DreKanzAhmad Posted September 19, 2021 Posted September 19, 2021 Tony_Sean There was a 15 years old child in San Francisco from the Anderson family. His name is Tony. He had a pair of loving parents and an older sister that is 19 years old. His father worked in a car workshop just a few kilometers away from their home. They lived in a small house and had 2 cars. A secondhand Nissan Altima, and a 1993 Mazda RX-7 FD that his father Sean took care of every day. Sean was a very affectionate father to Tony and his older sister. Every day Sean would tell Tony about his adventures with his gray RX-7. He claimed that he and his gray RX-7 was quite famous among the local street racers as "Sean and the gray RX-7". His stories may be a little bit exaggerated sometimes but although Sean was not the best racer there is, actually was a decent street racer in San Francisco. Even after having a family with 2 children, Sean still raced at night with his gray RX-7. It's not a secret to his family that Sean was still active as a street racer, although not as active as before he had a family. Even there are times that Sean brought his daughter to some of his races. Tony was always admiring how amazing his father was but Sean never brought Tony to any of his races. Sean always said to Tony that he would have to wait to grow older like his sister before he can go to any of his races. His family was a very happy family. That's what he always thought. Tony's mother never liked it when his father went street racing nor when his father told them his story. His mother was always against the Idea that Sean still raced even though he had a family to take care of. Sean was too careless and sometimes would tell his street racing friends about his family. His mother was also a street racer before they married. She had known Sean for a very long time that she could understand Sean's every behavior. She noticed something strange about his routine of leaving the house for street racing at night. And it was not for long until she found out what Sean was up to. She then told Sean to stop going out at night with his RX-7 but she can't convince Sean even a little bit. This made her very upset because she is very worried about their family. One night, when Tony woke up to take a pee, he overheard a conversation from the living room. His mother was shouting at Sean when he was about to leave the house for a street race. Her mother told Sean to stop street racing because she was worried that if anything happens to Sean, then everything will fall apart in their family. She had known Sean for a very long time that she knew that Sean was always stubborn when it comes to racing. She also said that she noticed Sean is involved in business other than street racing. Sean worked in a workshop, but it's definitely strange that he could afford to feed his family and continue street racing at the same time. It was about time that someone from his family find out about what he was up to. Tony didn't have enough courage to continue eavesdropping on the conversation. So he ran to his bedroom, trying to sleep and forget what happened, hoping that everything will go back to normal the next day. But he was wrong. Since that night, his parents would fight more often, even there were times that they fought during the day. The situation didn't get any better. His parents started to talk about divorce, and about whether Sean or her that is going to take care of the children. Since that night, Sean never brought his daughter to any of his races at night. That made her daughter a little bit lonely and missed the atmosphere of a meet between street racers and their battle in the asphalt fight. Because of that, she would sometimes take his father's Nissan Altima in secret for a trip around the town, or a run down the hill nearby with Tony. She was a decent driver for her age. Being the child of two street racers seems like street racing is in their blood. While Sean took his daughter outside, Sean sometimes taught his daughter about street racing and his driving techniques, and that is also probably why she is a decent driver for her age. Tony's older sister passed down everything that she was taught from his father to his little brother every time she took him for a drive. That is why, although still being 15 years old, Tony was already a decent driver without anyone knowing other than his older sister. Two years have passed, and Tony's parents were still fighting. They couldn't decide to divorce because of how they still loved each other. Although they were still fighting, Sean didn't stop street racing at night for two years, and finally what his wife was afraid of from the very beginning happened. Sean didn't stop street racing and even still won most of his races. This made some of his rivals mad and someday, one of his rivals snitched to the San Francisco Police Department the information about Sean. That night, the police stormed to Sean's house looking to arrest Sean. Of course, something like this crossed Sean's mind before, and anticipating the worst outcome, Sean got himself an illegal weapon from his connection in the underground business. Sean couldn't think of what will become of his family if he were to be arrested. That is why Sean didn't yield even a little to the police. Sean resisted his arrest by threatening to shoot using his automatic rifle. Sean was not a good shot, but having a bigger firearm surely gave him somewhat the upper hand against the cops that are only using handguns in front of his house. Surrounded by the police in his house, Sean couldn't think of any way of escaping. That night, a battle couldn't be avoided. Tony and his older sister hid together in his bedroom. Sean tried his best to get out of the situation and escape, but the battle only became even tenser. In the fierce battle, both Sean and the police only thought of hitting their opponent. Sean's wife was so scared in that situation. She was not scared of the police nor the shooting that is happening at the moment, but she was scared to lose her family. She thought that the best outcome that night would be if