pending David_Luciano [IniRezaOi]

[IniRezaOi]

David_Luciano

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Back in years one thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine, David Luciano was born, he was born in Liberty City, The Bronx, his father was an Drug addicts and a Gang member his father were spending half of his day just to consume a drug and hanging out with his friend, that act was making David had a grudge to his father, his mother work as a maid, his mother don't really got much income from that and doesn't enough for make David school, so David mother decided leave his father because David father does not do his responsibility as a father, now David and his mother live in Los Santos since his mother decide to divorce for David future, David and his mother live in Los Santos, now his mama work as street cleaner she now can make David schooling, Its David first day of schooling he saw so many white people and he keep getting discriminated and bullied when he was at Elementary school.

 

 Now David age was 15 and he's now a high school students, David parent does not expected to be a bad student but the fate says otherwise David is a bad student at the school and he often skipping school, do a school fight, Consume a drugs, its all because how rough the area he was living in, David now were not the same David when he was a little kid he's now a feared student on his school the Principal even warned David to stop his chaotic act at school, the day were come David and 2 his friend took a revenge to the school, they were doing a school shooting! and it came to the news but that doesn't go very well which two of David friend were killed in the incident because they get shoot when they had a firearms contact with the police David decides to surrender to the Law enforcement and ended in prison for five years.

 

 One years after the school shootout David now lives on the cages, lives on the jail was a hard that make him get used to it, but David doesn't be a chaotic prisoners and following the prison protocol so his prison time doesn't add more, 3 years passed Now David age was 19 its two years left for him to get released David living his prison time as usual he still doesn't do a chaos and keep following the protocols except do a self defense because we know liven on the prison is not easy like we thought not all people were had same thinking and we doesn't know what people think about us.

 

 One year passed since David age was 19 now he was twenty years old, and release out from the jail he now start a live in the city he's planning to get back to his mother house but after him come to his mother address he just find out the fact that his mother already move out and not living there, now David doesn't have anyone that he could stay with, he started to work as street cleaners, Trash collector, Forklift driver etc, David hasn't have a house yet so he decided to find a friend or something to hanging out till now David still be a homeless person.

 

 

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Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan

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Saya IniRezaOi selaku pemilik account UCP IniRezaOi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (David_Luciano) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited November 29, 2021 by IniRezaOi

[dreamlife]

Hallo, saya dreamlife akan mengurus thread Character Story kamu mulai dari sekarang. Tapi sebelumnya tolong kamu jawab pertanyaan-pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur dan intens ya!

 

1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (jujur).

2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 

3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu)

4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ?

5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )

 

Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini!

 

1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)

2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri.

3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories.

4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.

5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).

[IniRezaOi]

2 hours ago, dreamlife said:

Hallo, saya dreamlife akan mengurus thread Character Story kamu mulai dari sekarang. Tapi sebelumnya tolong kamu jawab pertanyaan-pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur dan intens ya!

 

1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (jujur).

2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 

3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu)

4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ?

5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )

 

Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini!

 

1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)

2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri.

3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories.

4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph.

5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).

Pertanyaan 

 

1. Hanya satu akun ucp yaitu akun yang sedang saya pakai 

2. Sudah

3.Benar David_Luciano adalah character/ucp saya 

4. Tidak sebelumnya disuruh tambahkan foto 

5. 2-4 bulan

 

[dreamlife]

On 11/27/2021 at 8:41 PM, IniRezaOi said:

Do

 

On 11/27/2021 at 8:41 PM, IniRezaOi said:

Now

Perbaiki penggunaan huruf kapital.

[IniRezaOi]

6 hours ago, dreamlife said:

 

Perbaiki penggunaan huruf kapital.

Back in years one thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine, David Luciano was born, he was born in Liberty City, The Bronx, his father was an Drug addicts and a Gang member his father were spending half of his day just to consume a drug and hanging out with his friend, that act was making David had a grudge to his father, his mother work as a maid, his mother don't really got much income from that and doesn't enough for make David school, so David mother decided leave his father because David father does not do his responsibility as a father, now David and his mother live in Los Santos since his mother decide to divorce for David future, David and his mother live in Los Santos, now his mama work as street cleaner she now can make David schooling, Its David first day of schooling he saw so many white people and he keep getting discriminated and bullied when he was at Elementary school.

 

 Now David age was 15 and he's now a high-school students, David parent does not expected to be a bad student but the fate says otherwise David is a bad student at the school and he often skipping school, do a school fight, Consume a drugs, its all because how rough the area he was living in, David now were not the same David when he was a little kid he's now a feared student on his school the Principal even warned David to stop his chaotic act at school, the day were come David and 2 his friend took a grudge to the school, they were doing a school shooting! and it came to the news but that doesn't go very well which two of David friend were killed in the incident because they get shoot when they had a firearms contact with the police David decides to surrender to the Law enforcement and ended in prison for five years.

 

 One years after the school shootout David now lives on the cages, lives on the jail was a hard that make him get used to it, but David doesn't be a chaotic prisoners and following the prison protocol so his prison time doesn't add more, 3 years passed now David age was 19 its two years left for him to get released David living his prison time as usual he still doesn't do a chaos and keep following the protocols except do a self defense because we know living on the prison is not easy like we thought not all people were had same thinking and we doesn't know what people think about us.

 

 One year passed since David age was 19 now he was twenty years old, and release out from the jail he now start a live in the city he's planning to get back to his mother house but after him come to his mother address he just find out the fact that his mother already move out and not living there, now David doesn't have anyone that he could stay with, he started to work as street cleaners, Trash collector, Forklift driver etc, David hasn't have a house yet so he decided to find a friend or something to hanging out till now David still be a homeless person.

 

 

@dreamlife Done

[dreamlife]

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I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

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