xStormXD Posted October 1, 2021 Posted October 1, 2021 (edited) Tomma_Federal Years Started in 16 June 1999, a child born in German in a city of Berlin named Tomma "Micro" Federal, his Father its a Britain person and his Mother its a German Person, Micro its a little stupid and Quiet kid which causing him being bullied by the other kid in class or higher class and not even a single teacher care about him because most of them are more likely care smartest kid. This causing him have to leave the school and get into another school in Liverpool by his father and his mother in that school Micro have a peaceful live without being bullied. A Years later to 2014 Micro have a problem where he got trapped by the bully from the school which got him into the court he almost got sentence to jail for at least 2-4 years of prison due to robbery attempt to public and Drug Smuggling but the bully that trapped him decide to hand himself to the court because he don't wanted to bullied a person again, he do that for fun but instead he realized he have been doing wrong and said is that he its the one who do the Drug Smuggling and Robbery attempted to public not Micro, and the Bully got jailed for at least 14 years and Micro free from the Court and Prison. Year are now 2019 his mother and the father letting him to travel throught the world, Micro buys a tickets to go to United States of America and arrive on San Andreas Republic, as he arrived Micro decide to go to College on Greenglass College and Las Venturas, where he finds a new friend and live peacefully once again after in Liverpool school. Micro teachers like him because he answer some of his answer correctly without any failure. In age of 22 Micro successfully graduated in the same time his father and his mother died in a Incident, Micro being deppressed, however he decide to stay on USA to find a job until now and start to find a job and Got his first Car Buffalo however that was not too long as the Buffalo destroyed, but in a next week he got his second car called Jester and finally got a Friend. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 - 3 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: xStorm Account Forum yang saya miliki: @xStormXD Saya xStormXD selaku pemilik account UCP xStorm bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Tomma_Federal) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited October 6, 2021 by xStormXD
$therealhitman47$ Posted October 2, 2021 Posted October 2, 2021 Halo! Selagi saya mereview Character Story kamu, silakan menjawab pertanyaan-pertanyaan berikut ini Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Catatan sementara: Perbaiki bagian ini. Di sini: Quote Account UCP yang saya miliki: Isi dengan ID UCP kamu Di sini: Quote Account Forum yang saya miliki: Isi dengan username forum kamu, gunakan simbol '@' diikuti dengan username/nama forum kamu.
xStormXD Posted October 2, 2021 Author Posted October 2, 2021 (edited) 1 hour ago, therealhitman47 said: Halo! Selagi saya mereview Character Story kamu, silakan menjawab pertanyaan-pertanyaan berikut ini Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Catatan sementara: Perbaiki bagian ini. Di sini: Isi dengan ID UCP kamu Di sini: Isi dengan username forum kamu, gunakan simbol '@' diikuti dengan username/nama forum kamu. 1. Di rumah 2. Buat Baru 3. Tidak 4. Tidak Edited October 2, 2021 by xStormXD
$therealhitman47$ Posted October 4, 2021 Posted October 4, 2021 Paragraf di set jadi Justify yang logonya seperti ini () Awal kalimat dan awal paragraf diberi huruf kapital di awal hurufnya.
xStormXD Posted October 4, 2021 Author Posted October 4, 2021 5 hours ago, therealhitman47 said: Paragraf di set jadi Justify yang logonya seperti ini () Awal kalimat dan awal paragraf diberi huruf kapital di awal hurufnya. sudah
$therealhitman47$ Posted October 4, 2021 Posted October 4, 2021 Itu paragraf 1 sama 3 masih di tengah2 gitu. Semua paragraf di set jadi Justify Di paragraf 2, ada kata yang typo itu. Perbaiki!
$therealhitman47$ Posted October 5, 2021 Posted October 5, 2021 Tambahkan spasi sebanyak 5-10 kali di awal semua paragraf. Samakan jumlah spasinya juga untuk semua paragraf. Bagian ini: Quote he do that for fun but instead he realized he have been doing wrong and said is that he its the one who do the Drug Smuggling and Robbery attempted to public not Micro, and the Bully got jailed for at least 14 years and Micro free from the Court and Prison. Hapus Enter nya supaya kalimatnya kegabung.
xStormXD Posted October 6, 2021 Author Posted October 6, 2021 On 10/5/2021 at 4:26 PM, therealhitman47 said: Tambahkan spasi sebanyak 5-10 kali di awal semua paragraf. Samakan jumlah spasinya juga untuk semua paragraf. Bagian ini: Hapus Enter nya supaya kalimatnya kegabung. dah min
$therealhitman47$ Posted October 7, 2021 Posted October 7, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @xStormXD, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@therealhitman47 JG:RP Helper Team
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