pending Yajeel_Myers [EunHa]

[Hycen]

Yajeel_Myers

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     Yajeel Myers is a boy who was born in a terrible place, a place inhabited by dangerous people such as drug dealers, murderers, perpetrators of rapes, and so on. Somehow, Yajeel was so lucky to be able to grow up so fast and not have a congenital disease. While still in school, Yajeel used to love to learn, but because of some problems that made him hate going to school, they made him stressed and consider himself out of school. Yajeel's parents didn't care about Yajeel at all. He was very angry and upset about it. He ran away from home and lived on the streets.

   

     After a few months of living on the streets, he no longer has enough money for his daily life, and he tries different ways to earn money, but nothing works. One day, Yajeel found a cardboard box under the seat of a park bench. Out of curiosity, he tried to take the cardboard and suddenly a large and tall man arrived, telling Yajeel to take the cardboard run and follow the large man. After a long time, the man stopped in an alley that coincided with a nightclub. The cardboard box carried by Yajeel was picked up by the person, and as a thank you, he gave Yajeel some money to have fun at the nightclub, and Yajeel accepted it and spent time at the club that night.

     

     Five days after the incident, several people who were black came to Yajeel. The men accused Yajeel of stealing money they got from selling the proceeds of drugs. He was very confused and answered honestly, but the men did not believe Yajeel's words and said that the large and tall person mentioned the characteristics of Yajeel and where Yajeel was. Yajeel was very surprised by it and he said he would return the money they thought had been stolen. After a few months of finding money to pay the stolen money, he managed to pay the same amount. Yajeel still suffered and lived on the streets.

 

 

 

 

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Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun

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Account UCP yang saya miliki:
EunHa

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki: @Hycen

 

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Saya Hycen selaku pemilik account UCP EunHa bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Yajeel_Myers) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

Edited October 3, 2021 by Hycen

[$Martixel$]

Selamat pagi @Hycen, ada beberapa koreksi untuk character story kamu;

1. Gunakan paragraf justify.
2. Kalimat awal setiap paragraf terlalu pendek, ganti penggunaan tanda baca titik menjadi koma.
3. Ini maksud kalimatnya juga bagaimana?

   3 hours ago, Hycen said:

   The place is lived in by dangerous people such as drug dealers,

[Hycen]

Sudah saya edit min

 

[$Martixel$]

Approved.

[$Martixel$]

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Dear @Hycen,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

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