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Kolby Prince


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     Kolby Prince was born on 16 February, 1990, in the a little town near Los santos. He was born to parents named Chris Prince and indiana jordan. He was live into a normal family. Kolby's father is a truck driver at company, while Kolby's mother is a house wife. but Kolby's father has a secret business, he is selling drugs such as marijuana. Kolby's father business base is so far from Los santos and secluded , so it was hard for the police to track him. He did his illegal business with his two friends, namely harry Kane and wayne maguire, but then wayne maguire was caught doing a Marijuana transaction. Since then, Kolby's father and Kane have closed their business. 

                                                   

     At the age of 16, Kolby's father was fired from his job and became a alcoholic. This made Kolby's family's finances worse. Kolby forced worked part-time at a fast-food restaurant and distributed newspapers until his father got a job. At school, Kolby was also a great student. After graduating from high school, at the age of 18, Kolby got a scholarship to college with a major in automotive. After college, Kolby's life and finances improved. Kolby's family improved when his father was accepted into a big company to be a truck driver again. 

 

     After graduating from college, Kolby worked as a mechanic in a general workshop until one day, Kolby's father was fired from his job because he was accused of corruption, then Kolby's father decided to call his old friend, George Kane, to start their drugs business again their business is running smoothly but 1 month later George was caught by the police just like Chris he was caught during a marijuana transaction, in the end, Kolby's father handed over the business to his son, Kolby then Kolby be a drug dealer while working as a mechanic. 

 

 

 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Tidak ada

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 


 

Saya muhammad syauqi selaku pemilik account UCP Cityzens bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Kolby Prince) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited by muhammad syauqi
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Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini:

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  6. Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet)

 

PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!

  1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (BoldItalic, atau Underline)
  2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol image.png pada toolbar di atas.
  3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
  4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
  5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
  6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
  7. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan:
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PERBAIKAN:

  • Rapihin lagi paragrafnya, jarak antara paragraf terlalu jauh, beri jarak hanya 1 kali enter.
  • Masukkan foto yang mendeskripsikan karakter kamu.
  • Kerangkanya di justify (rata kanan-kiri) dan berikan 5 kali spasi ditiap awal paragraf.
  • Kalo kamu bingung, bisa baca reply saya sebelumnya untuk perbaikan.

 

Posted
3 hours ago, aveef said:

PERBAIKAN:

  • Rapihin lagi paragrafnya, jarak antara paragraf terlalu jauh, beri jarak hanya 1 kali enter.
  • Masukkan foto yang mendeskripsikan karakter kamu.
  • Kerangkanya di justify (rata kanan-kiri) dan berikan 5 kali spasi ditiap awal paragraf.
  • Kalo kamu bingung, bisa baca reply saya sebelumnya untuk perbaikan.

 

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @muhammad syauqi,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@aveef
JG:RP Helper Team

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