Robert Gunawan Posted February 18, 2022 Posted February 18, 2022 (edited) Jack Badar Character: Jack Badar Story: In 1999 a child named Jack Badar was born, usually called Jack. Jack is a devoted child to parents. He always helps his mother in cooking, clean and also always diligent in learning. Jack Badar attended school in Pakistan, He was always a class champion, Jack also participated in inter-school competitions, and got the 1st place, Then one day his father gave him a gift that is Mobile Phone, But since then he has been less focused on learning and often late school. Jack's daily life began to change his days just playing mobile phones, eating, sleeping, sleeping irregularly, he also rarely helped his mother anymore. One day his father found out that Jack became lazy because of mobile phones, his father asked for a mobile phone given at that time, but Jack refused and was angry. Time has passed, Jack is now 21 years old, his father told Jack to find a job but he still wants to work where, Then his mother told him that in America there is a Friend Jack in high school, Jack also called his Friend named Chan. After talking about work problems, Jack asked his father and mother, He wanted to find work in America, His father and mother also helped him, to accompany to the airport. Jack was getting ready to go to the airport, He immediately bought a ticket and left for America, A few days later he arrived in America, I told Chan to take me to the airport, A few minutes later the theme came and Jack was told to get in his car. A few months later, Jack worked as a bus driver, Actually he was no longer at home in America but one day the theme questioned him, you want a better job is not the same, Jack also asked what job it is, Delivering illegal goods in the form of weapons, At first Jack refused, But Chan betrayed he would kill both parents if he did not want to, Jack finally wanted to because he had to. Jack's nature began to fall since his new job From the former good now a handyman, Then one day he was called Friend Chan he was told to go to his house, 5 minutes later he arrived, Chan now we have decided you want to reach, Jack why indeed, our business is already known to the police this danger of cooled down we parted ways, Jack okay if that's what you want, see you guys I Waleed as the owner of the UCP Aquinas account is willing if my character mentioned above (Jack Badar) is tamed permanent if the Character story I made above is from someone else's story. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya Robert Gunawan selaku pemilik account UCP Jacki bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Jack Badar) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 21, 2022 by Robert Gunawan
Reapzt Posted February 19, 2022 Posted February 19, 2022 Sebelum saya review lebih lanjut, tolong jawab pertanyaan saya dengan sejujur-jujurnya! 1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu) 4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) 6. Buat CS ini di rumah atau di warnet? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! 1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. 4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
Robert Gunawan Posted February 19, 2022 Author Posted February 19, 2022 1. yes 2.yes 3.yes 4.yes 5.1-3 bulan 6.dirumah
Reapzt Posted February 20, 2022 Posted February 20, 2022 I will revise your CS here On 2/19/2022 at 5:32 AM, Robert Gunawan said: parents Change correct pronoun usage. On 2/19/2022 at 5:32 AM, Robert Gunawan said: also Add missing verb. On 2/19/2022 at 5:32 AM, Robert Gunawan said: to pick up to the airport Change correct pronoun usage and preposition. On 2/19/2022 at 5:32 AM, Robert Gunawan said: 1 Months passed Cange to a singular noun. On 2/19/2022 at 5:32 AM, Robert Gunawan said: temenya Chan he was told to go to his house, 5 minutes later he arrived, Chan now we have decided you want to reach, Jack why indeed, our business is already known to the police this danger of mendingan Correct your spelling.
Robert Gunawan Posted February 20, 2022 Author Posted February 20, 2022 In 1999, a child named Jack Badar was born, usually called Jack. Jack is a devoted child to parents. He always helps his mother in cooking, clean clean and also always diligent in learning. Jack Badar attended school in Pakistan, He was always a class champion, Jack also participated in inter-school competitions, and got the 1st place, Then one day his father gave him a gift that is Mobile Phone, But since then he has been less focused on learning and often late school. Jack's daily life began to change his days just playing mobile phones, eating, sleeping, sleeping irregularly, he also rarely helped his mother anymore. One day his father found out that Jack became lazy because of mobile phones, his father asked for a mobile phone given at that time, but Jack refused and was angry. Time has passed, Jack is now 21 years old, his father told Jack to find a job but he still wants to work where, Then his mother told him that in America there is a Friend Jack in high school, Jack also called his Friend named Chan. After talking about work problems, Jack asked his father and mother, He wanted to find work in America, His father and mother also helped him, to accompany to the airport. Jack was getting ready to go to the airport, He immediately bought a ticket and left for America, A few days later he arrived in America, He called Chan his theme to pick up to the airport, A few minutes later the theme came and Jack was told to get in his car. A few months later, Jack worked as a bus driver, Actually he was no longer at home in America but one day the theme questioned him, you want a better job is not the same, Jack also asked what job it is, Delivering illegal goods in the form of weapons, At first Jack refused, But Chan betrayed he would kill both parents if he did not want to, Jack finally wanted to because he had to. Jack's nature began to fall since his new job From the former good now a handyman, Then one day he was called Friend Chan he was told to go to his house, 5 minutes later he arrived, Chan now we have decided you want to reach, Jack why indeed, our business is already known to the police this danger of cooled down we parted ways, Jack okay if that's what you want, see you guys
Reapzt Posted February 22, 2022 Posted February 22, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Robert Gunawan, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Reapzt JG:RP Helper Team
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