Salvatore Giordano Posted April 14, 2022 Posted April 14, 2022 (edited) Salvatore_Giordano On June 2, 1995 was born the child of a mafia family named Salvatore Giordano. Little Salva had been educated by his father to be the successor in the family business he owned, but unfortunately Salva was not interested in that. Little Salva is more interested in money but he is not interested in power because according to him power is controlled by money, and how he can become "the money". Salva's father understands what his son means but he still insists on making Salva a successor, until finally the second child of Claude Borghese was born, namely William Borghese. Little William was interested in becoming the successor of his family's business, he started training in martial arts, learning strategy and others, but unfortunately he did not meet the criteria for the successor his father wanted, but Salva was the right fit for it. William has a grudge against Salva until they both grow up. Salva's goal in life is to create a criminal organization in his father's city, Los Santos, but his father still wants to make Salva the successor of the business. Until finally when Salva wanted to go to Los Santos, William turned his departure away. William with several people he had paid for wanted to kill his brother. Salva, who was annoyed with his brother, fought back until finally Salva won. He who was tired also wanted to end the life of his brother but he canceled his wish. he grabbed William's neck and said "I will kill you, I want you to suffer!" said Salva. William, who was listening to him, was so annoyed that he slashed Salva's cheek with a knife and caused quite a serious wound. Salva looked back at his brother and beat him unconscious very hard, after he hit his brother he wrote a letter to his parents that said "I beat him -PBG". After writing the letter Salva continued his journey to Los Santos. 2 months have passed, until now Salva has become one of the members of The Marcelli Crew which was founded by several of his struggle partners long ago. Salva wrote back a letter to his parents, a short letter that read "I'm here". Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada karena tidak boleh lebih dari 1 ucp. Account Forum yang saya miliki:Salvatore Giordano Saya Salvatore Giordano selaku pemilik account UCP Arzxy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Salvatore_Giordano) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited April 17, 2022 by Salvatore Giordano Mengubah kata kata cs
$bubbles$ Posted April 14, 2022 Posted April 14, 2022 Halo @Salvatore Giordano, Sebelum melanjutkan revisi, mohon dijawab pertanyaan di bawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Tahoma, atau Verdana). Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri menggunakan tombol pada toolbar di atas. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme! ( Silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: https://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar. Untuk mengubah story / cerita character kamu, gunakan feature edit yang sudah disediakan: Spoiler
Salvatore Giordano Posted April 14, 2022 Author Posted April 14, 2022 (edited) Halo@bubbles saya akan menjawab pertanyaannya. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Tidak, karena tidak boleh memiliki lebih dari 1 ucp) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Tidak, hanya ini saja, Salvatore Giordano) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah ) Edited April 14, 2022 by Salvatore Giordano
$bubbles$ Posted April 15, 2022 Posted April 15, 2022 14 hours ago, Salvatore Giordano said: "the MONEY Bagian ini kalo mau dikutip, kasih tanda kutip dibelakangnya juga. Kemudian MONEY tidak perlu menggunakan huruf kapital semua. 14 hours ago, Salvatore Giordano said: Little William was interested in becoming the successor of his family's business, he started training in martial arts, learning strategy and others, but unfortunately he did not meet the criteria for the successor his father wanted, but Salva was the right fit for it. William has a grudge against Salva until they both grow up. Salva's goal in life is to create a criminal organization in his father's city, Los Santos, but his father still wants to make Salva the successor of the business. Until finally when Salva wanted to go to Los Santos, William turned his departure away. William with several people he had paid for wanted to kill his brother. ini dijadikan satu paragraf yang sama aja. 14 hours ago, Salvatore Giordano said: his sister Ini sister siapa? Diawal gak ada cerita adik perempuan tapi tiba-tiba ada sister. “Brother” mungkin maksudnya? 14 hours ago, Salvatore Giordano said: Salva, who was annoyed with his brother, fought back until finally Salva won. He who was tired also wanted to end the life of his sister but he canceled his wish. he grabbed William's neck and said "I will kill you, I want you to suffer!" said Salva. William, who was listening to him, was so annoyed that he slashed Salva's cheek with a knife and caused quite a serious wound. Salva looked back at his brother and beat him unconscious very hard, after he hit his sister he wrote a letter to his parents that said "I beat him -PBG". After writing the letter Salva continued his journey to Los Santos. 2 months have passed, until now Salva has become one of the members of The Marcelli Crew which was founded by several of his struggle partners long ago. Salva wrote back a letter to his parents, a short letter that read "I'm here". Ini dihadikan satu paragraf yang sama aja, digabung.
