Febuary07 Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Baurice_Damijae The story is told to a child named Baurice Damijae, a black man who likes to spend money, he lives with his mother and father, both of his parents work as farmers and both of his parents work very hard for his son, Baurice. but this child likes to squander his mother and father's money but his parents love him very much one day his parents got a job that really helped his family's economy being a pizza delivery man and his father worked as a cleaning company, but Damijae never helped his mother and father to work instead he likes clubbing and hanging out with his friends. In 2004, both of Damija's parents became so sick that they had to be rushed to the hospital. When he arrived at the hospital, his mother and father's neighbor, Damijae, told his son that his parents were in the hospital, but the boy didn't pick up the phone instead. he still kept hanging out with his friends, and when he got home he finally realized that his parents weren't home and he asked his neighbors about it but the neighbors just said that you have to be a strong man, Damijae didn't pay attention there with neighbors and a week later Damijae finally realized that his parents had died. After that incident he chose to isolate himself to another place and look for a new family out there, namely Idlewood there are many people like him maybe thats the place for him to find his new family, and he chatted with people there and finally he could hang out there very many friends Damijae in that area and finally he was able to let go of his parents departure, Damijae was very sorry because when both his parents were critical he was not by his side and finally Damijae had to return to his former life , which was to become a street criminal. Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Thealmachzumi Account Forum yang saya miliki: Febuary07 Saya Febuary07 selaku pemilik account UCP Thealmachzumi bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Baurice_Damijae) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.
KoKoi Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Hallo, saya KoKoi akan mengurus thread Character Story kamu mulai dari sekarang. Tapi sebelumnya tolong kamu jawab pertanyaan-pertanyaan dibawah ini dengan jujur dan intens ya! 1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu) 4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) Harap perhatikan petunjuk dibawah ini! 1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. 4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
Febuary07 Posted September 13, 2021 Author Posted September 13, 2021 Just now, KoKoi said: 1. Apakah kamu memiliki account UCP selain yang kamu mainkan saat ini? 2. Apa kamu sudah baca ketentuan dalam membuat Character Story sebelumnya? 3. Apa kamu sudah pastikan nama dan ucp benar dalam penulisannya? (tolong teliti, di cek terlebih dahulu) 4. Apakah ini adalah pertama kali kamu membuat Character Story ? 5. Sudah berapa lama kamu main JG:RP? ( Kurang dari 1 bulan / 1 - 3 bulan / 4 - 6 bulan / 6 bulan - 1 tahun / 1 tahun lebih / 3 tahun lebih / 5 tahun lebih ) 1. nope. 2. of course. 3. yes. 4. of course. 5. 1 month Just now, KoKoi said: 1. Gunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline) 2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri. 3. Pastikan anda sudah menggunakan formulir untuk character stories. 4. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 5. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English). 6. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ ) saya sudah semaksimal mungkin tetapi hanya bisa digitukan saja malah mau saya rapihkan fotonya akan tetap ikut.
KoKoi Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 9 minutes ago, Febuary07 said: Questions Character Story Pertama: Yes Durasi bermain di JG:RP: Kurang dari 1 bulan URL Namechange: Account UCP yang saya miliki: Thealmachzumi Account Forum yang saya miliki: Febuary07 Ini biar rata kiri aja. 9 minutes ago, Febuary07 said: The story is told to a child named Baurice Damijae, a black man who likes to spend money, he lives with his mother and father, both of his parents work as farmers and both of his parents work very hard for his son, Baurice. but this child likes to squander his mother and father's money but his parents love him very much one day his parents got a job that really helped his family's economy being a pizza delivery man and his father worked as a cleaning company, but Damijae never helped his mother and father to work instead he likes clubbing and hanging out with his friends. Semua awal paragraf kamu beri spasi sebanyak 4 kali.
Febuary07 Posted September 13, 2021 Author Posted September 13, 2021 Just now, KoKoi said: Semua awal paragraf kamu beri spasi sebanyak 4 kali. edited, please check again.
KoKoi Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Hindari penggunaan kata "Dan" di awal kalimat.
Febuary07 Posted September 13, 2021 Author Posted September 13, 2021 Just now, KoKoi said: Hindari penggunaan kata "Dan" di awal kalimat. mohon maap min kalo saya lancang, soalnya nyambung di ceritanya lalu bagaimana saya harus menggantinya? apakah didaur ulang lagi ceritanya? Just now, KoKoi said: Hindari penggunaan kata "Dan" di awal kalimat. edited, coba dilihat sekali lagi apakah itu yang anda maksud?
KoKoi Posted September 13, 2021 Posted September 13, 2021 Jogjagamers Reality Project Helper Team Character Story Dear @Febuary07, I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website. We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character. Sincerely,@KoKoi JG:RP Helper Team
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