Aikoy Posted May 23, 2022 Posted May 23, 2022 (edited) Montana_Laquina On March 20, 2002, was born a second son named Montana Laquina, the child of both partners named Jarvis Penevies and Lidya Laquina, and the little brother of Javier Laquina. Montana is a teenager who lives in an area called El Corona. Together with their brother Javier, they study at the Smooth South Vista High School, running their school as it normally would. Montana and her brother Javier live their lives like normal teenagers. They are under the authority of their parents. Montana is a teenage boy who still lives with his parents but is closer to his brother. As time goes by, Montana is invited by his brother to be a teenager who lives like a teenager in general. He lives a simple life with the help of his parents. He is like any other teenager out there. Even though Montana has good relations with the people around him, some residents consider Montana to be an innocent and kind child, and Javier, as a brother, has different characteristics from his younger brother, Montana. Javier is a brother who is known as a naughty boy. Rarely do residents recognize him as a good boy. Montana lives his life at school in a pleasant atmosphere. He makes many friends at school and has many relationships with new people. Several years have passed, and now they have grown taller than in the past. Montana is now 19, and his brother is 20. Montana chooses to continue his journey at school, and his brother Javier chooses to live his own life, finishing school at the age of what can be said as a teenager. Montana is living his new life. He is happy to ask his brother for money. Living in El Corona, according to Montana, is a bad thing. Until one day, Montana is taught something by his brother about a new life outside of school, about how naughty teenagers have a life, and Montana is attracted to the words of his brother and lives his new life. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: sukabumi Account Forum yang saya miliki: Aikoy Saya Aikoy selaku pemilik account UCP sukabumi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Montana_Laquina) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 24, 2022 by Aikoy pemperbaiki gramar dan paragraf
BGenk Posted May 23, 2022 Posted May 23, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Aikoy Posted May 23, 2022 Author Posted May 23, 2022 1. tidak 2. kurang dari 1 bulan 3. character baru 4. tidak 5. tidak 6. di rumah
BGenk Posted May 23, 2022 Posted May 23, 2022 Berikut adalah kesalahan-kesalahan dalam penulisan yang perlu kamu perbaiki. Berikan setidaknya 5 spasi pada awal paragraf. Masih ada beberapa grammar yang perlu diperbaiki, harap diperhatikan kembali. Perhatikan lagi penggunaan huruf kapital yang benar.
BGenk Posted May 24, 2022 Posted May 24, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Player, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Helper JG:RP Helper Team
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