$Melancholia$ Posted June 26, 2022 Posted June 26, 2022 Jesus Caballero Adriano Jesus Caballero was born in Sinaloa, Mexico on May 31, 1992. He is the younger of three brothers' names are Diego Flavio Caballero and Renaldo Caballero. Since childhood he was a bright student and he also got awards when he graduated in school like his other siblings. Jesus' parents have economic problems which require Jesus' parents to work as casual laborers and housemaids, different from his other siblings. Jesus was born in a city, namely Sinaloa, which is very thick with the name narcotics. Since Jesus grew up he had to do whatever it took to earn money which would later buy food for his parents. One time when Jesus was working as a coal hauler in a mine, he was scrutinized by one of the big bosses of the Cartel de Sinaloa, where the coal mines are located. The embers were only a cover for the narcotics lab run by the Cartel de Sinaloa at that time Jesus was called by his boss to meet him at a place, namely the drug lab. Jesus was surprised by this and he felt fear mixed with curiosity about the lab. In short, Jesus was asked by one of the bosses of the Cartel de Sinaloa as a narcotics courier, for which Jesus would be paid handsomely by the Cartel de Sinaloa with the job of delivering narcotics to the places he had been told, with a look of fear mixed in with his thirst. For money, Jesus did not think long about what would happen to him if one day he was caught. When Jesus started his delivery by sending a package of cocaine-type narcotics to a group from the Cartel de Sinaloa, Jesus was confused and afraid of him but Jesus was warmly received by the group from the Cartel de Sinaloa and was given extra money as a tip for delivering the package. narcotics. Feeling that he was known by many people and respected, Jesus lost his fear and tried to be brave, one day when he sent a narcotics package to a dark place, it turned out that Jesus was framed by the police and Jesus was taken to prison to await his trial. later. Jesus, who had resigned himself to what he was going through, was silent and didn't want to talk to anyone. Jesus had wanted to kill himself but was detained by his cellmates because it was a stupid act. Day after day passed by Jesus, the trial was carried out and Jesus was sentenced to 5 years in prison and extradited to America. After Jesus passed his prison term, and got out of prison, Jesus' stature had changed completely. Jesus also started his journey after getting out of prison, unexpectedly; there was a car waiting for Jesus in a parking lot and it was known that the person was Elias Pechon Matias Echeverra, or commonly known as El Perro, is the big boss of the Cartel de Sinaloa, El Perro who does not forget the merits of Jesus who has done a good job and did not reveal who he was hired by. El Perro also invited Jesus to return to the Cartel de Sinaloa and was recruited to be El Perro's right-hand man. Jesus, who was in debt and had no money, was forced to follow in El Perro's footsteps and was recruited to be his right-hand man. Time after time passed by Jesus himself growing and having a lot of wealth in every city in Mexico. Jesus also opened his narcotics lab and sold his personal narcotics. Feeling confident and growing rapidly, due to having problems with the Drug Enforcement Administration and the Federal Bureau of Investigation, Jesus was searched for by the police but only found El Perro, who was resting at the time. Hearing the news that El Perro had been taken by the DEA and the FBI, he fled and flew to Los Santos to start a new narcotics business. Arriving in Los Santos, Jesus, who has abundant assets and himself built his narcotics lab and runs a legal business, namely Car Dealership as a cover for his narcotics business. Jesus did not feel satisfied and continued to expand his business and received news from his brother, Renaldo Caballero. Who lives in Los Santos, he immediately went to Renaldo's residence and started a business with his brother. Jesus and Renaldo have made many deliveries of weapons and narcotics to criminal groups in Los Santos. After several months passed, El Perro was reported to have died at the hands of the Mexican Military. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/225413-cn-daichi-matsuyama-to-jesus-caballero-kayaganteng/#comment-2187879 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Morteza Saya Morteza selaku pemilik account UCP KayaGanteng bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jesus Caballero) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$clamours$ Posted June 27, 2022 Posted June 27, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler berikan 10 spasi di setiap awal paragraf @Morteza
$Melancholia$ Posted June 27, 2022 Author Posted June 27, 2022 1. Tidak 2. 3 tahun lebih 3. NameChange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di warnet. Sudah dibenarkan, dapat dicek kembali.
$clamours$ Posted June 27, 2022 Posted June 27, 2022 Paragraf pertamanya tolong dirubah menjadi rata kanan kiri seperti paragraf lainnya ya.
$Melancholia$ Posted June 28, 2022 Author Posted June 28, 2022 Sudah diperbaiki, bisa direvisi kembali.
$clamours$ Posted June 28, 2022 Posted June 28, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Morteza, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@clamours JG:RP Helper Team
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