Nugrahaniel Posted February 20, 2022 Posted February 20, 2022 (edited) Limon Cortez Limon Cortez is a teenager who was born on March 28, 1995 and raised in Fort Carson. He has a selfish and rude personality, he is also hated by his neighbors around his house due to Limon Cortez's bad nature. At the age of 19 he had committed criminal things such as robbing or stealing. Limon's family is also not harmonious, Limon's father and mother often fight and it also makes Limon not feel at home in the family, apart from not being harmonious, his family is also not a wealthy family. One night, Limon's mother and father had a big fight. Limon immediately left the house to calm down. He strolled around Fort Carson thinking about his fate if he continued to live in the family. As he was walking leisurely he was approached by a man in a black jacket and the man offered Limon illegal goods, namely drugs. Initially Limon refused the offer for the item but he was curious about the item and finally he wanted to buy it with the remaining money. After buying it, he immediately went home and checked whether his father and mother were not fighting anymore. When he arrived at the house, Limon was surprised that only his mother was at home, out of curiosity he asked his mother what had happened between her father and mother. Then his mother told him that Limon's father had cheated on him and decided to leave the house or leave the house. But Limon didn't care about his father's departure, instead he immediately left his mother and went straight to his room. After arriving at the room he immediately took out the items he had bought and tasted them directly. When he taste it he immediately let go of it because of its bitter taste. He immediately threw it out of the house because he didn't know what it was and regretted spending the rest of his money on it. The next day he woke up and found that the house was deserted. He was confused because his mother was not home. Then Limon checked all over the house and did not find his mother's whereabouts. At first he did not feel worried and did not care where his mother went. He instead took the money that was in his mother's cupboard to look for breakfast outside. After breakfast he walked to his friend's house which is around Fort Carson while thinking about finances. After arriving Limon immediately met his friend and asked for work advice for Limon. Then his friend suggested that Limon go to Los Santos because there are a lot of jobs that can be done. Limon thought about his friend's suggestion and asked his friend about life in Los Santos. After the day started in the afternoon Limon went home and when he got home he found his mother was not home yet and the condition of the house was still quiet. He even began to worry about his mother's whereabouts. A few days passed, Limon began to feel lonely without a mother at home and began to run out of money. Limon finally started planning to go looking for work to Los Santos at the suggestion of his friend at the time. The next day he started packing his things and left for Los Santos by bus. Arriving there at a loss as to what he should do first. Then he decided to look for the cheapest lodging in Los Santos. Finally he found an inn in the Willowfield area and he began to calm down a little because there was a place for him to go home. Next he started looking for work in shops around Iddlewood but he was not accepted in any shop. Then he accidentally saw a person whose car broke down or couldn't start. At first he didn't care about the person but after he thought he felt sorry for the person and approached him and tried to help as best he could. Limon immediately checked the person's car engine and observed the damage to the car. Limon began to try - try to repair the car engine with all the knowledge he knew about engines. After a while the car finally started and the person thanked Limon very much and gave him the money. The person also suggested Limon to work at the Workshop in Ganton. The next day Limon tried to come to the workshop and meet the owner of the workshop. Limon immediately told the owner of the workshop that he wanted to work there. Then Limon was tested for his mechanical ability and it turned out that the results of the test were quite surprising for the Workshop Owner. Limon was immediately accepted as a mechanic there and started his career as a mechanic. After several months of work he finally started to enjoy his life in Los Santos. He also started saving money and changed his bad attitude for the better and become more polite. Then one night Limon accidentally saw his mother around the Ganton walking around the street. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/207561-cn-nugraha-niel-to-limon-cortez-nugrahaniel/#comment-2005589 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Nugrahaniel selaku pemilik account UCP Nugrahaniel bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Limon Cortez) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 21, 2022 by Nugrahaniel
lyphothetic Posted February 20, 2022 Posted February 20, 2022 Baik, Berikut beberapa pertanyaan yang harus kamu jawab dengan jujur: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimanakah kamu biasanya bermain JGRP ? (Rumah/Warnet/Lainnya) Baca petunjuk dibawah ini! (PENTING) Upload foto karakter kamu ke media hosting https://postimages.org/. Jangan menggunakan foto karakter GTA, kartun, anime, dan sebagainya. Kamu bisa mencari di Google untuk referensi foto karakter, misalkan foto artis terkenal, penyanyi, aktor, binaragawan, dan sebagainya. Posisikan foto tersebut di tengah (align center) dan sesuaikan ukurannya (jangan terlalu besar dan jangan terlalu kecil). Character Story kamu harus menggunakan Sudut Pandang Orang Ketiga (ia, dia, mereka, atau nama karakter kamu sendiri). Pastikan Character Story kamu sudah mencapai 300 kata dan terpecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraf. Pada setiap awalan paragraf, berikan jarak sekiranya 5 kali SPASI. Berikan jarak 1 baris kosong untuk memisahkan antara paragraf pertama, kedua dan seterusnya. Seluruh paragraf harus menggunakan format pengetikan Justify (rata kanan dan kiri) Gunakan font yang disarankan, yaitu Arial, Calibri atau Tahoma diikuti dengan ukuran Font 14. Berikan SPASI setelah penggunaan tanda baca koma (,) ataupun titik (.). Pastikan bahwa Character Story kamu terbebas dari unsur plagiarisme, kamu bisa mengecek lagi menggunakan tools https://www.duplichecker.com/ Perhatikan EYD (Ejaan Yang Disempurnakan) pada Character Story kamu, gunakanlah Bahasa Indonesia yang baku serta tata cara penulisannya yang baik dan benar. Kamu bisa membaca artikel INI sebagai titik acuan kamu.
