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Enriquevales Cortez


 

 

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     On February 3, 2001, he was born a child named Enriquevales Cortez who lives with his two parents named Rey'an Cortez and Prisca Adela and they live in New Mexico City. Cortez since childhood Often Said books about recipes that make him Be happy. Because of that Cortez was sent to school by his parents at LCI Monterrey which is not far from Cortez's house. After graduating from high school, Cortez thought of working in a restaurant. After that Cortez asked permission from his parents To leave and his parents also approved of it. 

     In the end, Cortez left and lived his life to find the restaurant he was looking for. And finally Cortez found a restaurant called Condimento Emporio Reforma. And Cortez saw a board that said accepting new employees, and then Cortez was accepted by the person who has a restaurant called Elegant Cores. live as a cook Cortez plans to save money so he can buy his own restaurant. After Cortez manages to save Cortez gets the money he collected Dan Cortez wants to buy a cheap restaurant. After that Cortez does not forget his parents and Cortez wants to come back for a while to his parents. Arriving at home he told his father the results of his savings and Cortez also told his father about going to buy a restaurant and his father supported him, after that Cortez said goodbye to his parents so he could buy the restaurant. Mexican Cortez saw someone selling a restaurant and Cortez rushed to buy it and finally Cortez bought the restaurant. And then Cortez renovated his restaurant called Ballta. After that he looked for members and finally Cortez's efforts were not in vain.
 
     But it wasn't enough that Cortez went bankrupt and thought of a way to attract customers back by making low prices and Cortez also made several sheets to be displayed on the pole. After being ready to paste the sheets of paper Cortez returned to his restaurant. The next day Cortez's restaurant became crowded. And Cortez also managed to attract the attention of citizens.

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: Ya

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Centaur

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

@Guns Shoot


 

Saya Guns Shoot selaku pemilik account UCP Centaur bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Enriquevales Cortez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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sebelum melanjutkan pemeriksaan Character Story anda tolong jawab pertanyaan di bawah ini dengan jujur.

 

1. Minotaurs

 

Apakah UCP di atas milik anda?

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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
    Spoiler

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Posted
On 7/13/2022 at 8:45 AM, Guns Shoot said:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

tolong isi dengan UCP dan akun forum yang kamu gunakan saat ini 

On 7/13/2022 at 8:45 AM, Guns Shoot said:

a mother named

tolong hapus bagian ini, karena bahasa inggris yang tidak sesuai

On 7/13/2022 at 8:45 AM, Guns Shoot said:

so Cortez could leave

ubah kalimat ini hanya menjadi "to leave"

On 7/13/2022 at 8:45 AM, Guns Shoot said:

reads

ganti kata ini menjadi "said"

On 7/13/2022 at 8:45 AM, Guns Shoot said:

then

sebelum kata then tambahkan "and"

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @Guns Shoot,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Ejeh
JG:RP Helper Team

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