RyFAL Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 (edited) Takashi Parker Takashi Parker, a person from Japan, Tokyo, 19 years old. He has both parents who love him very much. Takashi Parker has a car club association that he and his friends created. The association is very famous in the Tokyo area and is greatly admired by many people in Tokyo, every day they always practice racing in order to win in competitions related to their Association. They also every time there are certain competitions they always win and make them famous until certain people envy them, One day when my mother died because someone killed her and maybe the one who killed her was the enemy of my association. Takashi Parker and his father are shocked, from there Takashi Parker was immediately traumatized and changed his mind to enter a motorcycle alley in Tokyo, he remembered something if his uncle was the chairman of a famous motorcycle gang in Tokyo, he immediately looked for his uncle, he also found his uncle, I immediately said to my uncle if I wants to go with my uncle, my uncle asked me, "why do you want to join to my club? how about your racing career?". I told him that I was traumatized because of the problem of my old association that caused my mother to die and I wanted to join uncle's club, so I could get revenge and get protection. My uncle is happy and accept me as I am. Takashi Parker also joined his uncle. Every day Takashi Parker always hangs out with them. Joy and sorrow were felt and did not feel he had been in the motorcycle gang for 1 year. Which is where the main goal is revenge now he is not angry and does not want revenge anymore. Because he was bored and didnt want revenge anymore, he went to San Andreas where there were a lot of motorcycle gangs and car clubs that caught his attention, he went straight to San Andreas with 4 of his motorcycle gang friends, he wanted to feel what it was like to live there city of San Andreas until the end of his life, he had been in debt to live in San Andreas until he died. Takashi Parker also lives in San Andreas with 4 friends and creates a motorcycle gang with the same name as his uncles motorcycle gang in Japan. Takashi Parker is also happy to live with his friends in San Andreas. Questions Character Story Pertama: No Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 6 bulan - 1 tahun URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: RyFAL Account Forum yang saya miliki: RyFAL Saya RyFAL selaku pemilik account UCP RyFAL bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Takashi Parker) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain. Edited September 13, 2021 by RyFAL
$Lionheart$ Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Halo saya di sini akan mengoreksi hasil character stories kamu, untuk itu tolong jawab pertanyaan di bawah ini terlebih dahulu: Foto harus di atas sebelum cerita di mulai pada posisi tengah. Ukuran foto jangan terlalu besar, apakah sudah sesuai? Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. Udah sesuai belum? klik : Penghitung Kata Kamu buat Character Story ini di warnet apa di rumah? @RyFAL
RyFAL Posted September 13, 2021 Author Posted September 13, 2021 (edited) Sudah min, di layar ku dah tengah dan foto nya sebelum cerita, dan ga gede2 amat. Udah 300 kata lebih min, dah di pecah jadi 3 paragraf juga. Rumah. @resetemail Edited September 13, 2021 by RyFAL
$Lionheart$ Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Perbaiki character story kamu. Perbaiki grammar pada keseluruhan paragraf kedua. Grammar itu meliputi noun, adjective, verb, pronoun, adverb, preposition, conjuction, dan interjection. Dengan menggunakan struktur yang benar, sebuah kalimat akan menjadi sempurna. Contoh: Takashi Parker and Dad were shocked salah Takashi Parker and his father are shocked benar @RyFAL
RyFAL Posted September 13, 2021 Author Posted September 13, 2021 @resetemailMin, boleh ga, sebutin aja kata2 yang salah, soalnya aku kurang ngerti hehe (maklumin bg masih bocah)
$Lionheart$ Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 one day when Takashi Parkers mother died because someone killed and maybe was the opponent of Takashi Parkers club. Salah One day when my mother died because someone killed her and maybe the one who killed her was the enemy of my association. Benar Takashi Parker immediately said to his uncle if he wants to go with his uncle, his uncle asked Takashi Parker, "Why do you want to join uncle?, how about your racing career?", replied Takashi Parker, "Im traumatized by my club because my mother and I want to join Im here so I can get my revenge and also I can get protection." His uncle gladly accepted the arrival of Takashi Parker. Salah I immediately said to my uncle if I wants to go with my uncle, my uncle asked me, "why do you want to join to my club? how about your racing career?". I told him that I was traumatized because of the problem of my old association that caused my mother to die and I wanted to join uncle's club, so I could get revenge and get protection. My uncle is happy and accept me as I am. Benar
$Lionheart$ Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @RyFAL, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@resetemail JG:RP Helper Team
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