Gumplay Posted May 4, 2022 Posted May 4, 2022 (edited) Jeffro Johnson “Jeffro Johnson” is a name that given by Neal Johnson to his first child. He usually calls his son Jeff. Jeff never seen his mom since he was born. His mom, Molly Johnson was passed away when she gave birth to Jeff. Jeff was born in 15 December 1995, Chicago. He was a strong and very active child. His dad, Neal has rise him to become a tough guy who can protect himself from his bully that often annoys him in his school. Jeff grew up around cars, his dad, Neal was a skillful mechanic who spends all of his time mostly in the garage fixing a lot of cars. Neal also a very good driver, he taught Jeff how to drive like a pro racing. Because there was no legal track near the place where Neal lived, he taught Jeff how to drive in the street with dangerous speed. In age 22 Jeff got his first car, Neal gave it to him because he thought that his son was ready for real racing. Since then, every single night Jeff and Neal always go around Chicago streets, seeking for local car enthusiast then challenge them to race. Race after race Jeff and Neal manage to gained some respect from local community and made some money for upgrading their car. The word was spreading quick and a lot of street racer came to Chicago to challenge Neal and Jeff, they keep gained more respect even though they lose or win the race, that was because of their driving skill not to crash. 4 years been pass, and a lot of things changed in Chicago. The government over heard the illegal race in their city so they decided to make strict rules against street racer. This was not a good news for Neal and Jeff and also for the local street racers. There were a lot of police car patrolling every single night and a lot of street racers has been caught by the police. but this was not stopping Jeff and Neal to go for race, until one day when they have a “four cars” race the police was involved in their race. The race still going and the police chasing them down. One by one the racers were caught by the police until only Neal and Jeff left. There are too many police and finally Neal got pin by the police and crashed. Jeff was witness the accident through his rear mirror, and he manage to escaped from the police. 1 years later after buried his dad he decided to move to other city, and he decided to go to Los Santos. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: - Account UCP yang saya miliki: gumplay Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Gumplay Saya Gumplay selaku pemilik account UCP gumplay bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jeffro Johnson) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited May 6, 2022 by Gumplay
$Lost$ Posted May 4, 2022 Posted May 4, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Gumplay Posted May 4, 2022 Author Posted May 4, 2022 Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah)
$Lost$ Posted May 5, 2022 Posted May 5, 2022 Perbaiki ini. 1. Isi nama UCP dan tag akun forum kamu (@..). 2. Perhatikan grammar, dan titik koma.
Gumplay Posted May 5, 2022 Author Posted May 5, 2022 1. Isi nama UCP dan tag akun forum kamu (@gumplay). 2. Perhatikan grammar, dan titik koma. (done)
Gumplay Posted May 6, 2022 Author Posted May 6, 2022 3 hours ago, Lost said: @Gumplay Awal paragraf diawali dengan spasi (jarak) Sudah min
$Lost$ Posted May 7, 2022 Posted May 7, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Gumplay, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Lost JG:RP Helper Team
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