CertifiedHoodOriginal Posted November 7, 2021 Posted November 7, 2021 Dayquan_Young On August 13, 2000. A son named Dayquan Young was born, Dayquan was a fatherless child because Dayquan's mother was a rape victim who was left behind until she became pregnant. Since Dayquan was born, he grew up in a housing project in Los Santos, this is where Dayquan is familiar with illegal goods such as drugs and weapons without a license being smuggled in. In this housing project, Dayquan used to work as a drug courier to sell illegal drugs which was employed by his own mother's brother. At that time, Dayquan's mother was addicted to drugs so the economy of Dayquan and his mother was not good enough. Dayquan had to work with his mother's brother to support his mother and also Dayquan himself. In 2017, Dayquan and his mother's brother were arrested by the Los Santos Police Department for their involvement in selling illegal drugs, Dayquan was sentenced to 3 years in prison and his mother's brother was sentenced to 20 years in prison. While in prison, Dayquan once made a fuss because his shoes were taken by someone else and Dayquan was put in an isolation room for 1 week by the officers there. In 2019 before Dayquan was released from prison, he received news that his mother had died of a drug overdose. After getting out of prison, Dayquan encountered a new problem, namely not having a job and also he was visited by debt collectors because his mother often borrowed money to buy drugs. Dayquan at that time worked as a waiter at a fast food restaurant and Dayquan also worked part time as a producer for rappers who wanted to make a beats. Then at that moment, Dayquan met Tyrone who offered him a job to be a permanent producer at his record label and because of that, Dayquan also got enough money to pay off the debt from his mother. Dayquan can rest easily because there is no longer a threat from debt collectors. Questions Character Story Pertama: Ya Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Tidak ada Account Forum yang saya miliki: Saya CertifiedHoodOriginal selaku pemilik account UCP Maxims bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Dayquan_Young) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Folium$ Posted November 8, 2021 Posted November 8, 2021 Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal. Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level tiga? Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah tiga ratus kata? Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya! Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar? Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat.
CertifiedHoodOriginal Posted November 8, 2021 Author Posted November 8, 2021 (edited) 49 minutes ago, Folium said: Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal. Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level tiga? Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah tiga ratus kata? Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya! Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar? Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat. Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level tiga? Sudah Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah tiga ratus kata? Sudah Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya! Saya memiliki ucp bernama Sheva36 sebelumnya tetapi account tidak bisa saya pakai kembali karena lupa password dan emailnya Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar? Sudah dan saya sudah siap jika harus menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar Edited November 8, 2021 by CertifiedHoodOriginal
$Folium$ Posted November 8, 2021 Posted November 8, 2021 Foto characternya coba searching dari Google, jangan di-edit begitu. Usahakan fotonya agar tidak terlalu besar, juga tidak terlalu kecil. Posisikan juga foto characternya agar benar-benar diletakan di tengah.
CertifiedHoodOriginal Posted November 8, 2021 Author Posted November 8, 2021 35 minutes ago, Folium said: Foto characternya coba searching dari Google, jangan di-edit begitu. Usahakan fotonya agar tidak terlalu besar, juga tidak terlalu kecil. Posisikan juga foto characternya agar benar-benar diletakan di tengah. Sudah saya perbaiki
$Folium$ Posted November 9, 2021 Posted November 9, 2021 Foto characternya tolong diperkecil, ukurannya masih terlalu besar. Quote On August 13, 2000. A son named Dayquan Young was born, Dayquan was a fatherless child because Dayquan's mother was a rape victim who was left behind until she became pregnant. Since Dayquan was born he grew up in a housing project in Los Santos, this is where Dayquan is familiar with illegal goods such as drugs and weapons without a license being smuggled in. Berikan spasi pada awal kalimat di seluruh paragrafnya, penulisan di atas masih salah, lihat pada penulisan yang benar di bawah. Quote On August 13, 2000. A son named Dayquan Young was born, Dayquan was a fatherless child because Dayquan's mother was a rape victim who was left behind until she became pregnant. Since Dayquan was born he grew up in a housing project in Los Santos, this is where Dayquan is familiar with illegal goods such as drugs and weapons without a license being smuggled in. Berikan spasi setidaknya sebanyak sepuluh kali pada seluruh awal dari kalimat yang ada di setiap paragrafnya.
CertifiedHoodOriginal Posted November 9, 2021 Author Posted November 9, 2021 1 jam yang lalu, Folium said: Foto characternya tolong diperkecil, ukurannya masih terlalu besar. Berikan spasi pada awal kalimat di seluruh paragrafnya, penulisan di atas masih salah, lihat pada penulisan yang benar di bawah. Berikan spasi setidaknya sebanyak sepuluh kali pada seluruh awal dari kalimat yang ada di setiap paragrafnya. sudah saya perbaiki kembali
$Folium$ Posted November 10, 2021 Posted November 10, 2021 On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: was born he grew up Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "born". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: housing project Dayquan Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "project". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: employed by his own mother's brother because Berikan tanda titik setelah kata "brother". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: because at that time Dayquan's mother was addicted to drugs so that the economy of Dayquan and his mother was not good enough so Dayquan had to Ubah menjadi "At that time, Dayquan's mother was addicted to drugs so the economy of Dayquan and his mother was not good enough. Dayquan had to". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: brother to support his mother. and also Dayquan himself Hapus tanda titiknya. On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: prison he received Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "prison". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: After getting out of prison Dayquan encountered Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "prison". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: wanted to make beats then at that moment Dayquan Ubah menjadi "wanted to make a beats. Then at that moment, Dayquan". On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: at his record label and because of that Dayquan also got enough money to pay off the debt from his mother so Dayquan can rest easy Ubah menjadi "at his record label and because of that, Dayquan also got enough money to pay off the debt from his mother. Dayquan can rest easily".
CertifiedHoodOriginal Posted November 10, 2021 Author Posted November 10, 2021 2 jam yang lalu, Folium said: Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "born". Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "project". Berikan tanda titik setelah kata "brother". Ubah menjadi "At that time, Dayquan's mother was addicted to drugs so the economy of Dayquan and his mother was not good enough. Dayquan had to". Hapus tanda titiknya. Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "prison". Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "prison". Ubah menjadi "wanted to make a beats. Then at that moment, Dayquan". Ubah menjadi "at his record label and because of that, Dayquan also got enough money to pay off the debt from his mother. Dayquan can rest easily". Sudah saya perbaiki
$Folium$ Posted November 11, 2021 Posted November 11, 2021 Foto character masih terlalu besar, tolong diperkecil. On 11/7/2021 at 9:17 PM, CertifiedHoodOriginal said: While in prison Dayquan Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "prison".
$Folium$ Posted November 12, 2021 Posted November 12, 2021 Foto character kamu masih terlalu besar, tolong diperkecil ukurannya.
$Folium$ Posted November 12, 2021 Posted November 12, 2021 Dear @CertifiedHoodOriginal I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted Character Story, we have reviewed your Character Story, and we have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your Character Story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this Character Story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Folium JG:RP Helper Team
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