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Arwen Weschler


 

 

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     Arwen Weschler was born to a well-to-do family in New York City on August 10th, 1994. She was the first-born daughter of her father and mother. Her mother was a socialite, and her father was a well-known fund manager. Arwen also had a younger brother named Aaron. Despite her wealthy upbringing, she wasn't a spoiled youngster and was conscious of her benefits from an early age. Early on, she developed an interest in music and vehicles. She was obsessed with alternative rock and grunge genres. Her favorite bands were Depeche Mode, Radiohead, and The Smashing Pumpkins. She also asked her dad to buy her a motorcycle, and he signed her up for California Superbike School. She was also the youngest member of the American Motorcyclist Association.

 

     When she turned 15, she went to a private high school. She liked to help her friends and teachers. She joined many extracurricular activities. She also performed at many school events. Many of her peers during her high school years were mesmerized by her beauty and talent. She formed a band with her friends and played music in her spare time. They aspired to be as successful as their idols. Derrick, her bandmate, passed away from drug abuse. Losing a member had given the members a hard time, so they decided to disband. 

 

     On August 10th, 2010, Her favorite band was in town. She was excited because her favorite band concert was on her birthday. She immediately bought a VIP ticket and went to that concert. She ran into a girl named Emily accidentally. There was chemistry between them. After that, they hung out till noon at the nearby park. Emily told her everything about her dreams. She said that she wanted to be a paramedic. Arwen was lovestruck. That night made it clear that she was into boys and also girls. As time went by, Arwen confessed her feelings to Emily. She asked her to be her girlfriend. Thankfully, Emily said yes.

 

     One day, when she was riding a motorcycle with Emily, they had a motorcycle accident. Emily died at the scene. Arwen got her leg badly broken at her knee. When Arwen first heard that Emily had died, she was shocked and struggled to gather her thoughts. She became so depressed that she cut herself off from the outside world. Her parents were very concerned about her mental well-being because she had been depressed and experiencing an existential crisis after that accident. They made every effort to help her get back on track. They suggested therapy to Arwen, and she responded well.

 

     She finally bounced back. She started to study hard as she used to do. She applied to Yale. Fortunately, She got into Yale University. She decided to follow her dream to be an artist and doctor. She went to medical school after earning a high GPA in her nursing undergraduate degree. She received honors at graduation. After graduating from Yale, she studied art. She relocated to Los Santos because she wanted to start over without the support of her parents. She supported herself financially while awaiting her full medical license in Los Santos by working as a truck driver and a part-time digital artist.

 

 

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan

URL Namechange:

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
ilmare

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

ilmare


 

Saya ilmare selaku pemilik account UCP ilmare bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Arwen Weschler) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.


1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ?

2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 

3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 

4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet?

5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot

6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki

7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki

Posted
14 hours ago, Sructs said:

Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.


1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ?

2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 

3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 

4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet?

5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot

6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki

7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki

1. Tidak

2. Tidak, hanya ini.

3. Tidak, hanya ini.

4. Rumah

5. Kadang wifi kadang hotspot

6. Baik

7. Baik

Posted

okey saya akan memeriksa character story kamu

 

1. perdalam lagi alur cerita character kamu

2. perhatikan lagi grammer kamu masih ada beberapa kata yang rancu seperti yang seharusnya she malah her ataupun sebaliknya

3. perhatikan pemilihan katanya contoh sederhana ada di kalimat: school after earning a strong GPA kata strong bisa kamu ganti jadi High

Posted
7 hours ago, Sructs said:

okey saya akan memeriksa character story kamu

 

1. perdalam lagi alur cerita character kamu

2. perhatikan lagi grammer kamu masih ada beberapa kata yang rancu seperti yang seharusnya she malah her ataupun sebaliknya

3. perhatikan pemilihan katanya contoh sederhana ada di kalimat: school after earning a strong GPA kata strong bisa kamu ganti jadi High

Sudah saya benahi, Min. Tolong di-crosscheck lagi apa ada yang perlu direvisi. Terima kasih.

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Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @ilmare

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Sructs
JG:RP Helper Team

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