PORDZZ Posted September 29, 2021 Posted September 29, 2021 Rions_Rattels Born on January 3, 2001, named Rions Rattels. Rions is a young man who has Crew in Ganton, Rions only has a father and does not have a mother. Rions father named Sharone Rattels working as a cashier at a Verona Mall adjacent to the police office. Rions and his crew-members can only dissipate and drink alcoholic beverages, Rions father had reminded Rions not to drink and get drunk anymore, but Rions ignores his father and Rions still spree with his members. One day Rions was invited by members of his crew to rob the Shoes Store, Rions was immediately excited because he was thirsty for new brand and wanted to flexing with his crews. Rions robbed the shoes and his crews using Airsoft gun, Shotgun and Desert, Rions tried to use Desert because Rions was an expert using Desert, one time his crews members immediately came to Verona Mall and robbed all the shoes there was at warehouse, Rions monitored the entrance and Rions friends took care of the warehouse. Rions friends set up equipment to open the warehouse and then came a police to the entrance of the mall. Rions immediately shot him with great power. The police were immediately shot dead by Rions, a Desert expert. Rions seriously monitored the entrance and the members prepared goods to break down the warehouse and then the warehouse was opened by its members. The expensive shoes in the warehouse is immediately taken and put into a big bag to be filled with new brand expensive shoes. Many people are really happy that Rions and his crew members then went away carrying a lot of expensive shoes and Rions prepared the car to go to his hood. Rions crew also survived not caught and that's where Rions Rattels is still a fugitive and evil person and still drinks alcohol. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 1 Tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: pordzz Account Forum yang saya miliki: @PORDZZ Saya PORDZZ selaku pemilik account UCP pordzz bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Rions_Rattels) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
humbletin Posted September 29, 2021 Posted September 29, 2021 Sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu dan mohon untuk dijawab sejujur-jujurnya. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Apakah kamu bersedia untuk dibanned apabila kamu ketahuan telah plagiasi Character Story orang lain?
PORDZZ Posted September 29, 2021 Author Posted September 29, 2021 6 minutes ago, gudaguuddd said: Sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi, saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu dan mohon untuk dijawab sejujur-jujurnya. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Dimana tempat kamu bermain sekarang? (Di rumah / Di warnet) Apakah kamu bersedia untuk dibanned apabila kamu ketahuan telah plagiasi Character Story orang lain? 1. Tidak 2. 6 Bulan - 1 Tahun 3. Baru Buat 4. Sepertinya saya punya UCP lain selain UCP ini tapi sepertinya sudah tidak di mainkan sejak lama. 5. Ya, tapi udah inaktif sejak lama dan yg saya pake forum ini 6. Rumah 7. Tentu
humbletin Posted September 29, 2021 Posted September 29, 2021 Terima kasih atas konfirmasinya. Selanjutnya, ada beberapa hal yang perlu kamu perbaiki: Ubah teks penulisan kamu menjadi Justify (rata kiri dan kanan). 5 jam yang lalu, PORDZZ said: Rions is a young man who has Crew in Ganton, Rions only has a father and does not have a mother Rions father named Sharone Rattels working as a cashier at a Verona Mall adjacent to the police office. Pada awal paragraf, beri tanda titik sehabis kata mother. 5 jam yang lalu, PORDZZ said: Many people are really happy that Rions and his crew members then went away carrying a lot of expensive shoes and Rions prepared the car to go to his hood. his Rions crew also survived not caught and that's where Rions Rattels is still a fugitive and evil person and still drinks alcohol. Pada paragraf terakhir, kata his yang saya pertebal dihapus.
PORDZZ Posted September 29, 2021 Author Posted September 29, 2021 3 minutes ago, gudaguuddd said: Terima kasih atas konfirmasinya. Selanjutnya, ada beberapa hal yang perlu kamu perbaiki: Ubah teks penulisan kamu menjadi Justify (rata kiri dan kanan). Pada awal paragraf, beri tanda titik sehabis kata mother. Pada paragraf terakhir, kata his yang saya pertebal dihapus. sudah min
humbletin Posted September 29, 2021 Posted September 29, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @PORDZZ, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@gudaguuddd JG:RP Helper Team
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