$SinX$ Posted July 13, 2022 Posted July 13, 2022 Jorgito Contreras Jorgito 'Luiz' Contreras was born on 12 August 1993 this child was born in a less fortunate neighborhood of Casares, in this small casa. His mother died in childbirth, his father hated this child 'cause he took the life of the only woman he loved so he ran away from home when Jorgito was born. Jorgito lived his entire childhood or rather his entire life with his grandfather Pedro through misery and poverty. One day Pedro the grandfather approached a ranfla and a man with tattoos everywhere came out of it. Yes, it was Pablo the son of Pedro and Pablo was the father of the child, Pedro whom he had not seen in a long time. They looked at each other for a moment a few seconds then a few tears rolled down Pedro's cheeks. Finally they moved places to meet together and talk a lot at home. Jorgito doesn't know that the tattooed man who is talking to his grandfather is his father, Jorgito tries to understand what happened and doesn't care about them at home and Jorgito is cool outside playing with his friends. The conversation started to warm up Pedro referring to Pablo's willingness to tell him that he was Jorgito's son. The day after Pablo had spoken to Jorgito, Pablo woke up before the others. He put down a piece of paper that said: "I'll be back in a week, don't worry about me. Pablo." When the seventh day of the week arrived, the police approached the house and then knocked on the door. Jorgito rushed to the door and opened it. when he saw the two big people in front of him, he immediately called out to his grandfather. After a long conversation with the two great men at the door, Pedro returned home and then explained to Jorgito that his father would not be back for ten years. Jorgito was not happy because the day he saw his father he liked him. Ten years after his collapse, Jorgito is now a man with a tattoo on his neck that reads "Salvador". On the day of his father's release, Jorgito took his friend's car and then made his way to the prison. His father was released from prison, Jorgito then took his father's luggage to put in the trunk of the car. On the way home, Jorgito stopped at a red light and then a car approached them with dark windows, windows closed, this car was suspicious in Pablo's eyes. The car window was open, it was black, Jorgito had never seen him in Casares so he was very surprised. His car was hit by a cliff and the mysterious person in the black car fired five times at Pablo's chest. Pablo died in this black attack, Jorgito tried to fight with all his might and could not finally Jorgito had a scar on his cheek from being hit by a weapon that couldn't go away. In the midst of this incident Pedro, the grandfather, upon hearing of this incident, told Jorgito that they were going to Los Santos with the help of his friend who smuggled people from one country to another. His friend says it will be difficult but Possible. So they took the road to America in a small van full of other people wanting to leave Casares. Arriving in Los Santos, Pedro the grandfather struggled to find odd jobs to support himself and Jorgito. Pedro then made money here and there and then rented a house at Marina Beach, not far from the beach. A new life awaits Jorgito in the city of Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/227238-cn-daichi-shibuya-to-jorgito-contreras-miqbale01 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: @SinXorY Saya SinXorY selaku pemilik account UCP miqbale01 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jorgito Contreras) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
Neolizer Posted July 13, 2022 Posted July 13, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$SinX$ Posted July 13, 2022 Author Posted July 13, 2022 2 minutes ago, qwerty378 said: Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Reveal hidden contents 1. Tidak 2. 1 tahun lebih 3. Namechange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Rumah 1. Sudah. 2. Sudah. 3. Sudah dicek. 4. English 5. Sudah lebih 300 kata dan lebih 3 paragraph. 6. Sudah. 7. OK.
$SinX$ Posted July 13, 2022 Author Posted July 13, 2022 5 jam yang lalu, qwerty378 said: Akun UCP atas nama felicia22 itu punya siapa? punya pacar saya.
Neolizer Posted July 13, 2022 Posted July 13, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @SinXorY, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@qwerty378 JG:RP Helper Team 1
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