86vchC Posted December 14, 2021 Posted December 14, 2021 (edited) Adam_Sawyer One night in 1999, there was a little boy who cried after being born in a hospital in a town called Rio De Janeiro, Brazil, the little boy was named Adam and his last name was given the name Sawyer by his father but that day was the most unfortunate day in the little boy's life, because after returning from the hospital, his father was shot by group of street gangs and since then Adam has never known his father. After that his age increased and he excelled in his studies at school, his mother was very proud of his son, but after his age increased to a teenager of 13 years, his education had begun to decline, his mother always reprimanded him, he had started befriending gang members who were older than him, started smoking, tried to shoot, and eventually he became member of the gang, by the time he was 13 he had 7 subordinates in the gang. By the time he rose to 15 he already had a high rank in the gang, one night, they drank wine together and one of them told a storythat seemed to be similar to the story of his own father's death, and that same night he was already planning to kill the gang leader, because he was the one who killed Adam's father, he was already planning that with his three good friends named Paulo and Antonio, the plan went smoothly and one knew the three of them killed the gang leader. After the incident they left Brazil and came to the city of Los Santos, they worked hard to earn money, and after that theybought their own house in Los Santos city, but after a year living there,there was news from Adam's friend, his mother had died of a lung disease, and died in the hospital,. Adam very sad, rarely went to work and rarely ate afterwards, his body became thin and lifeless. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: 86vchC Account Forum yang saya miliki:86vchC Saya 86vchC selaku pemilik account UCP 86vchC bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Adam_Sawyer) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited December 15, 2021 by 86vchC
$Sructs$ Posted December 14, 2021 Posted December 14, 2021 Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki
86vchC Posted December 14, 2021 Author Posted December 14, 2021 Just now, Sructs said: Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki 1. Iya 2. Tidak 3. Tidak 4. Rumah 5. Wifi 6. Udah 7. Udah mint
$Sructs$ Posted December 14, 2021 Posted December 14, 2021 oke saya akan memeriksa character story kamu 1. gunakan foto yang sesuai dengan character kamu 2. rapihkan lagi paragraf kamu dengan cara di Justify dulu 3. setiap 100 kata buat paragraf baru 4. perdalam lagi pendalaman character kamu dalam membuat character story 5. perbaiki Grammar kamu saya menemu beberapa kata yang kurang tepat dan bisa dibilang tidak perlu di cantumkan contoh kecil: the name Sawyer by his own biological father but that day kata biological bisa di hapus karena sudah jelas dia itu ayah kamu 6. gunakan font arial dengan ukuran font minimal 14
86vchC Posted December 15, 2021 Author Posted December 15, 2021 7 hours ago, Sructs said: oke saya akan memeriksa character story kamu 1. gunakan foto yang sesuai dengan character kamu 2. rapihkan lagi paragraf kamu dengan cara di Justify dulu 3. setiap 100 kata buat paragraf baru 4. perdalam lagi pendalaman character kamu dalam membuat character story 5. perbaiki Grammar kamu saya menemu beberapa kata yang kurang tepat dan bisa dibilang tidak perlu di cantumkan contoh kecil: the name Sawyer by his own biological father but that day kata biological bisa di hapus karena sudah jelas dia itu ayah kamu 6. gunakan font arial dengan ukuran font minimal 14 kayaknya udah nih mint
$Sructs$ Posted December 15, 2021 Posted December 15, 2021 itu setiap mau bikin kalimat baru kamu enter ya? coba biarkan saja tidak perlu di enter
86vchC Posted December 15, 2021 Author Posted December 15, 2021 21 minutes ago, Sructs said: itu setiap mau bikin kalimat baru kamu enter ya? coba biarkan saja tidak perlu di enter udah nih min
$Sructs$ Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @86vchC I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Sructs JG:RP Helper Team
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