Darijauh Posted January 14, 2022 Posted January 14, 2022 (edited) Khalil_Zione November 15, 2003, a child named Khalil Zione was born in Los Santos, precisely in the district named Ganton, he was born to a mother named Daisha Elona and a father named Jevon Zione. Khalil was also born from a simple family that is arguably not harmonious, since childhood he has often seen his parents squabble, sometimes even trivial things make his parents squabble, he rarely gets special attention from his father, only his mother cares about him even so he still goes with enthusiasm without complaing about the situation he is type of child who is easy to get along and friendly he is not pasive to new people. When Khalil was 16 years old he attended a criminal district called Crenshaw High School, he also made a naughty friend. One day Khalil was invited by his friend to hang out, at that time his friend was talking about drugs he was confused because he didn't know about the topic being discussed at that time, suddenly a friend approached him and whispered to him to deliver a package containing drugs with a hefty fee big, he innocently immediately accepted the offer because he thought he needed some money to buy new shoes and bags for his school, he immediately hurry up to deliver the package containing the drug package, he immediately put the package in the designated place and he managed to deliver the package safely. It was Khalil's first acquaintance with drugs. One day when he was 18 years old he was shocked to see his father lying limply on the floor with 5 live bullet wounds lodged in his father's body, he quickly called an ambulance but bad luck happened to him his father died before the ambulance come, the mastermind and motivation in the murder is unknown but he assumes his father has a business rival. At that time he became the breadwinner of the family. After that incident he became sad and changes his personality into a closed child and the opposite of his former self, but his sadness must end because he has become the backbone of the family but he didn't know where else to work. Finally, he thought and decided to becom a drug dealer at the age of 18. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 - 6 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Farisra1 Account Forum yang saya miliki:Farisra dan ini Saya Darijauh selaku pemilik account UCP Farisra1 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Khalil_Zione) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited January 17, 2022 by Darijauh
kangRTM Posted January 14, 2022 Posted January 14, 2022 Sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu dan mohon untuk dijawab sejujur-jujurnya. 1. Apakah kamu punya akun UCP yang lain selain akun ini? 2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) 4. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 5. Berapa karakter yang kamu buat di UCP kamu? (sebutkan nama karakternya) 6. Apakah cerita kamu terdiri dari minimal 300 kata? 7. Apakah kamu bersedia untuk dibanned apabila kamu ketahuan telah plagiasi Character Story orang lain? Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini!1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri.3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories.4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).6. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
Darijauh Posted January 14, 2022 Author Posted January 14, 2022 1. Ada itu udah tertera diatas 2. Sekitar 3 bulanan 3. Baru buat 4. Sudah 5. Hanya ini 6. Iya 7. Siap
kangRTM Posted January 16, 2022 Posted January 16, 2022 Perbaiki. 1. Pastikan format penulisan tiap paragraf Justify yaitu rata kanan kiri. 2. Pastikan 1 paragraf 4 bait, jika ada yang kurang silahkan di tambahkan. 3. Isi dengan nama UCP yang sekarang kamu miliki saja. On 1/15/2022 at 1:48 AM, Darijauh said: Account UCP yang saya miliki:
Darijauh Posted January 17, 2022 Author Posted January 17, 2022 Udah saya benerin min, coba tolong di cek lagi
kangRTM Posted January 17, 2022 Posted January 17, 2022 On 1/15/2022 at 1:48 AM, Darijauh said: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Farisra,riis dan Farisra1(yang terpakai Isi dengan yang kamu pakai aja 'Farisra1'
Darijauh Posted January 17, 2022 Author Posted January 17, 2022 (edited) Udah mint Edited January 17, 2022 by Darijauh
kangRTM Posted January 17, 2022 Posted January 17, 2022 On 1/15/2022 at 1:48 AM, Darijauh said: Khalil_Zione Ini nama diatas fotonya tolong di format center ya.
kangRTM Posted January 17, 2022 Posted January 17, 2022 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Darijauh, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@giboy1 JG:RP Helper Team
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