MRiefkyR1 Posted April 9, 2022 Posted April 9, 2022 (edited) Alexander_Calvataro Alexander Calvataro is a young man who is now 24 years old born in Italy April 23, 1997. He has a sibling named Michell Calvataro. His family is a conglomerate in Italy. Since Alexander was 6 years old, Alexander lived in the care of someone else because his family was killed by people who were jealous of the wealth that his family had. He felt that his life had been ruined because of the loss of his entire family and he was very angry that the killer was never brought to justice and since then he decided to go to Lost Santos America so that he could live happily there and enjoy life without remembering the dark events of his childhood. He is a Christian. He started studying Music in college but did not finish his studies due to economic problems that befell him. Physically, Alexander does not have any disease. he has a height of 189 cm and a weight of 109 kg, black hair and black eyes. He never really got to know his parents, he was raised by his neighbours. He is currently single. The romance that Alexander felt for the last time with a cafe waitress named Whitley Moldova, a Belgian-born woman. They broke up because Whitley felt she couldn't understand what Alexander was feeling. Whitley Moldova can only pray that Alexander can find someone who can understand him and the dark times when Alexander was 6 years old. Alexander left for Los Santos, with little preparation. When he arrived in Los Santos he didn't know anyone so he had to work very hard to get a job to make a living. He started looking for work to earn money for his daily life. Alexander feels confident that he can prove to everyone that he can live happily and can be an example for everyone. Alexander has a desire to become a police officer in Lost santos because he wants to prove that being a police officer must be fair and can protect the community. He now works as a Trucker and odd jobs like street sweeper, miner and fishing to achieve his wish as a policeman Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya MRiefkyR1 selaku pemilik account UCP Impunity bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Alexander_Calvataro) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited April 10, 2022 by MRiefkyR1 mengubah spasi di bagian paragraf 2 dan 3 , merubah teks menjadi justify
$BwmEvolution$ Posted April 9, 2022 Posted April 9, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) PENTING: Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standar bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 6. Gunakan huruf kapital sesuai penempatan kata dan juga yang baik dan benar.
MRiefkyR1 Posted April 9, 2022 Author Posted April 9, 2022 1. Tidak 2.Kurang dari 1 bulan 3. Karakter Baru 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Di Rumah
$BwmEvolution$ Posted April 10, 2022 Posted April 10, 2022 Terimakasih atas jawaban yang telah diberikan. Dear @MRiefkyR1 setelah saya memeriksa Character Story milik kamu ada beberapa yang perlu diperbaiki. Setiap paragraf dijadikan justify (rata kiri-kanan) Enter paragraf 2 ke paragraf 3 cukup 1x aja. Note!! Diharapkan untuk mengecek ulang kembali agar tidak terjadi revisi kembali. Jangan bump thread ini jika belum 1x24 jam.
MRiefkyR1 Posted April 11, 2022 Author Posted April 11, 2022 On 4/10/2022 at 6:26 PM, BwmEvolution said: Terimakasih atas jawaban yang telah diberikan. Dear @MRiefkyR1 setelah saya memeriksa Character Story milik kamu ada beberapa yang perlu diperbaiki. Setiap paragraf dijadikan justify (rata kiri-kanan) Enter paragraf 2 ke paragraf 3 cukup 1x aja. Note!! Diharapkan untuk mengecek ulang kembali agar tidak terjadi revisi kembali. Jangan bump thread ini jika belum 1x24 jam. Revisi done
$BwmEvolution$ Posted April 12, 2022 Posted April 12, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @MRiefkyR1, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@BwmEvolution JG:RP Helper Team
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