Sean was to surrender himself to the police, so she got up from his cover approaching Sean to stop him and tell him to surrender. But fate has been sealed when that night, a stray bullet hit her in the heart. Noticing the collapsing woman in the room, there were no more gunshots that could be heard. Sean threw his weapon away and without any second thought rushed to his wife that was on the verge of her death. Sean couldn't help but regret every of his decision as his tears kept on flowing out of his eyes. The police didn't notice that Sean wasn't armed and shot him on the chest. As there were no gunshots anymore, Tony's older sister came out to check the condition. She came out just to notice that her father was not the only one that the police were trying to arrest. Apparently, Sean's rival framed their family and made even Sean's daughter a criminal. When she came out to check Sean's condition, she noticed that she was also targeted by the police. She ran quickly taking Tony with her, jumped out of the window on the side of the house, and escaped using her father's gray RX-7 that is no longer surrounded by the police because of the situation. The police weren't ready to chase her in a car, so she had one minute head start and managed to escape with her brother. That was the last time Tony and her sister see their parents, and they never heard any information about them since then. For 3 years, Tony lived with his older sister together in hiding. They took turns racing with the gray RX-7 their father left them. Being a wanted person, his sister got no choice other than earning money from working with illegal jobs such as smuggling illegal items or being a getaway driver for heist jobs. Their life was not the best nor any peaceful. But Tony didn't complain. Tony only hoped that things could stay as it is. He couldn't bear to lose his sister, the only one close to him remaining, which eventually he did. One night, after Tony won a street race in San Francisco, he received a message on his phone saying that she was trapped in her job, and telling Tony to escape to Los Santos with the help of a certain trusted person that he got connection with. After reading the message she gave him, Tony didn't give it much thought and immediately went to Los Santos with the RX-7. Although her sister was wanted by the police, Tony's name was not targeted by the police. After moving to Los Santos, through the help from his connections, he managed to change his name officially from Tony Anderson to Tony Sean. Tony had so much connection to illegal jobs and street races, so living alone wasn't a problem for him. Tony lost almost everything. Tony lost his parents, his sister, and even his home. Although having almost nothing left, Tony kept on living his life in Los Santos as a street racer. For Tony, street racing is everything. Street racing gave him a reason to live, street racing took almost everything from him, but street racing is what he has left from his family. From then on, Tony would tell people that his name is Sean. He still admires his father just like when he was small, and he won't let himself forget his father. Although his father is dead, Tony doesn't give up. Although his father is dead, the legend of Sean and the gray RX-7 still lives on, around the town, and most importantly, in his heart. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Dresamp Account Forum yang saya miliki: @DreKanzAhmad Saya DreKanzAhmad selaku pemilik account UCP Dresamp bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Tony_Sean) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
$Cherry$ Posted September 19, 2021 Posted September 19, 2021 Halo, saya @Cherry akan mengevaluasi CS kamu, selagi saya evaluasi CS kamu silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Sebutkan semua account UCP yang kamu punya: (termasuk UCP kamu saat ini) - - _ - - Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Sebutkan semua account Forum yang kamu punya: (Textbox)REPLY DENGAN CARA QUOTE REPLY SAYA INI
DreKanzAhmad Posted September 19, 2021 Author Posted September 19, 2021 9 hours ago, Cherry said: Halo, saya @Cherry akan mengevaluasi CS kamu, selagi saya evaluasi CS kamu silahkan jawab pertanyaan dibawah ini: Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak) Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange) Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Sebutkan semua account UCP yang kamu punya: (termasuk UCP kamu saat ini) - - _ - - Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak) Sebutkan semua account Forum yang kamu punya: (Textbox)REPLY DENGAN CARA QUOTE REPLY SAYA INI Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? Tidak Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? 5 tahun lebih Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? Buat baru Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? Tidak Sebutkan semua account UCP yang kamu punya: (termasuk UCP kamu saat ini) -Dresamp Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? Tidak Sebutkan semua account Forum yang kamu punya: @DreKanzAhmad
$Cherry$ Posted September 20, 2021 Posted September 20, 2021 Delete all dialogs in your CS Revamp all your paragraph into just three paragraph Apply Indent into all of your paragraph after you fix it
DreKanzAhmad Posted September 20, 2021 Author Posted September 20, 2021 2 hours ago, Cherry said: Delete all dialogs in your CS Revamp all your paragraph into just three paragraph Apply Indent into all of your paragraph after you fix it 1. Done 2. Done 3. Done
$Cherry$ Posted September 20, 2021 Posted September 20, 2021 Change your CS picture into a person selfie picture, do not use vehicle pictures
DreKanzAhmad Posted September 21, 2021 Author Posted September 21, 2021 11 hours ago, Cherry said: Change your CS picture into a person selfie picture, do not use vehicle pictures Done.
$Cherry$ Posted September 21, 2021 Posted September 21, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @DreKanzAhmad, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@Cherry JG:RP Helper Team
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