LightHand Posted November 17, 2021 Posted November 17, 2021 Erdiato_Sanchez Mexico, 19 January 1992, a child from Juliana Sanchez and Carlos Sanchez was born in the hospital with very healthy condition. They wish their son become a great person when he's grow up so they named him Erdiato Sanchez. His sister is Elisenda Sanchez and she was 8 when he was born. She's takes care of him if their parents went out, play with her together. They were a happy family even though they are categorized as mid-class family in there. When he was 5, he started taken a like to a car worlds, from modding to racing and most of them came from the movies they watching together. Since his mother acknowledged his potential, he got a books anything about cars when at his 10th birthday. He was very happy about it and started reading it non-stop if he had a free time. His sister had to go out from the house when he was 12 to find a job and start a new life by herself. He was very sad about it but he knew that this thing will happen no matter what. The only he did was give her a hug while cried and said goodbye. He's started go out even further from his house since he's became older and stumbled to found out there's a workshop. He takes a look at it and he never saw a car like that on the street but he definitely knew it's an import. He went there out of curiosity. He found a man working on it that looks like in his thirties and started asking what kind of car is this. He responded that it's Nissan Skyline GT-R BNR32. He's amazed that this car can got in here and stayed there just to look at the man working on it for the entire afternoon. When the man finished doing his car, he is surprised that the kid still in there and told him to go home. Erdiato curiosity cannot be stopped by anyone and said no. The man started asking his name and told him came back here if you want to and you can look at it even more. He want back there in the next day at afternoon just to look at the man working on his car. After a while, the man takes a rest and Erdiato starts asking what his name. He just want to be called John and that's fine for Erdiato. John started asking why he's just stayed there and do nothing but looking and even more questions about him. After a while, John asked him to work here, and Erdiato gladly answered it with yes with excitement. Years goes by, Erdiato become more experienced at cars mechanic by working as part-time at John's workshop. When he was 17, he bought a Nissan 180SX from the money he was collected from working. One day, while they were take a rest from working, John started talking about his story before he got here. He lived in Los Santos 7 years ago. He lived a happy life with his wife. One day, after a dinner in the city, on the way back to their home. there was an incoming car to them and made him panic. They crashed very heavily to the point their cars had very bad shapes, After the crash, he tried to safe his wive from the wrecked car and starts yelling at her tried to wake her up. He called the emergency and arrived at the hospital. Turned out his wive had died at the crash. He started feel powerless, nothing like matters anymore. Few months later, he feels depressed and something feeling uncomfortable at his house. Feels like his wive keep haunting him and blamed him for the crash. He couldn't take it anymore and decided to sell his house and moved out to Mexico, away from everything. Erdiato feels sorry about his loss and tried to cheered him up. John started feels a little bit happy and invite Erdiato to started work again. At his free time, Erdiato went to the city to find what he really wanted, racing. Since he doesn't have enough money and connection to led him in legal racing, the only choice he had was illegal racing. He found out there's one after midnight and he decided to went there. He still a beginner at this but the only thing he has was courage and a fast car. He went to starting line and looks at his opponent's car, It's a Ford Mustang but he's not into muscle car so he couldn't guess what year it was produced. The only thing he knew was it's sound very powerful. When race started, he stepped on the gas and leaving his opponent behind. At the mid-race, he found out that his brake not responsive and his car went uncontrollable and goes to other sides on the road and crashed. After he regained his consciousness, he went out from his wrecked car and found out his car crashed with another car. Even though he feels hurt at his entire body but he can bear it, he tried to help to the car that he crashed into. He was surprised, and shocked with fear that it is his sister. He tried to wake her up and there was no respond. He called emergency to bring her sister to hospital. After a while waiting at the hospital, doctor came out and stated that his sister died on arrival. He feels sad and fear that he did this to his sister. A month after the crash, he feels uncomfortable, always feeling depressed and gloomy. Even at his parent house he feels like something haunting him at this house, even at the workshop too. He couldn't take it anymore and decided at one night, he left his family and his workplace. Before he left, he left some letter for his parents and John for his leave. He brought everything he can and went to airport and decided went to Los Santos. He doesn't know anything about besides it's the places that John lived before. Despite the risk, he went for it. He thought maybe after arrive at Los Santos maybe he became a new man. A new way to life even. 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