Nugrahaniel Posted February 20, 2022 Author Posted February 20, 2022 1 jam yang lalu, peanutbutter said: Baik, Berikut beberapa pertanyaan yang harus kamu jawab dengan jujur: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimanakah kamu biasanya bermain JGRP ? (Rumah/Warnet/Lainnya) Baca petunjuk dibawah ini! (PENTING) Upload foto karakter kamu ke media hosting https://postimages.org/. Jangan menggunakan foto karakter GTA, kartun, anime, dan sebagainya. Kamu bisa mencari di Google untuk referensi foto karakter, misalkan foto artis terkenal, penyanyi, aktor, binaragawan, dan sebagainya. Posisikan foto tersebut di tengah (align center) dan sesuaikan ukurannya (jangan terlalu besar dan jangan terlalu kecil). Character Story kamu harus menggunakan Sudut Pandang Orang Ketiga (ia, dia, mereka, atau nama karakter kamu sendiri). Pastikan Character Story kamu sudah mencapai 300 kata dan terpecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraf. Pada setiap awalan paragraf, berikan jarak sekiranya 5 kali SPASI. Berikan jarak 1 baris kosong untuk memisahkan antara paragraf pertama, kedua dan seterusnya. Seluruh paragraf harus menggunakan format pengetikan Justify (rata kanan dan kiri) Gunakan font yang disarankan, yaitu Arial, Calibri atau Tahoma diikuti dengan ukuran Font 14. Berikan SPASI setelah penggunaan tanda baca koma (,) ataupun titik (.). Pastikan bahwa Character Story kamu terbebas dari unsur plagiarisme, kamu bisa mengecek lagi menggunakan tools https://www.duplichecker.com/ Perhatikan EYD (Ejaan Yang Disempurnakan) pada Character Story kamu, gunakanlah Bahasa Indonesia yang baku serta tata cara penulisannya yang baik dan benar. Kamu bisa membaca artikel INI sebagai titik acuan kamu. 1. Tidak 2. 6 bulan - 1 taun 3. Nemchange 4. Tidak 5. Tidak 6. Rumah
lyphothetic Posted February 20, 2022 Posted February 20, 2022 Baik, ada beberapa revisi dari saya. Antara lain sebagai berikut: Gunakan justify (rata kanan-kiri) pada keseluruhan paragraf. 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: Character: Limon Cortez Story: Bagian ini tolong dihapus aja. 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: One night 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: Fort Carson Keterangan waktu, setelahnya gunakan koma. "One night," dan "Fort Carson," 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: of the item "For the item" 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: When he tasted it Beri jeda, "When he taste it," 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: limon Subjek (Orang) gunakan kapitalisasi. 5 jam yang lalu, Nugrahaniel said: and more polite. "Become more polite." Biar lebih pas grammarnya, itu verb. Silahkan di revisi, terimakasih.
Nugrahaniel Posted February 21, 2022 Author Posted February 21, 2022 14 jam yang lalu, peanutbutter said: Baik, ada beberapa revisi dari saya. Antara lain sebagai berikut: Gunakan justify (rata kanan-kiri) pada keseluruhan paragraf. Bagian ini tolong dihapus aja. Keterangan waktu, setelahnya gunakan koma. "One night," dan "Fort Carson," "For the item" Beri jeda, "When he taste it," Subjek (Orang) gunakan kapitalisasi. "Become more polite." Biar lebih pas grammarnya, itu verb. Silahkan di revisi, terimakasih. Edited mind
lyphothetic Posted February 21, 2022 Posted February 21, 2022 Accepted, hit the street and happy roleplaying amigo!
lyphothetic Posted February 21, 2022 Posted February 21, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Nugrahaniel I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@lyphothetic JG:RP Helper Team
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