xfhy Posted November 2, 2021 Posted November 2, 2021 Wilson_Kennedy Wilson "Willy" Kennedy, an ordinary man living his best life in a black orphanage located in Jefferson's Crenshaw area. Born on April 14, 1998, the same date he was dumped into an orphanage by his parents, Willy was founded by an old woman right at the door, when she heard Willy's biological parents knocking on the door, right after placing Willy in front of the door, no one knew his real parents because no one saw his parents, not even for a second. The old woman named Mary Jemina, she bring Willy inside the home while the others are currently sleeping in each other’s room, Mary let Willy sleeping beside her as he still a little baby, Mary worried about Willy if anything happens to him. After seven years Willy spent his time living in an orphanage, he moved to an elementary school which got a dormitory there, also the only school for orphans, being a good student is his goal, he also joined the basketball team at his school, making the best team in the city, when he live in the schools dorm he never forget to meet Mary as his adoptive mother, maybe for 2 times a week. There was nothing special about Willy in high school, except for his top grades, and the white racist who was always rude to Willy, especially for calling him Fatherless and the N-word. After Willy’s 18th birthday, he celebrate his birthday on Mary’s home, inviting all of the orphans child near Crenshaw, Willy remembers that he must go to college for studying more about doctors, 5 days after the birthday party he going to Stanford University by taking a train, he doesn’t forget for saying goodbye to Mary. Juny 16, 2020, Wilson Kennedy a.k.a “Willy” graduated from Stanford University with doctor degrees, it’s his best moment of his life, even Willy celebrate his graduate by going to club with his friends from Stanford, and then 2 weeks after he graduated he want to surprise his mother, going to his neighborhood at Los Santos, knocking the door in Mary house, and then the neighbours tells Willy about Mary that she was already dead, he crying at that time, but as soon as possible he regrets about it. Willy’s dreams is to become a doctor in San Andreas, to be part of SAFD. Willy walks behind Mary’s house, opens the garage and then use it’s Chevy Impala 1964, drive it to funeral that Mary Jemina burried, he cried as his right hands hold the funeral. Wilson meet his old friends that still alive on the neighborhood, discuss about their life and purposes at bar. Wilson become a mechanic after making decision for his temporary-work, making 1000 dollars a month. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: xfhy Account Forum yang saya miliki:xfhy Saya xfhy selaku pemilik account UCP xfhy bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Wilson_Kennedy) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Sructs$ Posted November 2, 2021 Posted November 2, 2021 Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki
xfhy Posted November 2, 2021 Author Posted November 2, 2021 5 hours ago, Sructs said: Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu. 1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 2. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 3. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? 4. Tempat kamu bermain rumah/warnet? 5. koneksi yang kamu gunakan wifi/hotspot 6. Harap cantumkan akun forum kamu dibagain Account forum yang saya miliki 7. Harap cantumkan akun UCP kamu dibagain Account UCP yang saya miliki 1. engga, ketiga kali nya ini. 2. engga 3. engga 4. rumah, di kediri warnet dah jarang. 5. wifi ind***me, yang katanya paling ngelag. 6. udah dari semalem, 7. sama, udah dari semalem.
$Sructs$ Posted November 3, 2021 Posted November 3, 2021 oke saya akan memeriksa chacter story kamu 1. rapihkan paragraf kamu jangan terlihat berat di tengah 2. kata his adoptive mother dalam kata he doesn’t forget for saying goodbye to Mary, his adoptive mother. yang terletak di paragraf 2 di hapus saja 3. kata starts the engine dalam kata starts the engine and drive it to funeral that Mary Jemina burried yang terletak di paragraf 3 dihapus saja 4. perdalam lagi character devlopment kamu dalam menulis character story
xfhy Posted November 3, 2021 Author Posted November 3, 2021 5 hours ago, Sructs said: oke saya akan memeriksa chacter story kamu 1. rapihkan paragraf kamu jangan terlihat berat di tengah 2. kata his adoptive mother dalam kata he doesn’t forget for saying goodbye to Mary, his adoptive mother. yang terletak di paragraf 2 di hapus saja 3. kata starts the engine dalam kata starts the engine and drive it to funeral that Mary Jemina burried yang terletak di paragraf 3 dihapus saja 4. perdalam lagi character devlopment kamu dalam menulis character story Siap min, sudah di edit, mohon di cek lagi barangkali ada kata/kalimat yang masih salah grammar nya.
$Sructs$ Posted November 3, 2021 Posted November 3, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @xfhy I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Sructs JG:RP Helper Team
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