Impostor Player Posted February 15, 2022 Posted February 15, 2022 (edited) Galen_Chalmers Galen Chalmers, also known as Galen O’Chalmers was born in Edinburgh, Scotland on 3rd February 1990. He graduated from the University of Edinburgh as a bachelor of International Business. His stepfather is Davy Gilmore, who is the leader of a criminal organization, the organization operates illegally in the distribution of weapons and drugs in Glasgow, Scotland. Since he was a child, he only met his father a few times. He lives alone with his mother in Edinburgh. He has no siblings, so his mother’s love is never dividing, so Galen grows well even though he is not with his father. His youth passed well, as children in general, like spending the annual vacation at his grandma's house, playing in the snow in winter with his cousin, and others. But with one notable difference, Galen has a disorder, he likes to use his brain even in the little things, he is very perfectionist and likes too much detail. It made him think all the time. He often has trouble sleeping at night, when he was in his bed and he was getting ready to sleep, but his mind was still working on the things that had happened that day. That's why, the older he gets, the more he needs medicine to help him calm his mind. Galen's father met him in Edinburgh when he was 32. His father told him to go to Los Santos in the United States of America on the pretext that there was a good job there. With his mother's approval, Galen flew to Los Santos. His father said that later there will be a friend named Owen who will help him in Los Santos. After arriving at Los Santos International Airport, he lived with Owen and planned to start a business in Los Santos with the help of some people they knew. After a few years, Galen and Owen successfully opened a bar in Verona, Los Santos. They are helped by some people of Scottish descent. After success in that business, Galen and Owen plan to open several new businesses with a collaboration between the original Los Santos company. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: galgalih Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Impostor Player Saya Impostor Player selaku pemilik account UCP galgalih bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Galen Chalmers) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited February 18, 2022 by Impostor Player Menambahkan cerita 1
$Sructs$ Posted February 15, 2022 Posted February 15, 2022 Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki
Impostor Player Posted February 15, 2022 Author Posted February 15, 2022 4 minutes ago, Sructs said: Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki 1. Betul 2. Tidak 3. Tidak 4. Rumah, (sesekali di warnet) 5. Wifi 6. Sudah 7. Sudah 1
$Sructs$ Posted February 15, 2022 Posted February 15, 2022 oke saya akan memeriksa character story kamu 1 perbiaki lagi grammer kamu saya menemukan beberapa kata yang kurang tepat 2. perdalam lagi tujuan character kamu dalam membuat character story 3. dalam membuat character story minimal 300 kata dan kamu masih kurang coba di perbaiki 4. perhatikan arti setiap kata agar saat di baca memiliki arti dan tujuan yang jelas, saya menemukan beberapa kata yang kurang tepat tapi masih kamu cantumkan
Impostor Player Posted February 16, 2022 Author Posted February 16, 2022 6 hours ago, Sructs said: oke saya akan memeriksa character story kamu 1 perbiaki lagi grammer kamu saya menemukan beberapa kata yang kurang tepat 2. perdalam lagi tujuan character kamu dalam membuat character story 3. dalam membuat character story minimal 300 kata dan kamu masih kurang coba di perbaiki 4. perhatikan arti setiap kata agar saat di baca memiliki arti dan tujuan yang jelas, saya menemukan beberapa kata yang kurang tepat tapi masih kamu cantumkan 1. Sudah saya perbaiki min 2. Sudah 3. Sudah 306 kata 4. Sudah diperbaiki 1
Impostor Player Posted February 18, 2022 Author Posted February 18, 2022 36 minutes ago, Sructs said: tabahkan lagi alur cerita character kamu Sudah, baru saya tambahkan min. 1
$Sructs$ Posted February 18, 2022 Posted February 18, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Impostor Player I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Sructs JG:RP Helper Team
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