Flocky18 Posted October 13, 2021 Posted October 13, 2021 Keshawn_Yaqeem Keshawn Yaqeem or Kay, is a child of African American descent. He lives alone with no one to take care of him and often moves places, Kay has an addiction that makes him dependent on drugs, Kay was previously in Chicago, but he moved to Los Santos to be precise in Crenshaw, Kay is a smart kid who attends Crenshaw University High School and often won 1st place in certain events. Kay was always praised by the people there, but instead of being happy, Kay was sad because he couldn't get these words from his parents. Kay really wanted to meet his parents, but fate said otherwise. Kay moved to Crenshaw and lived in an apartment next to a grocery store. Kay immediately met his brother named Shaquan Yaqeem or Shaq, it had been a while since Shaq and Kay met around Glen Park, and they enjoyed time with Kay. finally, they were able to have friends even though it was their own brother. Shaq and Kay planned to live in the same place in Crenshaw's apartment. Which is where Kay lives now, in the East Los Santos section. There are more and more criminal acts from gangs and motorcycle clubs. Kay and Shaq made some friends around Crenshaw and formed a group that was there. Kay and Shaq met with Edgar Hopkins, Nicholas Kyle, Tyquian Rondo, who were around the Cluck N Bell Restaurant, and they became friends like close friends. Shaq immediately suggested that they often gather in a narrow alley near Cluck N Bell and the other children agreed, 1 week after that, Kay immediately looked for work in the Crenshaw area and Kay got a job as cleaning service at a Cluck N Bell restaurant. Kay went straight to work the next day, one day after Kay worked there, Kay made a big problem which at 12:00, there was a robbery and Kay immediately took out a 9mm type weapon from under his shirt, somehow Kay got the weapon but after that, Kay and the robber ran away from the restaurant and Kay was immediately reported to the police, no one knows what happened to Kay. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 2 tahun URL Namechange: https://jogjagamers.org/topic/187773-cn-javiera_santiago-to-keshawn_yaqeem-masaki Account UCP yang saya miliki: Masaki Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Flocky18 Saya Flocky18 selaku pemilik account UCP Masaki bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Keshawn_Yaqeem) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Folium$ Posted October 13, 2021 Posted October 13, 2021 Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal. Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level 3? Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah 300 kata? Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya! Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar? Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat.
Flocky18 Posted October 13, 2021 Author Posted October 13, 2021 2 minutes ago, Folium said: Halo, saya Folium yang akan memeriksa Character Story kamu. Sebelumnya, saya ingin bertanya tentang beberapa hal. Apakah character yang kamu gunakan sudah mencapai level 3? Apakah kamu sudah memastikan bahwa Character Story kamu ini sudah berjumlah 300 kata? Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya sejujur-jujurnya! Apakah kamu sudah baca ketentuan dari pembuatan Character Story dan siap menerima konsekuensinya jika melanggar? Jangan bump Character Story kamu, cukup tunggu, periksa kembali, dan cek ulang kata-kata pada Character Stories yang sudah kamu buat. Sudah level 3 Sudah 300 kata Masaki Sudah dan siap menerima konsekuensinya.
$Folium$ Posted October 13, 2021 Posted October 13, 2021 1 hour ago, Flocky18 said: Keshawn Yaqeem Hapus semua penulisan yang memiliki background color berwarna pink dan kuning. 1 hour ago, Flocky18 said: instead of being happy Kay Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "happy". 1 hour ago, Flocky18 said: with Kay, finally, they Ubah tanda koma setelah kata "Kay" menjadi tanda titik. 2 hours ago, Flocky18 said: brother, Ubah tanda komanya menjadi tanda titik. 2 hours ago, Flocky18 said: East Los Santos section there Berikan tanda titik setelah kata "section". 2 hours ago, Flocky18 said: Tyquian Rondo who were Tambahkan tanda koma sebelum kata "who".
Flocky18 Posted October 13, 2021 Author Posted October 13, 2021 5 minutes ago, Folium said: Hapus semua penulisan yang memiliki background color berwarna pink dan kuning. Tambahkan tanda koma setelah kata "happy". Ubah tanda koma setelah kata "Kay" menjadi tanda titik. Ubah tanda komanya menjadi tanda titik. Berikan tanda titik setelah kata "section". Tambahkan tanda koma sebelum kata "who". Sudah min tolong di cek
$Folium$ Posted October 14, 2021 Posted October 14, 2021 Dear @Flocky18 I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted Character Story, we have reviewed your Character Story, and we have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your Character Story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this Character Story to further develop your character. Sincerely, @Folium JG:RP Helper Team
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