DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 9, 2021 Posted November 9, 2021 (edited) Diaz Rifzha Diaz Rizha Who Is Usually Called AZ was born on May 8, 2001 and was born in Russia. He comes from a poor family and lives in a house. At that time, AZ saw his father working as a fisherman. At that time, AZ wanted to swim in the sea. I told my father that I really wanted to swim in the sea. And after swimming, AZ really wanted to help dad go fishing. And at that time AZ wanted to have 1 motorbike, 1 Skayline car and 1 luxury house. At the age of 18 AZ started looking for work but AZ struggled because he could not find a job. 1 day later AZ got a job that was a taxi driver and got a salary of 50$ then he saved money in the bank. At that time AZ was very happy because he could work. The next day AZ's mother was sick with fever and AZ immediately went to buy medicine for mother. AZ also got medicine for mother and immediately gave the medicine to mother. A few months later AZ's mother had not recovered from the fever and AZ continued to grieve because her mother had not recovered from the fever either. The next day AZ worked with father, father as a fisherman. AZ as a taxi driver AZ keeps looking for money to be able to realize his dream. A few weeks later AZ's mother died and after the news reached AZ, AZ was shocked because his beloved mother died and AZ could only celebrate the departure of his beloved mother. A few weeks later AZ returned to work as a taxi driver. AZ also feels sad because every day he always remembers his late mother. And the next day AZ returned to work as a taxi driver. A few years later AZ turned 21 years old every day AZ went to his mother's grave to pray for his mother. A few weeks later AZ also decided to migrate to the city of Losantos and work there. And before leaving, AZ asked permission from his father, then after being given permission by his father, AZ immediately went to his mother's grave to say goodbye and pray. The next day, AZ left for the city of Losantos. A few months later AZ also got a job as a manager in a company and got a very large salary. A few days later AZ got his own wish, namely AZ owning a house and 1 car and motorbike. At that time, AZ wanted to bring my father to live in Losantos city to live there. The next day father arrived in Losantos city with AZ who picked him up. A few weeks later AZ and AZ's father went to AZ's girlfriend's house named Dinda and wanted to propose to her boyfriend , Dinda and next to parents AZ and Dinda agree. A few days later, AZ and Dinda's wedding day arrived, thank God the event went smoothly. 1 year later AZ and Dinda have 1 child named Steven AZ who is very happy because he has become a father. A few months later AZ lived happily with AZ's father and also with his wife and children. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: DIAZrifzha Account Forum yang saya miliki:DIAZ RIFZHA Saya DIAZ RIFZHA selaku pemilik account UCP DIAZrifzha bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Diaz Rifzha) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited November 11, 2021 by DIAZ RIFZHA
$Sructs$ Posted November 9, 2021 Posted November 9, 2021 Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki
DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 9, 2021 Author Posted November 9, 2021 (edited) 1.ya saya baru pertama kali membuat character story 2.ya saya memiliki nya 3.ya aku memiliki nya 4.aku selalu main JGRP di rumah 5.aku memakai wifi 6.DIAZ RIFZHA 7.DIAZrifzha Edited November 9, 2021 by DIAZ RIFZHA
DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 9, 2021 Author Posted November 9, 2021 (edited) 58 minutes ago, Sructs said: Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? yes 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? yes 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? yes 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? rumah 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot? wifi 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki? DIAZ RIFZHA 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki? DIAZrifzha Edited November 9, 2021 by DIAZ RIFZHA
$Sructs$ Posted November 9, 2021 Posted November 9, 2021 oke saya akan memeriksa character story kamu 1. jangan pernah bawa unsur COVID 19 dalam membuat character story dan silahkan diperbaiki dan baca setiap kamu buka forum di sebelah pojok kanan mengenai masalah ini 2. perbaiki lagi kosakata bahasa inggris kamu masih banyak kata yang tidak di perlukan dan salah dalam penempatan contoh : AZ also gets a salary of 50$ per day and untuk apa per dalam bahasa inggris, atau kata sambung yang seperti ini: The next day AZ works with his father kalau sudah with tidak perlu ada kata his dan sudah jelas bawah itu ayahnya. 3. rapihkan lagi paragraf kamu di buat justify dulu setelah itu di setiap awal paragraf di buat menjorok kearah dalam 4. gunakan foto yang sesuai dan bisa menggambar kan character kamu 5. dan tidak perlu bump untuk di respond cukup sabar dan perbaiki jika ada yang salah oke
DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 10, 2021 Author Posted November 10, 2021 (edited) Edited November 10, 2021 by DIAZ RIFZHA
$Sructs$ Posted November 10, 2021 Posted November 10, 2021 yang lama cukup di edit tidak perlu di kirim ulang
DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 10, 2021 Author Posted November 10, 2021 AKU BARUSAJA MENGEDIT NYA TOLONG DI LIHAT
$Sructs$ Posted November 11, 2021 Posted November 11, 2021 rapihkan lagi paragraf kamu dengan cara di buat justify dulu setelah itu di setiap awal paragraf di bikin menjorok kearah dalam
DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 11, 2021 Author Posted November 11, 2021 SUDAH SAYA EDIT TOLONG DI LIHAT APAKAH MASIH SALAH?
$Sructs$ Posted November 11, 2021 Posted November 11, 2021 masih ada yang miss coba check penulisan nama kamu yang di paling atas coba di bikin center saya masih menemukan beberapa grammer yang salah dalam penulisan coba di check lagi
DIAZ RIFZHA Posted November 11, 2021 Author Posted November 11, 2021 sudah saya edit apakah masih salah?
$Sructs$ Posted November 11, 2021 Posted November 11, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @DIAZ RIFZHA I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Sructs JG:RP Helper Team
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