pending Francis_Ocean [belvm]

[deo4k]

Francis Ocean

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         That photo is a photo of a man whose born at 19 May 2004 on a suburbs around Kingman, Arizona he is Francis Ocean, Francis usually being called Frank by the people around him. He lives with his dad, mom, and his younger brother. His dad is an American while his mom is a mixed American and French, so Frank is an American and French mixed. Frank grown up to a metallic rock and some kinda hippies culture. His granddad runs a metallic rock band around 1970s called the Rock Kings, but his granddad Warren died at 1999s so his dad continued the band. Frank and his younger brother Adrian Ocean plays along on the band, they earned a lot of money from it. Frank usually goes to a workshop near his house, which that’s how he met the motorcycle’s world.

         Frank met the automotive world at 11 years old, he started to likes automotive around that age. On the workshop he met Jack Dawson, the guy who teaches him about motorcycles. Jack was 18 years old when Frank was only 11 years old,  but he doesn’t care about Frankie’s age. Long time story when Frank went to the workshop as usual he saw an Harley Davidson Chopper, he got amazed by that motorcycle. A day goes by, Frank starts to saves up his pocket money so that he can bought an Chopper some day. Untill Frank aged up to 16 years old, when he woke up there’s no noises outside of his room, he checked outside then there’s no people. He slept again until 1 PM, when he woke up he’s already on the backyard and there’s an Harley Davidson Chopper.

         Frank forgot that it is his birthday, Adrian surprised him with a Harley Davidson Chopper with the help of their parents. Adrian knows that Frankie is saving up his pocket money to buy an Chopper, so Adrian tells their parents that thing. Frank’s family is partying a whole day for Frank’s birthday. The next day he checked the money he saved in a safe  on his room, he counted it and the money he’s saving up was 1,347$. When he’s done counting the money he saves it to his backpack then he planned to move on from Kingman. He spent a whole day searching an city with a low cost of living, then he found the city Los Santos. He tells his parents that he wanted to move to Los Santos with the reason he wanted to study there. Because he loved his brother Adrian so much, he invited Adrian to move along with him.

 

 

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Questions

Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun

URL Namechange:

https://jogjagamers.org/topic/182818-cn-gideon_pitts-to-francis_ocean-belvm/?tab=comments#comment-1782148

 

Account UCP yang saya miliki:
belvm

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

 

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Saya deo4k selaku pemilik account UCP belvm bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Francis Ocean) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

[Reapzt]

Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)

[deo4k]

On 9/14/2021 at 5:32 AM, Manja67 said:

Oke sebelum melanjutkan ke revisi saya ingin mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan ke kamu.

1. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? (Ya/Tidak)
2. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih )
3. Apakah character ini baru kamu buat atau baru melakukan prosess Namechange ? (Buat baru/Namechange)
4. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)
5. Apakah kamu memiliki account Forum selain yang kamu pakai saat ini? (Ya/Tidak)

1. Tidak
2. 7 bulanan
3. Namechange
4. Sebelumnya ada namun sudah di blokir oleh admin
5. Ada, namun sudah tidak bisa di akses karena email yang digunakan untuk membuat akun tsb sudah saya hapus @Manja67

[Reapzt]

Oke, saya akan memberikan revisi di sini.

 

1. Buatlah 9-12 spasi pada awal paragraf
2. Gunakan format rata kiri dan kanan (justfiy) pada tiap paragraf kamu.
3. Spasi 'enter' untuk tiap paragraf tidak perlu terlalu jauh, cukup berikan 1 spasi saja.
4. Perbaiki kapital dan tanda baca pada cerita kamu.

[deo4k]

7 hours ago, Manja67 said:

Oke, saya akan memberikan revisi di sini.

 

1. Buatlah 9-12 spasi pada awal paragraf
2. Gunakan format rata kiri dan kanan (justfiy) pada tiap paragraf kamu.
3. Spasi 'enter' untuk tiap paragraf tidak perlu terlalu jauh, cukup berikan 1 spasi saja.
4. Perbaiki kapital dan tanda baca pada cerita kamu.

1. Sudah 
2. Sudah, kecuali tulisan Francis Ocean dan gambar diatas, karna kalau di justify bakalan miring
3. Itu cuma 1 space min
4. Sudah di revisi oleh teman saya sebelum mengirim CS katanya sudah benar EYD nya

[Reapzt]

Apakah selain UCP belvm apa UCP BhilyIlham dan Krisnaa milik kamu?

[deo4k]

1 hour ago, Manja67 said:

Apakah selain UCP belvm apa UCP BhilyIlham dan Krisnaa milik kamu?

Bukan, seperti yg saya ketik diatas UCP SAYA hanya belvm

[Reapzt]

Jogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @deo4k,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@Manja67
JG:RP Helper Team