Salvatore Giordano Posted April 15, 2022 Author Posted April 15, 2022 (edited) https://i.postimg.cc/HWXLjSfY/516c12fd4638f6de38ab0fc0e04d0243-499x499x1.jpg On June 2, 1995 was born the child of a mafia family named Salvatore Giordano. Little Salva had been educated by his father to be the successor in the family business he owned, but unfortunately Salva was not interested in that. Little Salva is more interested in money but he is not interested in power because according to him power is controlled by money, and how he can become "the money". Salva's father understands what his son means but he still insists on making Salva a successor, until finally the second child of Claude Borghese was born, namely William Borghese. Little William was interested in becoming the successor of his family's business, he started training in martial arts, learning strategy and others, but unfortunately he did not meet the criteria for the successor his father wanted, but Salva was the right fit for it. William has a grudge against Salva until they both grow up. Salva's goal in life is to create a criminal organization in his father's city, Los Santos, but his father still wants to make Salva the successor of the business. Until finally when Salva wanted to go to Los Santos, William turned his departure away. William with several people he had paid for wanted to kill his brother. Salva, who was annoyed with his brother, fought back until finally Salva won. He who was tired also wanted to end the life of his brother but he canceled his wish. he grabbed William's neck and said "I will kill you, I want you to suffer!" said Salva. William, who was listening to him, was so annoyed that he slashed Salva's cheek with a knife and caused quite a serious wound. Salva looked back at his brother and beat him unconscious very hard, after he hit his brothet he wrote a letter to his parents that said "I beat him -PBG". After writing the letter Salva continued his journey to Los Santos. 2 months have passed, until now Salva has become one of the members of The Marcelli Crew which was founded by several of his struggle partners long ago. Salva wrote back a letter to his parents, a short letter that read "I'm here". Edited April 16, 2022 by Salvatore Giordano
$bubbles$ Posted April 16, 2022 Posted April 16, 2022 On 4/15/2022 at 2:17 PM, Salvatore Giordano said: https://i.postimg.cc/HWXLjSfY/516c12fd4638f6de38ab0fc0e04d0243-499x499x1.jpg On June 2, 1995 was born the child of a mafia family named Salvatore Giordano. Little Salva had been educated by his father to be the successor in the family business he owned, but unfortunately Salva was not interested in that. Little Salva is more interested in money but he is not interested in power because according to him power is controlled by money, and how he can become "the money". Salva's father understands what his son means but he still insists on making Salva a successor, until finally the second child of Claude Borghese was born, namely William Borghese. Little William was interested in becoming the successor of his family's business, he started training in martial arts, learning strategy and others, but unfortunately he did not meet the criteria for the successor his father wanted, but Salva was the right fit for it. William has a grudge against Salva until they both grow up. Salva's goal in life is to create a criminal organization in his father's city, Los Santos, but his father still wants to make Salva the successor of the business. Until finally when Salva wanted to go to Los Santos, William turned his departure away. William with several people he had paid for wanted to kill his brother. Salva, who was annoyed with his brother, fought back until finally Salva won. He who was tired also wanted to end the life of his brother but he canceled his wish. he grabbed William's neck and said "I will kill you, I want you to suffer!" said Salva. William, who was listening to him, was so annoyed that he slashed Salva's cheek with a knife and caused quite a serious wound. Salva looked back at his brother and beat him unconscious very hard, after he hit his brothet he wrote a letter to his parents that said "I beat him -PBG". After writing the letter Salva continued his journey to Los Santos. 2 months have passed, until now Salva has become one of the members of The Marcelli Crew which was founded by several of his struggle partners long ago. Salva wrote back a letter to his parents, a short letter that read "I'm here". Diedit aja di post awalnya, jangan di reply.
Salvatore Giordano Posted April 17, 2022 Author Posted April 17, 2022 Sudah ya sudah saya edit, terimakasih atas bantuannya
$bubbles$ Posted April 17, 2022 Posted April 17, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Salvatore Giordano, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@bubbles JG:RP Helper Team
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