Reihan Ersa Posted December 29, 2021 Posted December 29, 2021 Keith_Malcolm Keith Malcolm was born in 8 May 2002 in Jefferson, Los Santos. His parent died because of a car accident when he was 2 years old, so he grew up with his grandmother. He was known as a very smart kid in school and won many olympic trophies. By the time, he graduates from senior high school, he was about to continue his college in Greenglass College in Las Venturas, but unfortunately, his grandmother had brain cancer. Keith was depressed and shocked that his beloved grandmother fell sick, so now all he could do is find a part time job to pay operation bills of his grandmother. Keith decided that he would be a shopkeeper at minimarket in Idlewood. He worked everyday and take every overtime shift until he was promoted to be employee of the month. But he didn't earned enough money to pay the hospital bills. Concerned about his financial, Keith contacted his best friend “Jaylen” that can help him earning money. Jaylen is known as a troublemaker at school, he was so naughty that he was dropped out of school. They decided to meet each other at the Ganton Bar. Keith was shocked when he saw Jaylen for the first time after a long time, whole of Jaylen body was covered in tattoos and piercings. After some conversation, they decided to rob a house in Richman. Jaylen hand Keith a pistol that could come in handy later tonight. Keith was shocked because he has never held a gun before. Actually, Keith doesn’t want to, but this is his last chance. At night, they started to do the operation. They broke into the back door with pliers, took things that seems worth start from jewelry, money, electronics. Luckily, their first robbery went well and made it out unnoticed. Keith is finally able to pay his grandmother's hospital bills, he feels happy yet disappointed with himself. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/199641-cn-ruslan_aleksei-to-keith_malcolm-hittori/#comment-1934942 Account UCP yang saya miliki: Hittori Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Reihan Ersa Saya Reihan Ersa selaku pemilik account UCP Hittori bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Keith_Malcolm) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Folium$ Posted December 30, 2021 Posted December 30, 2021 Halo, saya akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal. Apakah character yang akan kamu gunakan ini sudah mencapai level tiga? Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini berjumlah tiga ratus kata? Sebutkan semua akun UCP yang kamu miliki sejujur-jujurnya! Apakah kamu sudah membaca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar? Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Story yang sudah kamu buat.
Reihan Ersa Posted December 30, 2021 Author Posted December 30, 2021 • Sudah • Sudah • Hanya Hittori • Sudah dan Siap
$Folium$ Posted December 31, 2021 Posted December 31, 2021 On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: By the time he graduates from Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "time". On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: Greenglass college Greenglass College. On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: Las Venturas, but unfortunately his grandmother Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "unfortunately". On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: promoted to be Employee of the Kata "Employee" di sini tidak memerlukan huruf kapital. On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: But still the money he earned Sebaiknya kamu ubah menjadi "But he didn't earned enough money". On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: Ganton bar Ganton Bar. On 12/29/2021 at 10:32 PM, Reihan Ersa said: whole Jaylen body Tambahkan kata "of" setelah kata "whole".
Reihan Ersa Posted December 31, 2021 Author Posted December 31, 2021 3 jam yang lalu, Folium said: Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "time". Greenglass College. Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "unfortunately". Kata "Employee" di sini tidak memerlukan huruf kapital. Sebaiknya kamu ubah menjadi "But he didn't earned enough money". Ganton Bar. Tambahkan kata "of" setelah kata "whole". mohon dicek kembali min
$Folium$ Posted January 3, 2022 Posted January 3, 2022 Dear @Reihan Ersa I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted Character Story, we have reviewed your Character Story, and we have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your Character Story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this Character Story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Folium JG:RP Helper Team
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