FuNcHi Posted July 31, 2022 Posted July 31, 2022 (edited) Jace Harrison In a small town called Angelpine, a boy named Jace Harrison was born on 20 July 2000. he lives in a haunted old house with his family. Jace has a father who is a pastor in his town and his mother is a doctor in Angelpine. he was raised well by his parents. Once when Jace was 3 years old it turned out that he was an indigo child who could see and interact with ghosts. He also see all the ghosts that existed in his house, but at that time he did not understand that the ghosts could not be seen by ordinary people. Until Jace was 5 years old, he liked to play and talk to the ghosts in his house but his parents never realized that Jace was an indigo. There is one ghost who often interacts and plays with him his name is Lucas. Jace and Lucas became best friends, Lucas was a little boy who lived and died in that house. Lucas once told Jace that he died because he was killed by local residents because his family was accused of being part of a criminal group at that time. Sometime on his 14th birthday, there was a party at his house, Lucas instigated Jace to take his father's rifle and shoot everyone at the party. but because Jace hasn't been trained in shooting. the shot only hit one person and killed him instantly. Everyone who was there was shocked when the shooting happened. After that incident, Jace is investigated by the sheriff and taken to a place far from the city for a psychological examination. He was in rehab there for 4 years after his rehab is over, he returns home to meet his family but his parents rejected Jace and kicked him out of the house because their parents were also afraid of being killed by him. Jace explained to his parents that it was Lucas the house ghost who instigated him to kill people and get his revenge. Even so, his parents didn't believe it and thought Jace was a crazy person. After that, Jace decided to move to another city and away from his parents. He went to a big city called Los Santos, there he gets many friends who always supported him. Over time he began to forget all his past and his family and started a new life there. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: funchi Account Forum yang saya miliki: FuNcHi Saya FuNcHi selaku pemilik account UCP funchi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jace Harrison) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited August 1, 2022 by FuNcHi Kalimat
$Ejeh$ Posted July 31, 2022 Posted July 31, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
FuNcHi Posted July 31, 2022 Author Posted July 31, 2022 1. Tidak 2. 6 bulan - 1 tahun 3. Buat baru 4. Tidak ada 5. Tidak ada 6. Di rumah
$Ejeh$ Posted August 1, 2022 Posted August 1, 2022 On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: jace tolong diperhatikan nama, gunakan huruf kapital pada awalan nama On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: can tolong hapus kata ini On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: ghost exist tolong ganti kata ini menjadi "ghosts that existed" On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: ghost cannot be ganti kata ini menjadi "ghosts could not be" On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: become ganti kata ini menjadi "became" On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: shock ganti menjadi "shocked" On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: insident tolong ganti kata ini menjadi "incident" On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: support ganti kata ini menjadi "supported" On 7/31/2022 at 11:53 AM, FuNcHi said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: tolong isi dengan UCP dan akun forum yang kamu miliki!
FuNcHi Posted August 1, 2022 Author Posted August 1, 2022 48 minutes ago, Ejeh said: tolong diperhatikan nama, gunakan huruf kapital pada awalan nama tolong hapus kata ini tolong ganti kata ini menjadi "ghosts that existed" ganti kata ini menjadi "ghosts could not be" ganti kata ini menjadi "became" ganti menjadi "shocked" tolong ganti kata ini menjadi "incident" ganti kata ini menjadi "supported" tolong isi dengan UCP dan akun forum yang kamu miliki! Edited, terimakasih banyak koreksinya
$Ejeh$ Posted August 3, 2022 Posted August 3, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @FuNcHi, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Ejeh JG:RP Helper Team
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