$Azkarza$ Posted June 13, 2022 Posted June 13, 2022 Arzavin_Mohammed In the city of Chicago 25 years ago on September 7, 1997, a child named Arzavin Mohammed was born to a father named Ismael Mohammed and a mother named Cassandra Mendez. Arzavin Mohammed is a son of Egyptian and Colombian descent who has a distant cousin from Indonesia named Andhika Powell who several years ago lived in the city of Los Santos. Since childhood, Arzavin Mohammed has never lived far from his parents, until he learned that Andhika Powell was killed in Los Santos by some of his friends. Finally, Arzavin Mohammed went with his family to attend Andhika Powell's funeral. The plan is that Arzavin Mohammed and his family intend to move to Los Santos and want to leave their hometown and get married while maintaining Andhika Powell's legacy. For the first time Arzavin Mohammed is lives in a city far from his hometown, Arzavin Mohammed has not been able to adapt to a very bad environment in the eyes of his parents, before he died Andhika Powell had visited Arzavin Mohammed's house and had lived there for a long time. Arzavin Mohammed was sad because he had not been to Andhika Powell's house until he died, and now Arzavin intends to continue lived in the town where his cousin was killed. When he first came to Los Santos Arzavin Mohammed was looking for a property in a place to live with his parents and after finding a boarding house, Arzavin Mohammed's parents felt uncomfortable lived in Los Santos because a crime was rampant higher and he wanted to return to his hometown. On the first day in the city of Los Santos Arzavin Mohammed tried to work as a truck driver and as a fisherman, which he said could get a hefty salary or salary, but something made Arzavin Mohammed thinks hard about why Andhika Powell felt at home in this city full of violence and crime. It turns out that worked as a truck driver is very tiring and makes us emotional if we are impatient and relaxed, by worked as a truck driver Arzavin Mohammed feels happy because he can make many friends with fellow truck drivers. After a long day worked as a truck driver, Arzavin Mohammed spent the night fished in the wide ocean with his new friends after fished Arzavin Mohammed gathered at the house of one of his friends who was having a barbecue party. In his heart, Arzavin Mohammed said "I must be able to conquer this city and must succeed in making Andhika Powell proud". Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/157355-andhika-powell-azkarza/#comment-2169877 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Azkarza Account Forum yang saya miliki: Azkarza Saya Azkarza selaku pemilik account UCP Azkarza bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Arzavin_Mohammed) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$aavvynn$ Posted June 13, 2022 Posted June 13, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
$Azkarza$ Posted June 13, 2022 Author Posted June 13, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? (1 tahun lebih) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah)
$aavvynn$ Posted June 13, 2022 Posted June 13, 2022 4 hours ago, Azkarza said: ARZAVIN MOHAMMED Tolong di hapus diatasnya gambar itu. 4 hours ago, Azkarza said: keeping the belongings of Andhika Powell left behind. For the first time living in a city far from his hometown, Perbaiki lagi coba sesuai past tense. Perhatikan lagi diseluruh kalimat yang kamu pakai masih banyak yang salah. 4 hours ago, Azkarza said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki:Tidak Ada Perbaiki sesuai nama UCP kamu dan nama forum kamu. Awal paragraph kamu beri 5 space.
$aavvynn$ Posted June 13, 2022 Posted June 13, 2022 2 hours ago, aavvynn said: 7 hours ago, Azkarza said: keeping the belongings of Andhika Powell left behind. For the first time living in a city far from his hometown, Perbaiki lagi coba sesuai past tense. Perhatikan lagi diseluruh kalimat yang kamu pakai masih banyak yang salah. Ini belum kamu edit loh. Penggunaan grammar dalam Narrative Text yang kamu gunakan masih belum sempurna, tolong diperbaiki lagi. Ex : Penggunaan past tense, Penggunaan kata keterangan waktu (adverbial of time), Menggunakan action verb, and time conjunction.
$aavvynn$ Posted June 13, 2022 Posted June 13, 2022 17 hours ago, Azkarza said: living 17 hours ago, Azkarza said: working 17 hours ago, Azkarza said: fishing masih ada itu, kan disuruh teliti lagi dilain kalimat. Perbaiki kata kata itu.
$aavvynn$ Posted June 14, 2022 Posted June 14, 2022 On 6/13/2022 at 1:29 PM, aavvynn said: Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Ini belum lu terapin kan hayo.
$aavvynn$ Posted June 14, 2022 Posted June 14, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Azkarza, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@aavvynn JG:RP Helper Team
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