Konss Posted May 6, 2022 Posted May 6, 2022 (edited) Annabella Nermova Hi, I am Annabella Nermova of 4 children and she is the eldest of 4 children. so Annabella wanted to tell me about the life that Annabella lived. The smoldering night brought Annabella to continue waiting for the arrival of the blue train. Annabella sat watching carefully each officer announcing her arrival. Sometimes a voice comes from the speakers "Attention please this is coming from line one, economy train". Again Annabella complained, could the train which only cost thirty five thousand rupiahs be late? My mind says "damn!" and not long after the train came, Annabella thought it was a blue train ahh but it wasn't huftt, and Annabella kept waiting. Annabella's annoyance was finally relieved when the train came from line two. Annabella had been waiting for an hour and Annabella only thought that even a very strong snake could not beat steel which in a second could go so fast. Until the towering rocks never end. Run fast like a horse race winning the weekly lottery. finally the train that annabella was waiting for came "annabella said to herself" finally the train has arrived, and annabella started to get on the train, and on the way annabella enjoyed everything from the road, and until finally annabella fell asleep hehe maybe because Annabella was tired of waiting too long for the train she wanted to ride Annabella. And Annabella had a dream like this." Beads of sweat dripped from my hair and chin. Sometimes complaints were spoken in loud tones. The heat of the night after a rain was like basking in the sun in the Sahara desert. Faces with all Expressions were neatly displayed. Annabella walked hand in hand between a girl and a son. Some mothers and young children were looking for a train that was a bit quiet. As it turned out, this didn't just happen in the reality of going home and Christmas parties. Or was it an opportunity to save on monthly expenses. Annabella really didn't know" and in the end Annabella woke up because Annabella already wanted to reach the destination she wanted to go to, and Annabella leaned back for a while because my nutmeg was still dizzy because Annabella had just woken up and in the end the train carriage opened and Annabella came out with a smile. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Konss Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Konss Saya Konss selaku pemilik account UCP Konss bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Annabella Nermova) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 11, 2022 by Konss
kangRTM Posted May 6, 2022 Posted May 6, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Konss Posted May 6, 2022 Author Posted May 6, 2022 (edited) 1. Ya 2. 1bulan 3. buat baru 4. tidak 5. tidak 6. di warnet Bang Ali Sudah di edit min Edited May 6, 2022 by Konss
kangRTM Posted May 7, 2022 Posted May 7, 2022 Perbaiki. 1. Gunakan lah sudut pandang orang ke 3 dalam membuat Character Story. (Ubah kata-katanya pakai sudut pandang orang ke 3) 2. Perhatikan penempatan tanda baca (titik koma) di akhir kalimat atau akhir paragraf.
Konss Posted May 7, 2022 Author Posted May 7, 2022 2 jam yang lalu, lowkey said: Perbaiki. 1. Gunakan lah sudut pandang orang ke 3 dalam membuat Character Story. (Ubah kata-katanya pakai sudut pandang orang ke 3) 2. Perhatikan penempatan tanda baca (titik koma) di akhir kalimat atau akhir paragraf. Sudah di edit
kangRTM Posted May 8, 2022 Posted May 8, 2022 21 hours ago, Konss said: Sudah di edit Perbaiki. Gunakanlah sudut pandang orang ke 3 pada Story kamu, coba di telaah dan dimengerti lagi apa itu sudut pandang orang ke 3.
Konss Posted May 8, 2022 Author Posted May 8, 2022 4 jam yang lalu, lowkey said: Perbaiki. Gunakanlah sudut pandang orang ke 3 pada Story kamu, coba di telaah dan dimengerti lagi apa itu sudut pandang orang ke 3. maksudnya sudut pandang ke 3 apa ya?
kangRTM Posted May 9, 2022 Posted May 9, 2022 8 hours ago, Konss said: maksudnya sudut pandang ke 3 apa ya? Tidak dengan menyebut “aku” melainkan nama dari si karakter yang disebutkan pada story tersebut.
Konss Posted May 9, 2022 Author Posted May 9, 2022 14 jam yang lalu, lowkey said: Tidak dengan menyebut “aku” melainkan nama dari si karakter yang disebutkan pada story tersebut. Done
kangRTM Posted May 10, 2022 Posted May 10, 2022 20 hours ago, Konss said: Done Coba kamu cek lagi, itu masih ada kata penyebutan dari sudut orang pertama dan ketiga jadi ke campur-campur.
Konss Posted May 11, 2022 Author Posted May 11, 2022 On 9/5/2022 at 08.05, lowkey said: Tidak dengan menyebut “aku” melainkan nama dari si karakter yang disebutkan pada story tersebut. Done
kangRTM Posted May 11, 2022 Posted May 11, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Konss, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@lowkey JG:RP Helper Team
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