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Juan_Batista


 

 

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Juan 'Ramos' Batista was born in Ciudad Juarez on June 19, 1988. A boy of both parents who had native Mexican blood. Ramos' father's name was Juarez Batista and his mother's name was Catalina Roselin. Ramos had quite a life as a child until he was a teenager. Ramos' parents are arguably well-established in his City, his father has a profession as one of the famous tile manufacturers in Ciudad Juarez, and his mother owns a very popular bakery in the City. Ramos lives in a very supportive environment for him to do the learning for his life. As a child, Ramos often played with his neighborhood friends without worrying about problems in the environment. Ramos entered elementary school at the age of 7, he was a jolly child at that age and he was also very easy to accept new friends in the elementary school environment. Ramos had one of his best friends from kindergarten, Cortez. Cortez is one of the children of businessmen in the City of Ciudad Juarez and both of their parents are friends with the parents of Ramos. Ramos is very passionate about learning he enjoys the lessons his teacher gave him. A few years later Ramos was at the end of elementary school, he took the exam and he was able to do the exam well and received very good grades compared to the other children.

 

       15 years on, he has graduated from college at universidad autónoma de ciudad juárez. After graduating from S1 with perfect grades he tried to register himself with one of the agencies named Cuerpo de Fuerzas Especiales, this agency is military-based or commonly called the army. After trying to register and do a physical test he was declared a graduate and attended military education for 4 years. After completing his four-year military education, he was immediately assigned to guard the border between Mexico and the United States, the City was called El Paso. At the time of his time in the City, he gained a wealth of experience. After a few years, Ramos was transferred to his hometown of Ciudad Juarez. Ramos was already a Lieutenant Colonel, commanding a 2nd Rapid Response Battalion Infantry, which consisted of 15 men. Juan Bautista got an offer from his friend, that there was a job that made more money than his current salary with a lower risk of death. Juan was interested in it and he thought long about the offer that his friend gave him. After a few days, Juan thought he was making an offer from his friend, and began to incitement one by one against his team members.

 

                 Some team members chose to join Juan to do defections and there were also some members who chose to be loyal to his agency, Juan immediately rushed to arrange a strategy so that he could get away without being caught by his superiors to carry out the defection, unfortunately some members who chose to be loyal to his agency reported Juan's actions to his superiors, Juan and some members of his team were also caught in the military trial behind closed doors by the officials.  The higher-ups of the Cuerpo de Fuerzas Especiales (CDFE), at that time Juan and his team members were dismissed disrespectfully and stopped from the agency. Ramos took the initiative to go to Los Santos by way of sea as an illegal immigrant, he had prepared some weapons stashed on the ship for the needs of him who was in Los Santos. After arriving at marina canal, Los Santos. Ramos was warmly greeted by Gallo and his crew, Gallo was the one who asked Ramos to come to Los Santos to keep his business from things he didn't want. 

 


 

Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
XwilX

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

wild


 

Saya wild selaku pemilik account UCP XwilX bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Juan_Batista) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

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Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
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49 minutes ago, Manja67 said:

Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

  1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
  2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
  3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
  4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
  5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)

1. Tidak

2. 1 tahun lebih

3. Buat baru

4. Tidak

5. Tidak

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Oke, saya akan memberikan revisi di sini.

 

  1. Perbaiki foto dalam cerita.
  2. Masih ada beberapa kata yang penggunaan EYD nya salah, seperti city menjadi City.
Posted
1 hour ago, Manja67 said:

Oke, saya akan memberikan revisi di sini.

 

  1. Perbaiki foto dalam cerita.
  2. Masih ada beberapa kata yang penggunaan EYD nya salah, seperti city menjadi City.

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email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @wild,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Manja67
JG:RP Helper Team

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