebagai berikut: Tambahkan lagi kalimat di paragraf ke 3. Gunakan justify (rata kanan-kiri) pada keseluruhan paragraf. On 18/8/2022 at 19.08, Feriverdiansah said: England. karena dibelakangnya sudah ada "England", maka ini diubah menjadi UK atau United Kingdom. On 18/8/2022 at 19.08, Feriverdiansah said: university Univeristy. Kapitalisasi huruf awal kata. On 18/8/2022 at 19.08, Feriverdiansah said: Time after time As the time goes by. Silahkan di revisi.
lyphothetic Posted August 20, 2022 Posted August 20, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Feriverdiansah I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@lyphothetic JG:RP Helper Team
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