Dimas Ramadhan Posted January 24, 2022 Posted January 24, 2022 (edited) Robert_Maschler Robert Maschler is a young man who was born on September 28, 2000 to a simple family, his two fathers are employees of a famous office in the Miami, Florida area and his mother is an auto mechanic in a workshop.In 2007 he entered kindergarten, he was quite active in participating in school activities, after entering elementary school Robert was bullied by his classmates because of his strange appearance and Robert was depressed but he remained in school and finished elementary school. After graduating from elementary school, he complained to his parents not to go to junior high school, but his father and mother did not approve and entered Robert also attended junior high school and was ranked in the top ten in his class and graduated from school with satisfactory grades. During the holidays he also followed his mother's activities as a mechanic as well as deepened his automotive knowledge and it seemed that Robert felt happy and comfortable in the world of mechanics and his mother saw the development of her son, and after Robert finished helping his mother. He and his mother returned home and he also immediately talked to his mother so that Robert would not continue his schooling and wanted to help his mother become a mechanic because he likes the automotive field but his mother denied this and said she would discuss it with his father. After his father came home they also talked in the dining room discussing this but his father said not to quit school and better go to a vocational high school, especially in the automotive field which he was interested in. After that conversation, Robert started to think about following his father's advice and he tried to enroll in a vocational school which has a pretty good automotive field, after getting it he started school, he was very happy and it seems he is very much channeling his interest in that field to the subject he is currently pursuing. interested and therefore on his graduation robert he received a scholarship at the famous campus in Miami florida namely Seminole Junior College. After knowing this he was very happy and cheerful then returned to his house to tell him about it, but when he got home he got news that his parents died in a car accident when he wanted to go to the mini market to buy his dinner, after receiving the news he was very happy. devastated and depressed because of that but the community that his mother followed came and the chairman encouraged robert and asked him to stay in school so that what his mother wanted came true then the chairman asked to consider this community as his second family and if he needs anything, something can ask from they. Then Robert was raised as a younger brother by Darrius Hamilton for his survival and to support Robert until he got a job. And that is the story of Robert Maschler's life and until now he is still following the existing storyline. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Dimsbang Account Forum yang saya miliki:@Dimas Ramadhan Saya Dimas Ramadhan selaku pemilik account UCP Dimsbang bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Robert_Maschler) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited January 27, 2022 by Dimas Ramadhan
$Honey7$ Posted January 24, 2022 Posted January 24, 2022 Oke perkenalkan saya @Honey7, sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. • Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) • Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) • Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) • Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) • Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) • Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Dirumah / Di warnet) Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! 1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) 4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 6. Penggunaan huruf kapital yang baik dan benar harap diperbaiki.
Dimas Ramadhan Posted January 24, 2022 Author Posted January 24, 2022 • Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Tidak • Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? (3-6 Bulan) • Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Buat baru • Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? tidak • Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak • Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Dirumah
$Honey7$ Posted January 24, 2022 Posted January 24, 2022 Dear @Dimas Ramadhan, terima kasih atas jawaban yang diberikan. Setelah saya melihat Character Story anda saya menemukan beberapa kesalahan yang harus diperbaiki, antara lain: Tolong perbaiki EYD, dan penggunaan tanda baca yang ada. Tolong letakkan foto character anda di tengah. 5 jam yang lalu, Dimas Ramadhan said: Robert Maschler Ini di hapus saja. 5 jam yang lalu, Dimas Ramadhan said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki:Tidak Ada Ini tolong diisi dengan UCP dan account forum yang anda gunakan
Dimas Ramadhan Posted January 25, 2022 Author Posted January 25, 2022 9 jam yang lalu, Honey7 said: Dear @Dimas Ramadhan, terima kasih atas jawaban yang diberikan. Setelah saya melihat Character Story anda saya menemukan beberapa kesalahan yang harus diperbaiki, antara lain: Tolong perbaiki EYD, dan penggunaan tanda baca yang ada. Tolong letakkan foto character anda di tengah. Ini di hapus saja. Ini tolong diisi dengan UCP dan account forum yang anda gunakan Sudah saya bereskan bang.
$Honey7$ Posted January 25, 2022 Posted January 25, 2022 Paragraf pertamanya tolong diperbaiki, itu kata repair shop nya digabung aja sama di bawahnya. Tolong berikan baris tambahan pada setiap paragraf, jangan sampai bersambung begitu antar paragrafnya.
Dimas Ramadhan Posted January 26, 2022 Author Posted January 26, 2022 10 jam yang lalu, Honey7 said: Paragraf pertamanya tolong diperbaiki, itu kata repair shop nya digabung aja sama di bawahnya. Tolong berikan baris tambahan pada setiap paragraf, jangan sampai bersambung begitu antar paragrafnya. Done Sir.
$Honey7$ Posted January 27, 2022 Posted January 27, 2022 On 24/1/2022 at 18.39, Dimas Ramadhan said: Robert Maschler is a young man who was born on September 28, 2000 to a simple family, his two fathers are employees of a famous office in the Miami, Florida area and his mother is an auto mechanic in a workshop. In 2007 he entered kindergarten, he was quite active in participating in school activities, after entering elementary school Robert was bullied by his classmates because of his strange appearance and Robert was depressed but he remained in school and finished elementary school. After graduating from elementary school, he complained to his parents not to go to junior high school, but his father and mother did not approve and entered Robert also attended junior high school and was ranked in the top ten in his class and graduated from school with satisfactory grades. Itu disambung saja. jadi: Robert Maschler is a young man who was born on September 28, 2000 to a simple family, his two fathers are employees of a famous office in the Miami, Florida area and his mother is an auto mechanic in a workshop.In 2007 he entered kindergarten, he was quite active in participating in school activities, after entering elementary school Robert was bullied by his classmates because of his strange appearance and Robert was depressed but he remained in school and finished elementary school. After graduating from elementary school, he complained to his parents not to go to junior high school, but his father and mother did not approve and entered Robert also attended junior high school and was ranked in the top ten in his class and graduated from school with satisfactory grades.
Dimas Ramadhan Posted January 27, 2022 Author Posted January 27, 2022 6 jam yang lalu, Honey7 said: Itu disambung saja. jadi: Robert Maschler is a young man who was born on September 28, 2000 to a simple family, his two fathers are employees of a famous office in the Miami, Florida area and his mother is an auto mechanic in a workshop.In 2007 he entered kindergarten, he was quite active in participating in school activities, after entering elementary school Robert was bullied by his classmates because of his strange appearance and Robert was depressed but he remained in school and finished elementary school. After graduating from elementary school, he complained to his parents not to go to junior high school, but his father and mother did not approve and entered Robert also attended junior high school and was ranked in the top ten in his class and graduated from school with satisfactory grades. seperti permintaan anda bang, sudah saya bereskan
$Honey7$ Posted January 28, 2022 Posted January 28, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Dimas Ramadhan, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Honey7 JG:RP Helper Team
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