pending Carl_Patterson [CarlPatterson]

[Khalieqy Quashyne]

 

 

          On August 1, 1998, a child named Carl Patterson was born in Nevada, Las Vegas. Carl's childhood was an exciting time for Carl. However, all of that was lost since his parents died. His childhood he spent with his grandparents in Nevada, Las Vegas. When he was 17 years old Carl Patterson was asked by his grandfather to go to school in Los Angeles. However, at that time Carl felt unsure because he was only provided with not so much money. One day Carl was looking for a side job to pay for his education, then Carl found one of the big factories that were looking for employees. Carl was interested in applying for a job without knowing what the factory contained.

 

          One day after Carl applied for a job, it was now his first day on the job. Carl was very excited when he first started working, but that feeling was gone when he entered the entrance of the factory. Carl heard people screaming in pain in the factory as he worked. Curiosity about it could not be suppressed, at 11.00 at night he sneaked into the factory to find out what happened in the factory. Then he found blood marks on the wall and then Carl followed the blood and arrived at the basement of the factory, Carl thought of this place as a place of torture for employees who were negligent in their work, but he thought it was too much.

 

         Then Carl plans to trap Manager Michael as the manager of the factory, Carl asks his colleagues to work together to trap Manager Michael from the factory. The next day the factory was very quiet, only the manager was there, Carl immediately took him into the backroom and interrogated him about what had happened to the factory where Carl worked. And the manager also told him that this factory was a place of torture by the ancient invaders. But outside of Carl's plan, Manager Michael also planned to trap Crimson with the help of colleagues who betrayed Carl, then Crimson was taken hostage but fortunately, Carl managed to escape from that place. In the pursuit of Carl managed to escape from the manager's pursuit then Carl went to the airport to book a plane ticket to Los Santos and will fly at 12.00 The next day when he arrives in Los Santos Carl meets his old friend Edward Lawrence relaxing, Carl approaches Edward for a quick talk.

 

         Carl spoke rudely in the factory where he worked, when discussing work, Edward suggested work as a Sweeper and Forklift, Carl had worked for a long time, but nothing was satisfactory, Carl tried as a Bus Driver, but the salary was not satisfactory. A few months later, Carl got word from Carl, that there was a company that opened job applications through the website, and Carl immediately applied. The next day is the announcement that will enter the interview stage, Carl was rejected because Carl was refused to work as a Miner worker.

Edited November 11, 2021 by Khalieqy Quashyne

[Reapzt]

Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)

[Khalieqy Quashyne]

1 tidak 

2.kurang dari 1 bulan 

3.buat baru 

4.tidak

5.tidak

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Reapzt]

Oke, saya akan memberikan revisi di sini.

 

1. Gunakan format CS yang benar.
2. Buatlah 9-12 spasi pada awal setiap paragraf.
3. Spasi 'enter' untuk tiap paragraf tidak perlu terlalu jauh, cukup berikan 1 spasi saja.
4. Tambahkan foto dalam cerita kamu.

[Khalieqy Quashyne]

Udah di edit mint

[Reapzt]

1. Buatlah 9-12 spasi pada awal setiap paragraf.
2. Spasi 'enter' untuk tiap paragraf tidak perlu terlalu jauh, cukup berikan 1 spasi saja.
3. Perbaiki foto dalam cerita kamu.

[Khalieqy Quashyne]

Gini bukan mint?

 

[Reapzt]

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Dear @Khalieqy Quashyne,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

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