cuetemotanferia Posted November 28, 2021 Posted November 28, 2021 Zhang_Huang Zhang "Luong" Huang Zhang "Luong" Huang is a young man born on December 12th, 1999 in Hong Kong. He lives with his mother and his older sister. He also had an older brother named Chao Xhing, but he lives with his father. His father is leaving them in Wuhan with his new wife because his family had a financial problem which required them to leave Zhang. Zhang's sister's name is Susan, and she is a drug addict. Susan was notified of the cocaine by her boyfriend. Susan's boyfriend is a dangerous gangster from Hong Kong, so Zhang and Susan's boyfriend are in the same city. Zhang had a feeling of revenge for Susan's boyfriend, because he didn't want Susan to get addicted to drugs again and make her die of drug addiction. On January 24, 2021, Susan died from an overdose of drug use. It's all because her boyfriend notified Susan of a drug. Zhang was so mad and wanted to kill Susan's boyfriend. After Susan died, his mother developed depression after knowing his sister had died of an overdose and his mother had committed suicide. And now Zhang is living alone without any other people around him. Because Zhang was born in a dangerous place, Zhang's life got tougher and he became a thug when he grew up. Zhang was living in Los Santos and he found his brother on a street. His name is Chao Xhing. Chao says his dad kicked him out of the house. Chao doesn't tell Zhang the reason for their father's kicking Chao out. After they gathered back together, they're now living together on the street. They don't know how to buy food, clothes, or anything. Because Zhang was a thug, he started mugging people in Ganton, Los Santos. Zhang thinks there's no way again to have money, except for mugging people. With the money from Mug, Zhang and Chao can now buy food, clothes, and daily necessities. The police department now knows Zhang was a thug, so the police department is trying to find Zhang and Chao, but they haven't found them yet. But not for a day. Zhang and Chao got caught by the police because when Zhang and Chao were mugging, one of the police officers saw Zhang and Chao mugging a person. So they got caught by the police. In the court, Zhang and Chao were sentenced by the judge to only two months in jail because Zhang and Chao's father were in there. He paid the court fine. After leaving the court, the father still didn't want to talk with his sons, so he left Zhang and Chao on the street. On November 28, 2021, Zhang and Chao will live on the street again. Because their father didn't want them to mug people again, he gave the money to Zhang and Chao. Zhang and Chao now don't do mugging anymore, because they know the feeling of getting mugged by people. So now Zhang and Chao are back in Ganton, giving money to homeless people. Chao goes to San Fierro because he had a business with his father, so he went to San Fierro for a week. After a week, Zhang misses Chao so much because he thinks a week is so lame. Then he got a message from Chao saying Zhang should pick up Chao from Los Santos Airport, and now they live back together in Los Santos. They now live in Ganton. They're brawlers in Ganton. No one dares take them on. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Varzet Account Forum yang saya miliki:varzet Saya varzet selaku pemilik account UCP Varzet bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Zhang_Huang) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Cherry$ Posted November 28, 2021 Posted November 28, 2021 Under Review Kriteria dalam membuat character story: Pastikan character kamu sudah minimal berlevel 3. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Pastikan CS kamu memiliki foto/gambar untuk karakter kamu Pastikan memasukan tanggal lahir dan latar belakang serta sikap pada paragraf pertama Pastikan sebelum paragraf pertama diberikan gambar/foto character (ambil dari google gapapa, siapa aja) Berikan Indentasi pada ketiga paragraf kamu
cuetemotanferia Posted November 28, 2021 Author Posted November 28, 2021 24 minutes ago, Cherry said: Pastikan character kamu sudah minimal berlevel 3. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Pastikan CS kamu memiliki foto/gambar untuk karakter kamu Pastikan memasukan tanggal lahir dan latar belakang serta sikap pada paragraf pertama Pastikan sebelum paragraf pertama diberikan gambar/foto character (ambil dari google gapapa, siapa aja) Berikan Indentasi pada ketiga paragraf kamu 1. Sudah level 3 2. Sudah 3. Tidak ada plagiarisme 4. Saya rasa sudah benar 5. Sudah 500+ kata 6. Sudah 7. Sudah juga 8. Sudah 9. Sudah
$Cherry$ Posted November 28, 2021 Posted November 28, 2021 Fix your grammar, most of your character story's words are incorrect to be followed up by the next words.
cuetemotanferia Posted November 30, 2021 Author Posted November 30, 2021 Sudah saya edit, bisa di cek lagi
$Cherry$ Posted December 1, 2021 Posted December 1, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @varzet, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Cherry JG:RP Helper Team
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