Kakoka Posted December 7, 2021 Posted December 7, 2021 (edited) Chris_Callagher Chris Callagher, he is illegal street racer from United States of America, His life never be wanted by other person, he born without a father, and His mother got jailed because murdering her boyfriend, then Chris Callagher grow up with His uncle and beeing piece of shit with him at United States of America. His uncle named John Callagher, well u know, His uncle same like His mother, he is an criminal, more like smooth criminal because he never get arrested by the cops When Chris reach 15 years old, His uncle give an old mustang for Chris and teach Chris how to drive. Since Chris got His old mustang, Chris likes the car and he think about the old mustang its His part of soul, sounds weird but he is. His uncle invite Chris to do a great job, the job is to deliver a packages of drugs to the consumen, Chris accept the invite and he become the driver with His mustang and start the job with His uncle. 2 months since Chris do His first job, Chris become illegal street racer and His uncle still do His job. In someday, uncle John join with Chris on Cannonballruns Race, Chris participate the event with His old mustang and His uncle just be a passenger on Chris's car. In that event, uncle John got called by an stranger continuously, and uncle John answer the call, guess who call uncle John, its a police, the police say, they already surrounded John with detective that pretend a participant of this event, a cop will not make a noise if John surrender, then uncle John think about Chris, he give all His money to Chris and tell Chris to get out of here and go to Los Santos to meet His friend, Chris just confused, Chris ask His uncle why, then His uncle tell to Chris about he beeing surrounded, Chris accept what John's say, and step on the gas to Los Santos with all uncle John's money. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Jay1234 Account Forum yang saya miliki: Kakoka Saya Kakoka selaku pemilik account UCP Jay1234 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Chris_Callagher) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited December 8, 2021 by Kakoka
$Honey7$ Posted December 8, 2021 Posted December 8, 2021 Oke perkenalkan saya @Honey7, sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. • Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) • Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) • Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) • Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) • Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) • Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Dirumah / Di warnet) Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini! 1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) 4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 6. Penggunaan huruf kapital yang baik dan benar harap diperbaiki.
Kakoka Posted December 8, 2021 Author Posted December 8, 2021 • Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Ya • Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 1 - 3 bulan, sekitar 1 bulan lebih, sempat tidak aktif • Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Buat baru • Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak • Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak • Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? Dirumah
$Honey7$ Posted December 8, 2021 Posted December 8, 2021 Dear @Kakoka, terima kasih sudah menjawab pertanyaan yang diberikan. Setelah saya melihat Character Story anda, saya menemukan masih ada beberapa kesalahan di dalamnya, antara lain: Tolong tambahkan spasi di setiap awalan paragraf. 17 jam yang lalu, Kakoka said: his Ganti dengan "His"
Kakoka Posted December 8, 2021 Author Posted December 8, 2021 1 jam yang lalu, Honey7 said: Dear @Kakoka, terima kasih sudah menjawab pertanyaan yang diberikan. Setelah saya melihat Character Story anda, saya menemukan masih ada beberapa kesalahan di dalamnya, antara lain: Tolong tambahkan spasi di setiap awalan paragraf. Ganti dengan "His" Sudah saya edit kembali sesuai yang di arahkan.
$Honey7$ Posted December 8, 2021 Posted December 8, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Kakoka, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Honey7 JG:RP Helper Team
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