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Shino Zhein


 

 

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          Shino was born in America, more precisely in Los Santos, he has an uncle named Rey Chun and also a twin brother named Shiro Zhein. The three of them are a family of Chinese descent, Shino's uncle, Rey Chun, is known as the leader of a group whose activities are illegal. Because of that Shino's family is certainly feared by people around Idlewood who are controlled by his uncle, because of that Shino is also shunned by people around who are age separated from Shino, because of his uncle's background who is the head of the Illegal group. Because of that Shino has no friends besides his brother named Shiro and Ryu is also Shino's friend.

 

         Since childhood, Shino lived in an illegal environment because her uncle was the head of the Illegal-based group, and Shino was restrained by her uncle. Shino was even banned from school by his uncle. And Shino could only obey her uncle's words and couldn't argue even though Shino really wanted and got a lot of friends. Shino's daily life is only locked up in the house which contains his uncle's colleagues and group members, Shino does well by his uncle's members and is often spoken to by his uncle's member named Jordan Veng.

 

          As time goes by, when Shino is 21 years old, Shino gets into serious problems with her family. Shino's uncle, Rey Chun, was reported to have died on the same day and with his colleague Jordan Veng, Shino received news that his uncle had a shootout with his colleague Jordan Veng and there were also 3 gunshot wounds to Rey Chun's neck. Jordan Veng was also reported to have died with 2 gunshot wounds to his head, with this news Shino was in shock when she found out about this. Now Shino and his brother named Shiro are finally living together in the house left by his uncle because that is also the group that Rey Chun belongs to disbanded without leaving any information.

 

          Two months later Shino and Shiro were confused about how he could find money to survive in a very harsh city, both of them were at their wits end and finally he justified any means to get money or whether it was dangerous for him or not he didn't care anymore, from robbing, harassing, continuing to sell his uncle's drugs, the activities he did both got satisfactory results and finally he both decided to continue his uncle's work even though it was very risky for both of them.

 

 


 

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Character Story Pertama: No

Durasi bermain di JG:RP: 3 tahun lebih

URL Namechange:

Account UCP yang saya miliki: 
Valverde10

 

Account Forum yang saya miliki:

@X$ide

 


 

Saya X$ide selaku pemilik account UCP Valverde10 bersedia jika Character saya yang disebut di atas (Shino Zhein) dibanned permanent jika character story yang saya buat di atas berupa plagiat dari story milik orang lain.

  • $Malz$ changed the title to Shino Zhein [Valverde10]
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Sebelum saya mengecek saya akan mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan yang harus dijawab
1. Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya (Jawab sejujur-jujurnya, ga jujur=ban)?
2. Apakah kamu sudah membaca dan memahami ketentuan pembuatan character story dan siap menanggung resikonya?
3. Salin kata kata berikut ini. Saya (Nama UCP) siap dibanned jika character story saya merupakan hasil plagiasi.
4. Dimana kamu bermain? Rumah atau warnet?
 

Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!
1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Pengunaan huruf kapital yang baik dan benar harap diperbaiki.

Posted
20 minutes ago, BwmEvolution said:

Sebelum saya mengecek saya akan mengajukan beberapa pertanyaan yang harus dijawab
1. Sebutkan semua UCP yang kamu punya (Jawab sejujur-jujurnya, ga jujur=ban)?
2. Apakah kamu sudah membaca dan memahami ketentuan pembuatan character story dan siap menanggung resikonya?
3. Salin kata kata berikut ini. Saya (Nama UCP) siap dibanned jika character story saya merupakan hasil plagiasi.
4. Dimana kamu bermain? Rumah atau warnet?

1. Tidak memiliki UCP lain selain yang tertera diatas.

2. Saya sudah membaca dan memahami ketentuan pembuatan character story, saya akan menerima resiko bila saya melanggar ketentuan tersebut.

3. Saya Valverde10 siap dibanned jika character story saya merupakan hasil plagiasi.

4. Saya bermain di rumah.

20 minutes ago, BwmEvolution said:

Harap diperhatikan ketentuan dibawah ini!
1. Menggunakan font yang mudah dibaca (Arial, Calibri, atau Tahoma),Font size: 14, dan jangan diberikan atribut berlebihan (Bold, Italic, atau Underline)
2. Pastikan format penulisan Justify yaitu rata kanan-kiri
3. Tidak boleh ada plagiarisme (silahkan cari di internet untuk plagiarism checker, contoh: http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/ )
4. Ejaan, tanda baca, dan grammar harus sesuai dengan standard bahasa yang dipilih (Bahasa Indonesia atau English).
5. Character story minimal harus memiliki 300 kata yang dipecah menjadi minimal 3 paragraph. 
6. Pengunaan huruf kapital yang baik dan benar harap diperbaiki.

Saya rasa saya sudah memenuhi persyarat tersebut. @BwmEvolution

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Terimakasih atas jawaban yang telah diberikan. 
Dear @X$ide Setelah saya memeriksa Character Story milik kamu ada beberapa yang perlu diperbaiki.

  1. Setiap paragraf dibuat justify.
    4Wr78Qn.png
  2. Setiap awalan paragraf diberi jarak 10x spasi.


Note!!
Diharapkan untuk mengecek ulang kembali agar tidak terjadi revisi kembali. Jangan bump thread ini jika belum 1x24 jam.

Posted
19 minutes ago, BwmEvolution said:

Terimakasih atas jawaban yang telah diberikan. 
Dear @X$ide Setelah saya memeriksa Character Story milik kamu ada beberapa yang perlu diperbaiki.

  1. Setiap paragraf dibuat justify.
    4Wr78Qn.png
  2. Setiap awalan paragraf diberi jarak 10x spasi.


Note!!
Diharapkan untuk mengecek ulang kembali agar tidak terjadi revisi kembali. Jangan bump thread ini jika belum 1x24 jam.

Edited.

Posted
email_logo.pngJogjagamers Reality Project
Helper Team
Character Story

Dear @X$ide,

 

I am writing to you in regards of your recently submitted character story, we have reviewed your character story and, as a result, have come to the decision to ACCEPT your request. Please read this guide to activate your character story In-Game via our UCP Website.

We hope that you may use this character story to further develop your character.

 

Sincerely,
@BwmEvolution
JG:RP Helper Team

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